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Memories Flow

 

I wish to let my memories flow

As I am tired of waking up in a sweat

I can only bet she's lied to me

I only wonder why would she do it?

Maybe cause we never worked it out

I was never too clever to let it go

I feel so dead in my body

Feelin whenever I can go to the sandbox

with nothing to lose I ain't afraid to catch lead

My mind feels cursed livin these fake memories

I'd rather be cremated for my body

wont rot in the ground.

The last time I was even around her was so long

and I knew I didn't even belong

If there is a god may he walk with me to the gates

So then he can decide if I should be let in

Would he let me in? I never have forgave any sins

as I am not perfect nor is anyone. I'm the furthrest from it

I might as well be Lucifer's slave as I try to survive

 

I'll let my memories flow one way or another

glowin from the pleasure of knowin many people

I doubt as many people I know would weep @ the passing

No one filling up their glass with my favorite juice

It's excruiciating to go on when I aint even got somethin to roll on

I have an ambition to keep me wishin for some great times

but time will never rewind itself so I aint gon be outta rhymes

I'll keep doing what I feel is right even if they may be crimes

I've gave up it all before, letting go of a left hook that was too tight.

Leavin myself cursed instead seeing if I could ever get that champion's purse.

 

I'll do what I must to keep livin on Earth's crust.

Shall I become known or am I gon be a nobody?

How is life gon end up like this for me

When I can't get the **** to go right

 

Til Then I'll Let My Memories Flow..

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An old peice I did a while ago, but I thought I should share it with you all.

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You have a lot of emotions going on in this poem and I get caught up in it.

I would recommend avoiding using the @ sign in writing fics or poems unless you're using symbols for a specific reason.

The imagery in this poem is dark but intriguing.

I took this off my myspace blog and I didn't edit it. Thank you for the feedback. I have many more peices, most of them aren't exactly poetry but more of confronting wordly issues like racism and whatnot.

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