[NSW Poetry] Darkness Cannot Die

[Darth_Velrogh]

Deep in the night a soul as awaken

Whatever he did he was forever forsaken

His thoughts were dark

And so was his heart

 

He corrupted the light

That had been forever so bright

Plunging life in a eternal night

And so, grew his might

 

He gathered up the wretched demons

That had been locked away for Eons

With them he swept the land

Destroying everything that would stand

 

The green fields are dead

Covered in the blood that had been shed

There is no hope for them to be saved

And so they were forever enslaved.

 

But one day another soul was born

And looked at this evil work with scorn

He fought the Dark Lord for many days

And seemed to be winning in many ways

 

He eventually did

But killing Him he forbid

And so He was encaged

Making Him nothing but enraged.

 

Is hate grew

But there was nothing he could do

In the land life and light had returned

And His evil plan burned

 

But one day He will be freed

And will end His evil deed

For He cannot be killed

Of Darkness and Hate he is filled

 

No one will survive…

[JediMaster12]

Very powerful. You speak of the consumption by hate and darkness. The descriptions were accurate and image stirring. A well written poem. If you want, I invite you to write any of your poetry in the "Blessings of the Written Word" thread. Other poets have written there as well and it is an opportunity to see what other people think.

[Darth_Velrogh]

Thanks, if I have an idea i'll post it there.

[Jason Skywalker]

Darkness cannot die and so can't you since this was awesome! I want to see more.