[Poem]Fires of Malachor

[Lord Spitfire]

Hello, everybody. This is a short poem that I whipped up that summarizes the battle of Malachor V from the Exile's eyes. Enjoy!

 

 

Fires of Malachor

 

The adrenaline,

The bloodlust.

 

The thrill that I feel

as I rip through the broken

fields, a death machine.

 

All I feel is power.

Not myself, not my heart,

 

Only pain.

 

Only power.

 

As a charge down the fray

of Malachor, I am determined

by sheer revenge;

 

Show them the mercy

they showed the people

they conquered.

 

Tortured skies

red fields,

screams of death;

 

I remember that day.

The exhiliration,

fleets of ships outshining

the stars!

 

I forget everything.

And then, I knew

only death.

 

Tears pouring down

my mangled and

bloody face as

I thought about

 

The deaths that

my enemies have caused,

and how I was making them

taste the blood they had spilled.

 

For years, I have

prepared for this point.

 

And years later, I will

regret this point.

 

But making the

Mandalorians

feel my blade,

being crushed in

Malachor's grip . . .

 

It was worth every last fiber and ever last wound of my mind, body, heart, and soul.

[Diego Varen]

Nice poem. It really sums up the battle of Malachor V in the Exile's mind and to the reader. Is this going to be posted anywhere else?

[Lord Spitfire]

I might post it on Fanfic.net (Do they accept poetry there?), if I have time later.

[Sabretooth]

This is one very good poem.

 

I like the way you used blank verse instead to borrowing a tune and trying to tie random rhyming words with it.

[Diego Varen]

I might post it on Fanfic.net (Do they accept poetry there?), if I have time later.

 

Yes they do. I think when you post a Document, you can select Poetry Format or Story Format at the bottom of the page.

[Empress Padme]

Very good poem.Sums up the adreniline, loss,regret very well

[Rabish Bini]

Nice poem. Keep up the good work.