Devil Doll Posted February 22, 2002 Share Posted February 22, 2002 I´m supossed to be working, but i was remembering a sad poem that i read like 3 years ago and i will try to write it to show it to you ( i hope my transtlation is good, any mistake was made by my dictionary ) <center><b> I received Flowers today! Today isn´t my birthday or any special day; My housband and I had our first disscusion las night; and he said a lot of cruel things that words really offend me But I know he is regreted and he doesn´t say it seriously Because he gave me flowers today. I received Flowers Today! Today is not our aniversary or any special day Yesterday at night he threw me to the floor and he started to hang me It was like a nightmare, but in the nightmares you wake up and you know it is not real; I woke up with a lot of pain and hits in all my body But I know he is regreted Because he gave me flowers today. I received Flowers Today! Today is not Valentine´s Day or any special day; Last night he punched and menace me; Nor the make up or the large clothes can hide my cuts and the hits he made me I can´t go to work today I don´t want to show my hurts But i know he is regreted Because he gaveme flowers today. I received Flowers Today! Today isn´t mother´s day or any special day Last night he hurt me again but this time, was worst. If i can leave him alone, What can I do? How can I live alone and feed the children? I´m scared, but I depend of him a lot that I´m afraid to leave him alone. But i know he is regreted Because He gave me flowers today. I received FlowersToday! Today is a very special day; Today is my funeral. Last night he finally killed me. He punched me to die, If I had the strong enough to stop him And the courage to leave him alone; If I had accepted profesional help. I shouldn´t received flowers today!</center></b> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted February 22, 2002 Share Posted February 22, 2002 i love it well done, its great the way that the author wanted to show the inner feelings of the woman that was killed... how she felt, and saw, being dead and knowing that she got flowers btw, yout dictionary is cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvilleApplePie Posted February 22, 2002 Share Posted February 22, 2002 that gave me chills... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted February 22, 2002 Share Posted February 22, 2002 actually, i would call "chills" i would call fear, because: you (EAP in this case) are the woman, you love your housband, he gave you flowers, but you know that you dont deserve or have any special date, so... imagine now this: You are dead, inside your coffin, all your parents, friends are watching you, your eyes closed, however, you can see that you have the flowers in our hand that your housband gave to you... thats the reason i love the poetry, i enjoy reading it in some points of view Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death Posted February 22, 2002 Share Posted February 22, 2002 Wow. That was really good, but it was sooooooo sad. It made me wanna cry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EvilleApplePie Posted February 22, 2002 Share Posted February 22, 2002 Originally posted by Dark Sad Shadow actually, i would call "chills" i would call fear, because: you (EAP in this case) are the woman, you love your housband, he gave you flowers, but you know that you dont deserve or have any special date, so... No, it's not *fear* because I am not afraid of any man doing that to me. It gave me chills because it happens to so many people. But *I* would never let that happen to me. I'd shoot the SOB and chop off his goods and shove them down his throat. I don't take crap from people like that. I never have, and I never will. I used to have a bf who hit me and I hit him right back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LQ. Posted February 22, 2002 Share Posted February 22, 2002 Originally posted by Death Wow. That was really good, but it was sooooooo sad. It made me wanna cry. Holy...*shudders* that was...d@mn...no words to describe it...that hit a personal chord with me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Devil Doll Posted February 22, 2002 Author Share Posted February 22, 2002 Well, this poem, make us feel a lot of things, diferent for all the people, this poem in my opinion make feel sad cause I know about some people that hit her/his partner or children, most of the people doesn´t know the problems that those persons have Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wasslera Posted February 22, 2002 Share Posted February 22, 2002 Meep!!! Made azzy cry.*Hugs her superego and gives him a cookie* Thats really good. Reminds me of someone.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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