[fic] The Huntress

[Rev7]

I too enjoyed this chapter even if you don't like it. Very suspenseful. Can't wait to see how Mira handles the bounty situation being that her currnet bounties own someone credits. Can't wait. Great job!

[Burnseyy]

I have a lovely little plan for the next bit, concerning the bounty. but that'll have to wait until after my holiday I think.

I won't be on as much as of tomorrow, so hopefully updates will be up. Not sure though.

[DeadYorick]

Well from reading this fic I can tell it sounds pretty good right now. It has a good amount of detail for the fic.

 

Anyway I eagerly await the next chapter

[Endorenna]

This is great! I love Mira! This is great, how you're explaining her reasons for not killing her bounties (which never made sense before). Also, mentioning what she did before she became a bounty hunter was good, as well. I never really bought that some 14-year-old girl showed up on Nar Shaddaa and instantly became "The Huntress" The tie to her past was well-placed, too.

 

I'm really looking forward to the next installment of this.

 

Edit: Your description of the Hutt was priceless.

[Burnseyy]

I didn't notice this comment - oops.

 

Anyway, thanks for the feedback! I figured everything Mira said in K2 needed a little more depth in explanation, so I put in a few ideas... also, Hutts always seemed dim and funny in my head, so I had to write it so, in this.

 

Again, thanks. Next installment is on it's way.

[Darth_Yuthura]

Here's one last request to see a great story at least not come to an indefinite close.

 

It is rare for a really minor character to have a story of their own worth reading and receiving praise such as this. I am saddened to know it will not evolve to much more than this, but I do hope that it does not fade before coming a little closer to its potential. I do hope to see a chapter three even if it requires a long wait.

 

I really like this story and hope that the author does not abandon it forever.

[Endorenna]

I second the motion.