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lol sorry, my friends house crashed me and dragged me all over the place this weekend so I didn't work on it at all. Hmm... I might be able to finish them tonight after work.

 

 

Edit: I'm working on alot of details with skills and the Force, anyway it'll be a while before things are up and running. I just want everything to run smoothly. I suspect there'll be alot of bugs in the first game and things we'll need to balance out but it'll still be fun.

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I've been really buissy lately, just making myself buissy with regular things. I don't have time to make the game so complicated. I still like the idea and want to do it but I think I'm going to tone it way down. Like forget about all the skills and training and just make characters and play it like a regular game.

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I'm almost completely changing the game. Forget about the old character sheet, I'm making a simpler one. Forget about the skills and plots. I'm simplifying things. The story will carry on as normal but I'm giving players more freedom. Here is the new character sheet, fill it out before joining the story.

 

 

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*Character Sheet*

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Player: (Your Lucasforums user name)

 

Name:

Age:

Gender:

 

Height:

Weight:

Hair: (style, length, and color)

Eye Color:

 

Appearence: (anything about your character's physical appearence you want to add)

 

Bio: (details about your character, personality, character traits, likes and dislikes, quirks and flaws, anything like that)

 

History: (explain why your character is what and where he is, explain any relation to other characters, and any other details about his past you'd like to tell us)

 

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If you want to make an NPC to interact with, such as a family member or friend of your character, fill out a bio and history.

 

The owner controls this NPC. The bio should detail anything about their person, the history should detail anything about events in the past relating to them. Other info is just anything you feel we should know about this NPC but doesn't fit in either of the other two catagories.

 

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*NPC*

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Owner:

 

Bio:

 

History:

 

Other info:

 

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NPCs can only be controlled by their owner unless otherwise stated by the owner or myself.

 

The rules have been posted in the new thread. Read the rules and create a character and as many NPCs as you like, then you're ready to join.

 

Please discuss what you'd like to do in the story with your character in here. The plot that I am writing involves Derrik Newest becoming the first Dark Jedi and splintering the Jedi into two seperate factions. This is the begining of the Jedi Civil War.

 

Derrik is a young Jedi at the Academy on Corosant, at first he has no knowledge of the Dark side, no one does, but soon it will come.

 

 

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*Character Sheet*

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Player: Mandalorian54

 

Name: Derrik Newest

Age: 19

Gender: Male

 

Height: 6'0"

Weight: 150Ibs

Hair: short, black, messy (Pic)

Eye Color: blue

 

Appearence: Strong build, physically fit. Handsome and rugged.

 

Bio: Aggressive, impatient, rash, smart, quick, charming, cool. He hates slow learning proccesses and long waits, he likes to jump right into things. He isn't very cautious and is too hasty to attack first without assessing the situation carefully. He likes women and he's good looking but he's foolish and he fools around, he's more playful than serious.

 

History: Born on the Planet Metellos, Derrik lived in a poverty striken family in the over crowded suburbs of the surface slums. He was found by the young Jedi Ahri Jokar, who brought him to the Jedi Order where he was trained in the Force and served as Ahri's padwan when he was old enough.

 

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Owner: Mandalorian54

 

Bio: Ahri Jokar, 31 years old, male. Ahri is peaceful, compasionate, honest, he's a mentor to all young Jedi and understands the Force very well. Ahri always tries to resolve a conflict with words before violence. Ahri is a great warrior but fervently belives in a peaceful approach when at all possible.

 

History: Born on Corosant, Ahri was discovered by the Jedi at a very early age and was strong in the force from the begining. When Ahri was a young Jedi he found Derrik on the planet Metellos. Many years later, when Ahri had become a Jedi Master and Derrik was old enough to become a padwan, Ahri took Derrik to be his padwan. Ahri had one padwan before Derrik but he was killed.

 

Other info:

 

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*Character Sheet*

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Player: weiderudare

 

Name: Zatch Retylinga

Age:21

Gender:Male

 

Height:6'1"

Weight:175lbs

Hair: long, brown, thick

Eye Color: Brown

 

Appearence:

A bit more good-looking than most, well-trained.

 

Bio: Agile, Fast, Eager, Fast learner, Slightly Charming,Impatient, Dislike of slow progress, stubborness. Hates blasters.

 

History: Born on Coruscant, Zatch joined the academy quickly, and have been there ever since, training under his master, a Jedi skilled in the ways of Shi'va.

 

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Owner: weiderudare

 

Bio: Genar Hafani, 46. He hates blasters, looking at them as crude and primitive. Weaponry in total do no impress him at all, but instead, he relies on the body as the fightingtool.

 

 

History:

 

Other info:

 

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((((Finish it later))))

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Shouldn't we post what exactly is the relation between NPC and main char?

 

Also, are we still going with the idea of playing out an alternate version of the history of the galaxy, or is it going to be more normal also?

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Player: Jokemaster

 

Name: J.D. Cox

Age: 19

Gender: Male

 

Height: 5'9''

Weight: 140

Hair: short, black, thick

Eye Color: green

 

Appearence: Good looking, agile

 

Bio: More cautious than most, but playful. Suspicious of most people but acts casual. Fun-loving but thinks before acting. Paranoid and emotionally traumatized.

 

History: Lived most of his life on Corellia, during his early half he was raised by his parents. His father who was rich and prominent businessman, he lived in comfort. His father taught him how to ride speeder bikes, which had been an old habit of his.

 

When he was twelve his parents were killed in a speeder car accident. Unfortunately he was conned out of his fortune by his father's business partners and rivals, who had decided to ally together to take over the family fortune for themselves. JD was left to fend for himself on the streets. On the streets he learned to fight, and became tightly wound. He finally ended up becoming a thief, stealing valuables and spending them on food and pleasure. He also raced his speeder bike as an alternate source of money. During this time his force abilities were honed unconciously

 

He was found by a jedi named Rih after seven years of living on his own when he tried stealing his lightsaber. This resulted in a chase where JD was almost killed, and the jedi finally sensed that JD was not a malignant thief, but only someone trying to earn extra cash for living and the fact that he was force-sensitive. He finally cornered JD and gave him a choice, stay on the streets, or go to the jedi academy, where he would at least have the guarantee of food every day during his training.

 

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Owner: Jokemaster

 

Bio: Rih Dixon, 51. A jedi trained since birth, he was raised to be compassionate at all times, and is famous as one of the wisest jedi, he never uses force unless all other avenues of negotaiation are gone. He rarely lets emotion get in the way of his missions. He is considered a great negotiator

 

History: The son of two Jedi, he was trained from birth, raised to be compassionate and calm at all times. He ascended through the ranks quickly, and managed to train several padawans.

 

Other info: During the flight to corusant, he managed to successfully convince the council to allow him to take on JD as a padawan, despite not having any other training.

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Shouldn't we post what exactly is the relation between NPC and main char?

 

Also, are we still going with the idea of playing out an alternate version of the history of the galaxy, or is it going to be more normal also?

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Player: Jokemaster

 

Name: J.D. Cox

Age: 19

Gender: Male

 

Height: 5'9''

Weight: 140

Hair: short, black, thick

Eye Color: green

 

Appearence: Good looking, agile

 

Bio: More cautious than most, but playful. Suspicious of most people but acts casual. Fun-loving but thinks before acting. Paranoid and emotionally traumatized.

 

History: Lived most of his life on Corellia, during his early half he was raised by his parents. His father who was rich and prominent businessman, he lived in comfort. His father taught him how to ride speeder bikes, which had been an old habit of his.

 

When he was twelve his parents were killed in a speeder car accident. Unfortunately he was conned out of his fortune by his father's business partners and rivals, who had decided to ally together to take over the family fortune for themselves. JD was left to fend for himself on the streets. On the streets he learned to fight, and became tightly wound. He finally ended up becoming a thief, stealing valuables and spending them on food and pleasure. He also raced his speeder bike as an alternate source of money.

 

He was found by a jedi named Rih after seven years of living on his own when he tried stealing his lightsaber. This resulted in a chase where JD was almost killed, and the jedi finally sensed that JD was not a malignant thief, but only someone trying to earn extra cash for living and the fact that he was force-sensitive. He finally cornered JD and gave him a choice, stay on the streets, or go to the jedi academy, where he would at least have the guarantee of food every day during his training.

 

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Owner: Jokemaster

 

Bio: Rih Dixon, 51. A jedi trained since birth, he was raised to be compassionate at all times, and is famous as one of the wisest jedi, he never uses force unless all other avenues of negotaiation are gone.

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*Character Sheet*

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Player: Wildjedi

 

Name: Rayna

Age: 18

Gender: Female

 

Height: 5' 2"

Weight: 117

Hair: dark brown, frames her face, ends at chin

Eye Color: brown

 

Appearence: dresses mostly in dark browns, grays, and black, carries twin blasters and a single sword. Her sword is light and designed for use with only one hand. For the most part, it is decorative, but it is very sharp and she uses it if she needs to.

 

Bio: Rayna is a quiet girl for the most part, almost to the point of appearing rude, but she is very kind once a person gets to know her.

 

History: Rayna was taken from her family at a very young age to be trained among by the Jedi. She currently travels the galaxy with her master, Jessa, but they are on their way back to the Academy on Coruscant.

 

 

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*NPC*

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Owner: Wildjedi

 

Bio: Jessa, 43 year old Human Female, golden brown hair, worn in a ponytail that falls between her shoulder blades. 5 feet tall, 110 pounds.

 

History: Trained as a Jedi from infancy, progressed quickly, was knighted at 30, began training an impatient young girl when she was 33, but the girl was killed after 3 years. Jessa has been training Rayna for 7 years now.

 

Other info: carries an old projectile shotgun and a sword similar in design to Rayna's. Wears mostly lighter browns. Jessa is much more conversational than Rayna and gets along well with most people she meets, even those she just met.

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*Character Sheet*

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Player: Wildjedi

 

Name: Rayna

Age: 18

Gender: Female

 

Height: 5' 2"

Weight: 117

Hair: dark brown, frames her face, ends at chin

Eye Color: brown

 

Appearence: dresses mostly in dark browns, grays, and black, carries twin blasters and a single sword. Her sword is light and designed for use with only one hand. For the most part, it is decorative, but it is very sharp and she uses it if she needs to.

 

Bio: Rayna is a quiet girl for the most part, almost to the point of appearing rude, but she is very kind once a person gets to know her.

 

History: Rayna was taken from her family at a very young age to be trained among by the Jedi. She currently travels the galaxy with her master, Jessa, but they are on their way back to the Academy on Coruscant.

 

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*NPC*

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Owner: Wildjedi

 

Bio: Jessa, 43 year old Human Female, golden brown hair, worn in a ponytail that falls between her shoulder blades. 5 feet tall, 110 pounds.

 

History: Trained as a Jedi from infancy, progressed quickly, was knighted at 30, began training an impatient young girl when she was 33, but the girl was killed after 3 years. Jessa has been training Rayna for 7 years now.

 

Other info: carries an old projectile shotgun and a sword similar in design to Rayna's. Wears mostly lighter browns. Jessa is much more conversational than Rayna and gets along well with most people she meets, even those she just met.

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*Character Sheet*

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Player: Wildjedi

 

Name: Rayna

Age: 18

Gender: Female

 

Height: 5' 2"

Weight: 117

Hair: dark brown, frames her face, ends at chin

Eye Color: brown

 

Appearence: dresses mostly in dark browns, grays, and black, carries twin blasters and a single sword. Her sword is light and designed for use with only one hand. For the most part, it is decorative, but it is very sharp and she uses it if she needs to.

 

Bio: Rayna is a quiet girl for the most part, almost to the point of appearing rude, but she is very kind once a person gets to know her.

 

History: Rayna was taken from her family at a very young age to be trained among by the Jedi. She currently travels the galaxy with her master, Jessa, but they are on their way back to the Academy on Coruscant.

 

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*NPC*

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Owner: Wildjedi

 

Bio: Jessa, 43 year old Human Female, golden brown hair, worn in a ponytail that falls between her shoulder blades. 5 feet tall, 110 pounds.

 

History: Trained as a Jedi from infancy, progressed quickly, was knighted at 30, began training an impatient young girl when she was 33, but the girl was killed after 3 years. Jessa has been training Rayna for 7 years now.

 

Other info: carries an old projectile shotgun and a sword similar in design to Rayna's. Wears mostly lighter browns. Jessa is much more conversational than Rayna and gets along well with most people she meets, even those she just met.

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*Character Sheet*

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Player: Wildjedi

 

Name: Rayna

Age: 18

Gender: Female

 

Height: 5' 2"

Weight: 117

Hair: dark brown, frames her face, ends at chin

Eye Color: brown

 

Appearence: dresses mostly in dark browns, grays, and black, carries twin blasters and a single sword. Her sword is light and designed for use with only one hand. For the most part, it is decorative, but it is very sharp and she uses it if she needs to.

 

Bio: Rayna is a quiet girl for the most part, almost to the point of appearing rude, but she is very kind once a person gets to know her.

 

History: Rayna was taken from her family at a very young age to be trained among by the Jedi. She currently travels the galaxy with her master, Jessa, but they are on their way back to the Academy on Coruscant.

 

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*NPC*

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Owner: Wildjedi

 

Bio: Jessa, 43 year old Human Female, golden brown hair, worn in a ponytail that falls between her shoulder blades. 5 feet tall, 110 pounds.

 

History: Trained as a Jedi from infancy, progressed quickly, was knighted at 30, began training an impatient young girl when she was 33, but the girl was killed after 3 years. Jessa has been training Rayna for 7 years now.

 

Other info: carries an old projectile shotgun and a sword similar in design to Rayna's. Wears mostly lighter browns. Jessa is much more conversational than Rayna and gets along well with most people she meets, even those she just met.

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