Fender Posted September 29, 2001 Posted September 29, 2001 Broken Sword : The Shadow of the Templars - Novel The Prolouge The Murder The Interrogation The T-Shaped Tool The Sewers Road to Rue Jarry Nico's Apartment Give me some feedback on my work. ------------------ Broken Sword : The Shadow of the Templars - Novel The Prolouge The Murder The Interrogation The T-Shaped Tool The Sewers Road to Rue Jarry Nico's Apartment Give me some feedback on my work at fender_@ironmaiden.com [This message has been edited by fender (edited September 29, 2001).]
Fender Posted September 29, 2001 Author Posted September 29, 2001 Originally posted by Guybrush122: i love your novel, its really great I've just been writing chapter 8. ------------------ Broken Sword : The Shadow of the Templars - Novel The Prolouge The Murder The Interrogation The T-Shaped Tool The Sewers Road to Rue Jarry Nico's Apartment Give me some feedback on my work at fender_@ironmaiden.com © 2001 Fender
Guest The Feral Chicken Posted September 29, 2001 Posted September 29, 2001 Heh...sweet. I have my own novel in the works, 'Not An Ideal Story'. ------------------
Guybrush122 Posted September 29, 2001 Posted September 29, 2001 likewise........i love writing novels, its about what childhood REALLY is like.....
Fender Posted September 30, 2001 Author Posted September 30, 2001 Originally posted by Guybrush122: likewise........i love writing novels, its about what childhood REALLY is like..... Part of it anyway. Whats a childhood without sports (Rugby ) or Music (Iron Maiden )? ------------------ Broken Sword : The Shadow of the Templars - Novel The Prolouge The Murder The Interrogation The T-Shaped Tool The Sewers Road to Rue Jarry Nico's Apartment Give me some feedback on my work at fender_@ironmaiden.com © 2001 Fender
NiKo Posted September 30, 2001 Posted September 30, 2001 i wont read it untill i can play the game...i'm tempted though.. oh! anyone here read the Grim Fandango Novel? man it was good.... they never finished the SOMI novel at the scummbar though ------------------ the original NiKo.
Guybrush122 Posted September 30, 2001 Posted September 30, 2001 i loved the Grim Fandango novel......loved it so much that i actually made a few revisions to it (i call it the revised version) catchy eh? i got it all on floppy.... to fender: ya, im including music, sports and all that crap......but im talking the real heavy sh*t, nobody portrays a 13 year old cursing every 5 secs............but guess what its really like....?
NiKo Posted September 30, 2001 Posted September 30, 2001 Originally posted by Guybrush122: i loved the Grim Fandango novel......loved it so much that i actually made a few revisions to it (i call it the revised version) catchy eh? i got it all on floppy.... i liked it so much i made my last years english booktask about it ------------------ the original NiKo.
Guybrush122 Posted September 30, 2001 Posted September 30, 2001 awwwwww, c'mon niko. read the thing.....it doesnt give away ANYTHING....itll be a long novel
Guest The Feral Chicken Posted October 1, 2001 Posted October 1, 2001 But..13 year old don't curse every 5 seconds (apart from the sad cases). It's more like once every 5 minutes. Don't forget pondering whether you're gay or not, puberty, girls, sex, smoking and drinking. Don't combine these into one character though, otherwise they become just slightly unbelievable. But of course you know that. ------------------
Guest The Feral Chicken Posted October 1, 2001 Posted October 1, 2001 Oh, and you can't forget depression, a feeling I know all too well. ------------------
NiKo Posted October 1, 2001 Posted October 1, 2001 Originally posted by The Feral Chicken: pondering whether you're gay or not, Ooooooookaaay...now i'm officially scared of ya feral ------------------ the original NiKo.
Guest The Feral Chicken Posted October 1, 2001 Posted October 1, 2001 And why is that? I have only experienced 4 of those personally.
Fender Posted October 1, 2001 Author Posted October 1, 2001 This topic hads gone wayward...... Damn you Nav, you haven't put chapter 8 up yet. Anyway, onyl 3 of those things so far. And let me give you a clue, one of them was the girls. ------------------ "]http://www.bszone.f2s.com/forums/ikonboard.cgi] Broken Sword : The Shadow of the Templars - Novel The Prolouge The Murder The Interrogation The T-Shaped Tool The Sewers Road to Rue Jarry Nico's Apartment Give me some feedback on my work at fender_@ironmaiden.com © 2001 Fender
Fender Posted October 1, 2001 Author Posted October 1, 2001 This topic hads gone wayward...... Damn you Nav, you haven't put chapter 8 up yet. Anyway, onyl 3 of those things so far. And let me give you a clue, one of them was the girls. ------------------ "]http://www.bszone.f2s.com/forums/ikonboard.cgi] Broken Sword : The Shadow of the Templars - Novel The Prolouge The Murder The Interrogation The T-Shaped Tool The Sewers Road to Rue Jarry Nico's Apartment Give me some feedback on my work at fender_@ironmaiden.com © 2001 Fender
Guybrush122 Posted October 2, 2001 Posted October 2, 2001 Originally posted by The Feral Chicken: But..13 year old don't curse every 5 seconds (apart from the sad cases). It's more like once every 5 minutes. Don't forget pondering whether you're gay or not, puberty, girls, sex, smoking and drinking. Don't combine these into one character though, otherwise they become just slightly unbelievable. But of course you know that. hey, you callin me and my friends sad? I curse every 5 seconds and my friend has every other word as "f*ck" ex: "Hey, f*cker, how the f*ck are you? You wanna f*cking see a f*cking movie or what? C'mon, f*ck head. There could very well f*cking be some f*cking chicks over at the f*cking movies. Lets go already! F*ck, i really wanna f*cking go!" that little example is considered the mild usage of f*ck when your around my friend........yeesh. Oh and i will include sex alcohol weed sex puberty and some guys in doubt about there sexuality....plus lesbians, gotta have lesbians. Its actually frightening at the age of thirteen is where most people in this generation would loose ones virginity....so im told. ------------------ RIP Bradley
Fender Posted October 4, 2001 Author Posted October 4, 2001 Originally posted by The Feral Chicken: Oh, and you can't forget depression, a feeling I know all too well. Ahh, Depression. A teenage boys life story. ------------------ Broken Sword : The Shadow of the Templars - Novel The Prolouge The Murder The Interrogation The T-Shaped Tool The Sewers Road to Rue Jarry Nico's Apartment Give me some feedback on my work at fender_@ironmaiden.com © 2001 Fender
helly Posted October 5, 2001 Posted October 5, 2001 Originally posted by fender: Ahh, Depression. A teenage boys life story. *ahem* boys?? like girls don't get depressed
Guybrush122 Posted October 5, 2001 Posted October 5, 2001 yep depression plays a huge role in life....
Guybrush122 Posted October 5, 2001 Posted October 5, 2001 yep depression plays a huge role in life....
Fender Posted October 6, 2001 Author Posted October 6, 2001 Ok, A Teenagers Life story ------------------ © 2001 Fender
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