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Sypher's mind raged and his anger was boiling and yet he was serene. What he felt was anger at Revan how foolish he could be to not even consider the possibility of using the boy. His body and voice were calm as he stepped forward in front of Nalean and held out the handle to his Black Saber.

 

"Revan, you should not be so quick to judge one like that. He may have once been a Jedi but you were, twice you were a Jedi. So for you of all people to not even consider accepting him even to simply use him and dump him...I find that extremely, ignorant."

 

Sypher was calm, no fear or anger was in his voice or movements but inside the anger was flowling through him freely feeding the force inside him ready for anything Revan might pull.

 

"But if you do plan on killing him without a chance. Never give them a public exocution kill them on the spot. That is why Malak failed. Twice he could have killed you and twice you got away. It would be wise to make the mistakes your former apprentice already doomed himself with."

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"HOW DARE YOU COMPARE ME TO MALAK YO YOU FOOL!!!! I am nothing like Malak." Jak tried to calm down. "I was a Jedi once but, then I saw the power of the Sith. My mind was wiped soon after. Then once I saw the power of the Sith again I joined it again. This boy, I have fought him alot of times before. He has seen the power of the Sith many times yet, he didn't join it then. Do you really think that I should give him another chance? I am a Sith and I show no mercy. Now if he was like you Snypher, he could get a high ranking in the Sith. Now even after theese foolish words I have given you both another chance and I am also premoteing you both to Sith Masters. Now to take care of this boy." Jak draws his saber and walks up too Shi-Quin. "Tell me what his name is Snypher and Nalean. I know his name and if he lied to you then he gets execution but, if he told the trueth I will give him a chance."

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(Actually you said your real name was Eric toward the beginning.)

 

Sypher looked at the two of them then took his eyes and put them on Revan and bowed low.

"Thank you Revan I appreciate the offer and I shall accept. However think for a moment was what I said really so foolish. Think Revan you and Malak were exactly alike. You were the Master so he followed you the only difference was he had no honor what so ever and that is why he betrayed you from afar and that is why you are alive today because of his loss of honor. I suggest you do try to learn from your apprentices mistakes that is all im saying."

 

He looks to the Jedi and searches his mind and smiles.

 

"He told us his name...was Kale, Kale Hawk his real name is Shin-Quin Hawk. Whether or not Karl was his true name at one point...I cannot say.""

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(You're right. In his first post his AKA was Shi Quin Hawk and his real name was Etic. So here I go...) "HE LIES!! He is called as Shi Quin or Eric. ((or else it would have said Kale on his char creation post.)) Take him to the holding cells." Jak turns to Snypher "Sith don't have honer. Only Valor. We are brave but, we do not fight fairly. They strike with 1 saber we will block it then pull out another saber and stab them. Honerless we are. But, maybe I could make a new fleet of Sith with Honer. Yes all about Honer. You have given me an idea Snypher. If you keep up like this then I may premote you again."

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Nalaen snarls, sick of the idiocy of males, sick of this pointless bickering. Fearlessly, she steps in the middle of the three, not caring about any danger she may be in. With the confidence of the young, she extends the blades of her sabre, certain no harm would come to her.

 

"You're all fools," she spat out bitterly, her twin blades humming with an anger of their own. "For Revan to preach about the dishonour of the Sith makes me wonder if he is not a tool of the Jedi -- again. Only a Jedi would have such misconceptions and stereotypes stored in their feeble minds, created out of the need for spineless fear and control over the masses." Turning, she pointed a red blade at the Jedi. "And you. You lied to me. Either you have a good reason, or you die." Lastly she turned to Sypher and cocked her head.

 

She thought for a long moment, the Force keeping her guard up, being her eyes on the back of her head. She felt the other two, ready for any oncoming attacks.

 

Finally she spoke. "You are more intelligent than I would have ever thought." Her eyes flashed, rage over the weakness of the Dark Lord increasing. Perhaps he had once been an amazing strategist, the greatest Sith in existance; once she had been proud to think of him as her Dark Lord, and knew that Malak had usurped his mantle in a cowardly blow. But now, now he was a nothing. If he didn't redeem himself . . . Her eyes narrowed slightly at Sypher, then looked sidelong in Revan's direction for less than a second. If, she said in her head, hoping he could read her eyes, if he does anything, we strike.

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He smiled at her and curressed her cheek softly then looked up at Revan. He placed his hand on his black bladed saber just incase and watched him intently.

 

"Well now aren't we all in a bit of a situation."

 

He leaned down and whispered into Naleans ear. "And you said I was foolish to question the Sith." He looked around. "We have four options. We kill Revan and take the Sith throne from him, We die. We run, or we let him forgive us but what every it is we do. We will do it together."

 

He turned her head slightly and kissed her passionatly

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**Remember jedi do not kill and i had beheaded 3 of revans guards*****

 

 

*after all my years of containing my anger, controling my emotions I have reached my breaking point hearing Naleans words only forcing my anger to grow as my twin bladesaber hums to life in my hands a dark swirl of energy building in me my face twisting in shear anger*

 

I HAVE HAD ENOUGH.......TO HE** WITH THE JEDI AND REVAN YOU KNOW YOU ARE NO MATCH FOR ME

 

 

*in a burst of shear anger i let go in a force rage and attacks revan my saber twirling in my hands my hands my feet barely touching ground as i spin between Nalean and Phoenix the blade of my saber bearly missing them as i go straight for revans head*

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(((The Jedi have killed plenty of times. To say that Jedi don't kill is like saying Revan and Malak's meeting on the Star Forge was a get together for crumpets and tea -_-)))

 

Nalaen nearly lost herself in the kiss, eyes fluttering shut as she started to return it. Something felt wrong. Her eyes flew open and she broke away from Sypher, swinging her sabre up to reflect the Jedi's blade. Her eyes flashed. The Dark Lord's requiem hadn't been written quite yet. A premature move like this could spell disaster for them.

 

Plus, he was still the Dark Lord, and as long as she wasn't killing him, she was protecting him. It was her duty.

 

But Jedi could be so impulsive. Her chest heaved as she breathed long and deep, waiting for the Force to guide the next piece into checkmate.

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The ship Ethan and Teri had taken landed once more in the docking bay they took it from. Both left the ship with their lightsabers in hand, but were met with a far different scene than they had left. No sign of life was to be found here any longer. The Sith Troopers had all gone somewhere else.

 

"This can't be good," Teri muttered. "If they're not here, they're somewhere else, no doubt with a whole lot more of their friends."

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Sypher ripped away from her as soon as the blade came close to them and dodged it quickly. He sprung back up and looked at the fighting that ensued and saw that Nalean's blade was energized. He quickly energiized the black blade and touched Naleans softly pushing it away and shook his head at her. His eyes never left the fight and his saber always ready to strike just in case. As he looked on he spoke to her quietly.

 

"We have to wait this is their fight not ours. Revan can handle himself the next move is yours to decide but what you want to do is my decision as well."

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((Yeah Jedi do kill but, they useuelly try to avoid it.)) Revan knowing the two were right he looked in himself and saw the jedi he once was. He decided to change that. Revan jumped up and attacked Shi quin. He kicked him on the ground. "If you think you are up to it I shall give you a chance... Eric. You will not be called Shi Quin anymore becasue that is your Jedi name. So untill you select a Sith name you will be known as Eric. "So, Eric, will you join the Sith?" Jak looked back at his two descipels. "You have truely shown me the way of the Sith. You have made me realize that I was merely acting like a Jedi not a Sith. I looked at myself and I saw a Jedi. I shall change that. Your achivemnts are amazeing. They far surpass any of the Sith. Both of you now will be completely honered by Sith and Jedi alike becasuse you have made an achivment nobody has achived. That is makeing a Sith Lord look in himself and see the Jedi that he is then make him change that so that he would look at himself and see a true lord of the Sith. You are now True Sith Lords. You no longer need my teachings. Now you must return to the Star Forge and create a fleet of your own." Jak turned back to Eric, waiting for an anwser.

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Nodding at Sypher, Nalaen relaxed her stance and retracted her crimson sabre blades. She shifted her weight, watching. Though she had the appearance of a careless teenager, there was a wary, alert glint in her eye. She was ready to move, to strike at any given time.

 

Her relaxed stance, allowed her to watch Revan without alerting him; she, for all intents and purposes, was passive and complaisant. But she watched, she listened, she waited.

 

His words, once stirring, once brilliant, now sounded wounded. The will that had turned against the Jedi so many times: going after the Mandalorians, turning to the Dark Side, turning BACK to the Dark Side; that will was now a weak weed roiling back and forth in a breeze. Revan's straight spine was now as curved as an old Jedi's.

 

Her hand tingled against the metal of her sabre. It was time, the Force was screaming at her. She was sick of Revan. Once he had been the greatest Dark Lord, the greatest Sith, the greatest strategist and soldier, but no more. He was weak, he was a fool. She looked to Sypher to see if he was with her. She would die to remove this creature from the head of the Sith. And she wanted to know if she had any help in it.

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Ethan and Teri worked their way slowly away from the ship in which they had returned. By this point, neither of them really knew why they had returned. From the Force signatures they detected, Shi-quin had either been converted or killed. Still they pressed on, knowing that they had to do something, even if it was simply carrying a corpse back to the ship.

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Revan knew something was wrong. They should have headed for the StarForge immediatly. "Something wrong?" Suddenly hish ship opened fire upon Coruscant. All that remaines was the upper city. Then his ship was recieveing damage. A fleet of Jedi was comeing. "EVASIVE MANUVERS!!!!!!! Send out 400 fighters and tell each other ship to deploy 100." It wasn't long untill the ships deployed and the jedi ships were massacurred. Soon after a large ship came and opened fire. All of the Sith ships were being destroyed. All that remained was Revans. "What was that?" Suddenly the ship was damaged the the bridge was hit. Revan was hit and he didn't deflect. Revan went flieing across the room, dead! Then the ship went crashing into the near by moon of Coruscant known as Dertheg. What happened to everyone? What was the strange ship? Find out in the Next RPG known as The Derthag quest. ((Well every good RPG has to come to an end here it ends. I hope you all had a good time and you can join the next one with the same chars you used in this. And I don't mean just the same name I mean the exact person. And if you want to join it but, not use the same char just say that your char died in the crash.))

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