RaV™ Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 Memories Flow I wish to let my memories flow As I am tired of waking up in a sweat I can only bet she's lied to me I only wonder why would she do it? Maybe cause we never worked it out I was never too clever to let it go I feel so dead in my body Feelin whenever I can go to the sandbox with nothing to lose I ain't afraid to catch lead My mind feels cursed livin these fake memories I'd rather be cremated for my body wont rot in the ground. The last time I was even around her was so long and I knew I didn't even belong If there is a god may he walk with me to the gates So then he can decide if I should be let in Would he let me in? I never have forgave any sins as I am not perfect nor is anyone. I'm the furthrest from it I might as well be Lucifer's slave as I try to survive I'll let my memories flow one way or another glowin from the pleasure of knowin many people I doubt as many people I know would weep @ the passing No one filling up their glass with my favorite juice It's excruiciating to go on when I aint even got somethin to roll on I have an ambition to keep me wishin for some great times but time will never rewind itself so I aint gon be outta rhymes I'll keep doing what I feel is right even if they may be crimes I've gave up it all before, letting go of a left hook that was too tight. Leavin myself cursed instead seeing if I could ever get that champion's purse. I'll do what I must to keep livin on Earth's crust. Shall I become known or am I gon be a nobody? How is life gon end up like this for me When I can't get the **** to go right Til Then I'll Let My Memories Flow.. _________________________________ An old peice I did a while ago, but I thought I should share it with you all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jae Onasi Posted February 5, 2007 Share Posted February 5, 2007 You have a lot of emotions going on in this poem and I get caught up in it. I would recommend avoiding using the @ sign in writing fics or poems unless you're using symbols for a specific reason. The imagery in this poem is dark but intriguing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaV™ Posted February 9, 2007 Author Share Posted February 9, 2007 You have a lot of emotions going on in this poem and I get caught up in it. I would recommend avoiding using the @ sign in writing fics or poems unless you're using symbols for a specific reason. The imagery in this poem is dark but intriguing. I took this off my myspace blog and I didn't edit it. Thank you for the feedback. I have many more peices, most of them aren't exactly poetry but more of confronting wordly issues like racism and whatnot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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