[Poetry]Darth Revan's Poetry Journal

[Darth Kalverys]

Darth Revan's poetry Journal

 

 

The Force I wield is the power of dark,

When I face a Jedi I leave my mark.

I am a monarch, the Monarch,

In fact, I am THE Lord of the Sith.

 

I slay all races from Wookies to Bith,

I darken the light,

And I rule the night,

I am the Dark Lord of the Sith.

 

From Courscant to the far reaches of Korriban,

I rule, to destroy all who oppose me...

To destroy every last remaining Jedi.

I along with my apprentice, Bastila Shan.

 

From former Jedi to newly christianed Dark Jedi,

I rule with an Iron Fist.

I kill the weak and lead an army of strength,

No matter the height or length.

 

The Force I wield is the power of black,

When I face a Jedi they go in the sack.

I am a king, the king,

In fact, I am THE Dark Lord of the Sith.

[Lord Spitfire]

I liked this. The story flowed really well.

 

But don't try to rhyme, that's my opinion. It makes the poem a little forced - most of the time, at least.

 

This is much better than Juhani's Death and your other short fics. It's pretty good.

[Darth Kalverys]

Actually this wasn't meant to rhyme... I just wrote what came to mind... ^_^

[ExiledFish]

gd gd. I like it though it does seem a bit forced.