JuniorModder Posted January 2, 2010 Share Posted January 2, 2010 Here is one of the songs from my new album "Sneak" Hope you like it! JM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sabretooth Posted January 2, 2010 Share Posted January 2, 2010 I thought it was good albeit a bit too repetitive, which made it flat. I like the tracker-sound of it all, but I would prefer it as a background to a game than standalone music. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JesusIsGonnaOwnSatan Posted January 2, 2010 Share Posted January 2, 2010 not bad! But i agree with Sabre; it was a tad repetetive, but imo not to the point of annoyance. I aslo think it would make good game music. have you got any other stuff, jm? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tobias Reiper Posted January 2, 2010 Share Posted January 2, 2010 I like it, it's nice. I would recommend extending it, though, and adding more variety into it, it seems like you copy pasted in a few parts, and as Sabre said, it'd be fitting as game music, but not as something I'd actually buy to listen to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
purifier Posted January 2, 2010 Share Posted January 2, 2010 I like it, but the tune sounds as though it might be building up to something with more umph, as if it is the intro to something much bigger and louder. Maybe you could cut it a little short, add a pause for a few seconds, and then you could add a reverse cymbal followed by one long hard and loud steady guitar riff. (not too long though) And continue it from that point with a flow of different guitar chords and rythms of your own creation, until you get a nice rock melody that you like etc. Then again, you could keep it as is, in which I agree with the others that it makes great background music for a game. Lol, anyway just my two cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuniorModder Posted January 2, 2010 Author Share Posted January 2, 2010 Thanks. It is a bit repetitive, mainly because it was rushed. I think I'll make an extended version as a bonus track on the cd. I have around 8 songs planned for the cd, half with lyrics. lol One of the songs is about Doctor Who. Another one will be composed of completely background noise (soda can opening, door closing, clapping) and vocal sounds. JM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordOfTheFish Posted January 3, 2010 Share Posted January 3, 2010 I agree with the others on the repetitive part. Other than that great job! Another one will be composed of completely background noise (soda can opening, door closing, clapping) and vocal sounds. Really? That's sounds awesome! Keep me up to date. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuniorModder Posted January 7, 2010 Author Share Posted January 7, 2010 My friend Amy is going to sing some of the songs in the album. She just moved to Texas from England a while ago. She has a great voice and will be perfect for the songs! Here are the lyrics for my song "Dreamland" Show spoiler (hidden content - requires Javascript to show) Dreamland....Dreamland....Take me to a dreamland... At the end of the day all I want to do is fall into bed I'm tired Oh so tired, and I've pain in my head. Boom Boom Chatter Chatter Chatter Click Click Boom Boom Chatter Chatter Chatter Click Click Boom Boom Chatter Chatter Chatter Click Click Boom Boom.... I've got to escape! Take me to a Dreamland! Dreamland...Dreamland...Ohhh oh.. Dreamland... Ohhh oh.. Dreamland Peace....Quiet...Contentment...Get's rid...of all....Resentment And then it's gone. (Boom Chatter Click in the background) Now I'm back to life, every word stabbing me like a knife If you wanna tell me something it better be important.. And make it quiet.. Boom Boom Chatter Chatter Chatter Click Click Boom Boom Chatter Chatter Chatter Click Click Boom Boom Chatter Chatter Chatter Click Click Boom Boom.... I've got to escape! Take me to a Dreamland! Dreamland...Dreamland...Ohhh oh.. Dreamland... Ohhh oh.. Dreamland Peace....Quiet...Contentment...Get's rid...of all....Resentment And now it's coming back.. Boom Boom Chatter Chatter Chatter Click Click Boom Boom Chatter Chatter Chatter Click Click Boom Boom Chatter Chatter Chatter Click Click Boom Boom Chatter Chatter Chatter Click Click (Boom Chatter Click continues on to the rest of the song) Why can't I get some peace and quiet here? Take me to a Dreamland! Dreamland oh Dreamland oh oh Dreamland Dreamland Dreamland oh oh Dreamland Dreamland Dreamland oh Take me to a Dreamland... The boom chatter click part represents daily noise that everyone wants to escape from. I sing it in the background. JM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JuniorModder Posted February 7, 2010 Author Share Posted February 7, 2010 Here are new songs in my album "Sneak": Action Hero Hopscotch http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n47be4VTeE4 Wistfully Waiting http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9l9FN5NNP04 Enjoy! JM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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