christos200

Don't worry. Being too hard is good because you can tell the other guy what mistakes he makes and so he can become a better writer. It's just that I didn't have free time those days. That's why I did not comment on the review thread or posted a new chapter of my story.

I didn't mean to be too hard on you in my last review of your story. It's still exciting and engaging, but I got lost in some parts. Trust me, I have a reviewer on FanFiction.net who gives me quite a thrashing from time to time, but it's all for the sake of the story. She knows I want to get better.

I'd like to know what you think of the second chapter of CRUCIBLE.

I just started a new story. Here is the link:

http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=209834

Okay. Thank you. Any criticism is welcomed.

I'll have to go re-read then. Which might not be until tomorrow, I have to babysit today.

Hi. What do you think of my story? I have tried to improve it. Although i mainly write dialogs and add some scenes.

Thanks.

Your story is kind of confusing, but I do like the dialogue. Harr is my favorite character!

All of your story series are good, but i really liked the last one. I hope that soon you will write another installment. Cant wait for it.

What do you think of my story?

I'd like to know what you think of the last installment of my story series.

Thanks. I appreciate the comments on my story, because it makes me see what i have done wrong, so i can fix it.

As to my comments in the critic's thread, your work is good on the whole, but like any young writer, there are mistakes that are on the technical level that interfere, and I am not talking about what we have previously discussed. I suggest you check out a book on script writng, or better yet, watch a movie from a critic's point of view. Look at the scenes they wrote that don't feel right, and see where even a professional makes mistakes that bother their viewers.

Don't feel depressed by what I have said. My primary job here is to help you grow as an author, not rip you up when you try.

Hi. I want to say sorry if i offended you in the last thread, about reality and phantasy.

Hello there, I just thought I would answer your question in the Darkness and Honor casting call. You can have four semi-characters. but if you have any really big ideas about what to add to the the plot you should send a PM my way.