Diego Varen Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 The final part was good, but overall, after reading the three of them, they all seemed quite short and as Jae said in her post, some minor spelling errors, which were in all three parts, but with some editing, that can be improved. I hope you put these in the Archives. It was good seeing how Komad and Alkea were born too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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