Mike Windu Posted April 14, 2004 Share Posted April 14, 2004 hehe, This started in another thread, the job thread. Aspiring writer am I, just thought you all might like a look at my poems. Say if you like them or not here! MY POEMS I hope to receive good responses! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdome83 Posted April 14, 2004 Share Posted April 14, 2004 I read "Cold", and it was great. Very descriptive. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Windu Posted April 14, 2004 Author Share Posted April 14, 2004 Thanks, glad you liked it. Evidently, most other people on LF don't care about poems... Oh well, I'll continue being the starving poet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Druid Bremen Posted April 14, 2004 Share Posted April 14, 2004 Since Jdome said "Cold" was nice, I read it. Awesome work Mike. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StormHammer Posted April 14, 2004 Share Posted April 14, 2004 Some nice evocative poems there. Good job, and keep it up. If it's in the heart, don't let it fade, but put pen to paper and nurture your need for literary fulfilment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdome83 Posted April 15, 2004 Share Posted April 15, 2004 Just read Exile, very well written. Silent as the Shadows Fly is quite good but creepy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joe© Posted April 16, 2004 Share Posted April 16, 2004 thats real good mike hope to see more post like this one:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mike Windu Posted April 16, 2004 Author Share Posted April 16, 2004 Hehe, thanks for all 5 people who took the time to read. I personally think "Shells" is my best, but that may be because I have an emotional attachment to it. Will keep writing, very glad to hear some people like it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MennoniteHobbit Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 I have read your poems before, Mike. They are good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rccar328 Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 I read some of them. They're pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alegis Posted April 17, 2004 Share Posted April 17, 2004 those are very nice poems, you should also try more to make ones which phrases follow up nicely (i like that technique more) than flashing phrases Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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