ExtreamJedi12 Posted September 20, 2005 Share Posted September 20, 2005 Zaalbacca: Roarboar, take The Undertaker and chase after them. I'll stay here with Ash and try to find what they were here for. Roarboar: Alright. May the Force be with you. <Roarboar runs back to the academy and launches The Undertaker> Zaalbacca: Let's get started Ash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted September 21, 2005 Author Share Posted September 21, 2005 Ash- Ok, lets go into the ruins, but i feel a bad feeling about something in there. Ash and Zaalbacca walk into the ruins and find a door and immediately stopped from going into the ruins. I wouldn't use your lightsaber on the do.......... Zaalbacca ignites his lightsaber and attempts to stab it into the door and it deflect and shoots Zaalbacca 5 feet back. They go to the Jedi Academy, reporting what they found. The Jedi Council gives them a mission to search for Revan and find out what he is doing but find Roarboar first to tell him. Ash- (comlink) Roarboar come in stop chasing it and report to the Endar Spire. Roarboar- (comlink) What?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? why???? Ash- (comlink) because we were just give a mission. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 Revan leaned back in his chair as the transmition abruptly ended. "So...what do you think this...person wants?" he asked Malak Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starmark2k Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 "Perhaps he does wise to help us, but just incase we should be on our guard" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtreamJedi12 Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 Revan leaned back in his chair as the transmition abruptly ended. "So...what do you think this...person wants?" he asked Malak  (not part of story) Who are you talking about? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steven Posted September 21, 2005 Share Posted September 21, 2005 (Me) "Let the shuttle through into our hanger" Zarlak ordered "Crasscak, go and greet our guests and assign them to vistor quaters. I want to be out of this system first!" Â A trandosain went to malak and revan who walked out of the shuttel, welcome Revan and Malak. I have orders to assaing you to vistor quaters 2B. Please follow" He led the two dark jedi to a room with two beds, a holotv and other stuff "Captain Zarlak willl call for you shortly. In the mean time, please stay here." They where left alone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted September 22, 2005 Author Share Posted September 22, 2005 Ash heads to the Academy with Zaalbacca and soon Roarboar lands in the hangar. They ready up with supplies and launch in their own ship. Ash heads to the Tatooine sector and Zaalbacca and Roarboar head to a different sector in search for Revan. Ash lands on Tatooine and is greeted by Czerka Corporation. He asks them what are you doing on Tatooine Czerka Greeter- We just discovered some planet resources from tatooine that can build an awesome weapon and Star Ship. Ash heads to the shops and goes into the Czerka Office. He talks with the Officer and says that sand people are irritated by them coming and started attacking sandcrawlers. Ash agrees to help fend sand people off from the Sandcrawlers but that much Ash would only do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtreamJedi12 Posted September 22, 2005 Share Posted September 22, 2005 Not part of story: Is Revan a boy or girl? Â Roarboar & Zaalbacca land on Kashyyyk & ask some of the local wookies there if they seen Revan & Malak. They give them a full discription of them. The wookies didn't see them so they took off to continue their search. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted September 23, 2005 Author Share Posted September 23, 2005 ((occ: Boy)) Ash heads to the gate doors but the guard stops him. Guard- You have a hunter's pass? Ash- No. Where can I find one? Guard- At the Hunter's Lodge. Ash heads over to the hunters lodge, walks in, and talks to people where to buy a hunter's pass. They say talk to the Ithorian about that. Ash walks to him and before Ash says anything the Ithorian says....... Ithorian- Hello, you must be new here, I am Rayce Farelle, the lodge owner. Would you like a hunter's pass, It's only 100 credits? Ash- Sure. Ash pulls out the credits and gives them to him and Rayce gives him his Pass. Ash walks out and to the gate door and shows the guard his pass. The guard opens the doors and closes when Ash got out. Ash starts walking when he sees some warriors and he realizes it's Sand People so he rushs over to them which are huddling up behind some cactus'. And he sees a sandcrawler coming a little towards him. Ash sneaks up behind the Sand People and slices all their heads off. He rushes over to the Sand Crawler and Sand People jump out of nowhere and start running over to the Sand Crawler and beating on the door, not caring about Ash. He runs up and cuts their bodies in two and slices their heads off. He runs to the side and men start walking out cautiously and see Ash...... Czerka Worker- Where you come from and where are the sand people? Ash- I killed them for you. Worker- Thank you. Would you like to come in? Ash- sure, why not. Ash walks in and sees all kinds of tools and some cranes that are carrying things back and forth of the sand crawler. He walks and men are hard at work building the tools he was told about by the greeter. He walks to the upstairs and is asked to stay the night. Ash doesn't even hesitate. Ash- Sure, I need some rest anyhow. Ash sleeps that night on the sand crawler. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtreamJedi12 Posted September 23, 2005 Share Posted September 23, 2005 Zaalbacca and Roarboar fly to Mannan and ask the Selkath about the Republic here. They said that the was a Republic Embassy on Mannan. The wookies went to the embassy. Republic Solider: Hello. Zaalbacca: Have you seen any ancient artifacts? Republic Soldier: No, but you can go down there and see for yourself. Roarboar: Let's go. They go down to the underwater base. Roarboar: We don't even know what we're looking for. Zaalbacca: I know, but we have to find something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted September 24, 2005 Author Share Posted September 24, 2005 (((ooc: hey, Sith aren't even born yet err well no such sith empire though so no Sith on Mannan yet. Only the Republic Underwater station is down there with republic studying in it.))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtreamJedi12 Posted September 24, 2005 Share Posted September 24, 2005 (((ooc: hey, Sith aren't even born yet err well no such sith empire though so no Sith on Mannan yet. Only the Republic Underwater station is down there with republic studying in it.))) Â Ok. I'll edit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted September 24, 2005 Author Share Posted September 24, 2005 Ash wakes up and sand people are told to be running around on the bottom floor of the sandcrawler. Ash puts on his robe and grabs his lightsabers and ignites them. He rushes out the door immediately workers are dueling with the sand people which are trying to get to the cockpit of the sandcrawler. He runs toward them and slices them. Czerka worker- Thanks, ill be right behind you if you need help. Ash- Ok, follow me. Both rush to the elevator and go down and meet some other workers battling but are killled soon and Ash slices sandpeople's heads off. Ash gives his czerka partner a blaster rifle. The worker starts shooting at the sniper running in the door and kills him. Ash finishes all the sand people inside and rushes to the door with his partner behind him. he stops and is amazed by the number of sand people. He tells one of the other workers to see if he can start moving this thing to anchorhead. he agrees and runs to the cockpit. Eventually the crawler starts moving and sand people get even more angry and rush to the door to board but are stopped by Ash's partner which is back a little ways and firing at the boarding Sand People. When they start getting past the blaster shots, Ash ignites his lightsabers and cuts all who are entering. The raid subsides and Ash walks to the cockpit and the driver is just getting to Anchorhead. Driver- Well heres our stop. We need to get this Crawler back into business. Good luck. Czerka Worker/partner- Hello my name is Devon Goldam. Nice to meet you,....... Ash- Ash, Ash Urland. Devon- Well its nice to meet you. Ash- The force was strong with you in the Crawler when you were battling the sand person. You must try using a lightsaber. Devon- Why? Ash- Well you are strong with the force and you might become a hero because I'm going after Revan, because he betryed the Jedi Council. I shall be your master heres a crystal and a lightsaber hilt. Oh, and heres a new set of under clothing. Devon puts on the robes and chooses the color blue for his lightsaber hilt. Ash and Devon walk to the Sabra after collecting the money from the Czerka Officer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Wiggles Posted September 30, 2005 Share Posted September 30, 2005 Name- Jason Onasi. Species-Human. Sex-Male. Age-25. Homeworld-Onderon. Apperance-Black spiky hair,brown eyes. Faction- Jedi Council. Occupation/rank-Jedi Knight Guardian. Weapon-Bronze Lightsaber. Equipment-TSL Jedi Robe,Karakan Gauntlets. Personal Ship-The Soaring Hawk. Bio:Jason is the nephew of Carth Onasi,war hero of the Mandalorian Wars.Jason lived with his father on Onderon until it was attacked on the Mandalorian Wars.Jason's father died in the assault protecting Onderon.Jason took his father's freighter,The Soaring Hawk to Dantooine to begin training has a Jedi to avenge his father. Â Name- Katherin "Kate" Shan. Species-Human. Sex-Female. Age-24. Homeworld-Talravin. Apperance-Hair is like Bastila's but Kate has a golden tune of blonde and haves emerald eyes. Faction- Jedi Council. Occupation/rank-Jedi Sentinel Knight. Weapon-Double-Bladed Silver Lightsaber. Equipment-TSL Jedi Robe,Karakan Gauntlets. Personal Ship-The Soaring Hawk. Bio:Kate is the sister of Bastila,but Kate is training in the Jedi Temple in Coruscant.Kate is also developing a new power that might prove good to the Jedi Civil War,the Force Barrier.She has befriended Jason after saving him in a mission on the Miraluka World of Katarr. Â Remaining two come tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtreamJedi12 Posted October 1, 2005 Share Posted October 1, 2005 Roarboar: Like that? Roarboar points to an artifact in the water. Zaalbacca: Let's check it out. They put on envirosuits & use sonic emiters to stun the Firaxin (sp?) sharks. They reach the artifact. Zaalbacca: It looks old. The star map opens. Roarboar: Woah, It's a map of some sort. Zaalbacca: It's an artifact of the darkside. Roarboar: This must be what Revan was after. Zaalbacca copies down the coordinats (sp?). Zaalbacca(comlink): Ash come in, we found a map of some sort, we just copied down the coordinets (sp?), We're going to Dantooine to see what Revan looked at. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Wiggles Posted October 1, 2005 Share Posted October 1, 2005 Here are the rest Name-R3-7G. Species-Droid. Sex-N/A. Age-5. Homeworld-Talravin. Apperance-Haves 3-CFD's color scheme but he's orange in the brown parts. Faction-Jedi Council,Republic. Occupation/rank-Utility Droid. Weapon-2 Elite Watchman Blasters. Equipment-Droid Shield Mark II,Droid Modular Armor Mark II. Personal Ship-The Soaring Hawk. Bio:R3-7G is an astromech droid created by Kate to help her in space missions.R3 has easily befriended Jason,but has conflicts with the HK droid that Jason repaired. Â Name-HK-55. Species-Droid. Sex-N/A. Age-5. Homeworld-Nar Shaddaa. Apperance-Like HK-47 but crimson red. Faction-Republic. Occupation/rank-Combat Droid. Weapon-Disruptor Rifle. Equipment-Droid Shield Mark II,Droid Modular Armor Mark II. Personal Ship-The Soaring Hawk. Bio:HK-55 is an assassin droid that has been in almost every hand of criminals.Especially when he was brought to Nar Shadda by his previous owner.A bounty hunter shot him very times,and that almost destroyed him.The bounty hunter put him on the Crystal Cave of Dantooine,and flew away.Jason later found him in a mission to clear the Crystal Cave from the Kinraths. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted October 1, 2005 Author Share Posted October 1, 2005 (((oh ya heres Devon's file))) Â name- Devon Goldam species- Human sex- Male age- 21 homeworld- Onderon apperance- shaggy hair with a scar under one eye from sand people faction- other (czerka corp. military) occupation/rank- czerka corp. military/major weapon- dual pistols/ (now w/ Ash) lightsaber green equipment- jedi padawan robes personal Ship- rides with Ash Urland history- grew up on onderon protecting himself and needed a job for protection so when he was 16 he snuck into a ship and landed on tatooine and he started guarding the Sand Crawlers from sand people raids. Â Ash is ready to sit in the pilot seat when Zaalbacca comlinks him. Ash listens and then says.... Ash- (comlink) OK, I'll be heading to Dantooine, so wait for me before you do anything there. Ash starts the engine and launches into space. Ash punches in the coordinates and they blast off into hyperspace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted October 1, 2005 Share Posted October 1, 2005 ((Hey, sorry I havent posted in a while...I'm a little lost here. Can someone tell me where the DS side of the story is?)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted October 1, 2005 Author Share Posted October 1, 2005 (((DS?)))(((did you read it?)))(((you can continue from leaving Dantooine.))) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ForceFightWMe12 Posted October 1, 2005 Share Posted October 1, 2005 ((Okay, that works...)) Â "We are approaching our destination." a robotic voice came through a speaker. "Er...okay, thanks...I guess..." Revan said, watching as the blue started to fade from the veiw screen only to be replaced by the outline of a planet and stars. "Well...here goes nothing." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtreamJedi12 Posted October 2, 2005 Share Posted October 2, 2005 <The Undertaker exits hyperspace and lands in the enclave about the same time Ash does> Zaalbacca: I will go to the ruins. Roarboar: I will head back to Kashyyyk and try to find the one there. <Roarboar flies off with The Undertaker> Zaalbacca: I'll meet you there if you will come. <Zaalbacca runs to the ruins> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Wiggles Posted October 4, 2005 Share Posted October 4, 2005 Jason and Kate were wandering in the Jedi Enclave while T3 and HK were seeing droid equipment.A ship landed and from there a great and well-known Jedi named Ash and a another person got of the ship.Jason and Kate went there to greet them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExtreamJedi12 Posted October 5, 2005 Share Posted October 5, 2005 <Zaalbacca arrives> <Zaalbacca ignores the droid and does the life seed/death seed thing> <the door to the star map opens> <Zaalbacca records the coordinates> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Atomic Posted October 6, 2005 Author Share Posted October 6, 2005 Ash greets them and asks if they were new to the academy, and starts walking down the hallway to the meeting room with Jason and Kate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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