Jet Jedi Posted October 12, 2005 Share Posted October 12, 2005 ( Jacen De Koras,a jedi from the time before hyperspace flipped up and thrust down at his target... the greatest lord of the sith to date) Aaaaaaaargh! ( He fell as a lightsaber blade smashed into his knee) Sto...p thi...s. Why do I have to turn... to the si..th? I may be... a loner from... the jed..i ord...er but i'll nev..er be a sith! Aaaaaaaaaargh stop! Stop! Stop!!!!!!! Aaaaaaaaaaaaargh! ( as you may have noticed hed was being seduced to force lightning) EDIT: (someone be the sith plz) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lord-slane Posted November 16, 2005 Share Posted November 16, 2005 (thrusted a bolt of force lightning) come to the dark side.(more force lightning)JOIN THE DARK SIDE. you will have ultimate power. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted November 16, 2005 Share Posted November 16, 2005 Sorry to be a critic, but you won't get amny members here. 1) No character sheet 2) No plot line 3) No objectives 4) You should write authoritavely. Example: Instead of saying this: (thrusted a bolt of force lightning) come to the dark side.(more force lightning)JOIN THE DARK SIDE. you will have ultimate power. try this: Slane thrust a bolt of force lightning at the jedi. "Join us. Join the dark side. You will have the ultimate power." He attacked with more force lightning. Look at the RPGs called the Phantom. I joined it because it had the best story line, a good plot, objectives, rules... Pardon me please, lately I've been a fanfic/rpg critic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jediofdoom Posted November 17, 2005 Share Posted November 17, 2005 Sorry to be a critic, but you won't get amny members here. 1) No character sheet 2) No plot line 3) No objectives Agreed. you have obviously have no idea how to create a role play that will work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted November 17, 2005 Share Posted November 17, 2005 We're not trying to be harsh, just trying to help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lord-slane Posted November 17, 2005 Share Posted November 17, 2005 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted November 18, 2005 Share Posted November 18, 2005 Lol, You guys probrably hate us, but trust me, RP's are more fun when you know what you're doing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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