HK-42 Posted December 19, 2006 Author Share Posted December 19, 2006 No, shed be about 27 because TSL is 5 years after KOTOR and she was 20 in Kotor plus this is about 2 years after TSL so 27 it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin Skywalker Posted December 19, 2006 Share Posted December 19, 2006 well then change Revan's age to 29.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 19, 2006 Author Share Posted December 19, 2006 i changed it to 31:xp: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 19, 2006 Share Posted December 19, 2006 Good chapter, as always Grivis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 20, 2006 Author Share Posted December 20, 2006 Sorry if this is advertising but I have posted this on the forums i have made at Here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 23, 2006 Author Share Posted December 23, 2006 Chapter 4: The Preparing Grivis walked up and entered the high council room. He then quickly took his seat. “Shall we continue?” he asked. “Yes,” Ferio said. “Of course,” He then motioned for Zeorg to speak. “Master,” He started. “We have some very bad news,” “What?” “Revan has broken out of our stronghold.” “WHAT, HOW.” “He used the force and completely destroyed it.” “I see…I am glad to say however a weakness has come into him.” “What?” Ferio asked. “A girl,” Bastila walked over to Revan and saw the datapad. “How far does it go back?” she asked. Revan hesitated then said, “Since I was found by the jedi.” “The Jedi and sith archives are gone why do you need it?” Revan sighed, “No they are not gone…they are in this room,” Bastila just stared. Revan got up and hit a small button on the wall. The wall spun around and revealed hundreds of datapads. B-Butt how?” Bastila stammered. “I went to the jedi temple on Coruscant and searched the old library. I found a chest that was filled with these; it seems they tried to evacuate them.” Revan reached over and grabbed one. “This one he said was made by Darth Traya.” He activated it. The voice a Traya filled the air, "Know that there was once a Darth Traya. And that she cast aside that role, was exiled, and found a new purpose. But there must always be a Darth Traya, one that holds the knowledge of betrayal. Who has been betrayed in their heart, and will betray in turn. That was me.” Next Entry: "I use it as I would use a poison, and in the hopes of understanding it, I will learn the way to kill it. But perhaps these are the excuses of an old woman who has grown to rely on a thing she despises." Next Entry: "I am his rescuer, as he are mine." Next Entry: "They will die a death that will last millennia, until all that remains is their code, their history, and, in the end, the shell of their armor upon the shell of a man, too easily slain by Jedi." Final Entry: "There are dark places in the Galaxy where few tread. Ancient centers of learning, of knowledge. But I did not walk alone. To be united by hatred is a fragile alliance at best. But my will was not law. There were disagreements, ambition… and hunger for power. There are techniques within the Force against which there is no defense. I was cast down, stripped of my power, exiled. I suffered indignities, and fell into darkness." “This one was mixed up a blaster shot was to close and it corrupted it.” “This is amazing, you have restored part of the sith archives.” Bastila said. “And soon all of it,” Revan told her, not knowing if it was true or not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 23, 2006 Share Posted December 23, 2006 Good Chapter as always Grivis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 30, 2006 Author Share Posted December 30, 2006 Epilogue “So why are you collecting all of this stuff for the Sith Archives,” Bastila asked Revan. “I’m going to build a new Sith Temple, but first I have to defeat the other sith,” He told her. “I see,” With that Bastila left Revan to help Valk drive the ship. “Ah Bastila,” Valk said. “Call Revan I feel a sith lord on the planet blow us, and I recognize the feeling,” Bastila called Revan in. “Revan have you heard of a sith lord named Nihilus?” Vandar reached over to the hyperdrive and switched it on. The ship blasted in to hyperspace and later left over the home planet of the Hysalrians and his. The ship approached for a landing. Vandar leapt out of the ship and looked around. He didn’t see anyone, but he knew his finding was close. Vandar for the first time realized the soft mud under his feet felt good. He knew that his species had a taste for mud, but still. It felt good. Vandar shook his head; he had to find his friend. “Ah, Vandar, good to see you,” a voice said. “And you, Master Gormo,” Vandar said to his lost friend. “Why are you here?” Gormo asked leaving the friendly voice behind. Part 2 COMING IN 2007 ______________________________________________ 1.If you don't know who Gormo is please don't ask. If you do don't please tell. It will be a main part for part to btw its not the gormo that comes up on wookiepedia, its a last name. 2.Sorry for the fic to be cut short. I promise that the saga will be long. 3.Hope you liked the fic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 Very short epilogue. But nice. I like this story however... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 30, 2006 Share Posted December 30, 2006 Part 2 COMING IN 2007 That is almost the same line I used. Anyway, I've looking foward to Part Two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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