Crusade of the Sith Lord

[The Betrayer]

[Oh, god! There you go again. I thought you have learned your lesson already. NO GODMODDING. You don't get to take control of my character, or assume he has lost the battle I have just began. And you're controlling Revan again. :| ]

[Te Darasuum Mandalor]

srry! But your character didn't loose the battle. He can still fight! I am only trying to make this story close to cannon. You took control of my character in the last RP! Besides, I never took control of him, they just dueled, all I made your character do was fight Malak. He is still able to fight. Lets just get back to the darn RP.

[The Betrayer]

[i could tell there was a misunderstanding with my last RP post. I did not control your character at all. All references to "Sith Lord (which is my character's title) are references to CORSAIR, not MALAK. Now could you please edit your previous RP post and take this into consideration?]

[Te Darasuum Mandalor]

but can we still keep the duel?

[The Betrayer]

[Remove all the parts where my character does something. That basically trims your post to about a paragraph, so I suggest you just start it over. And, please, try to put more detail.]

[Te Darasuum Mandalor]

ok, that better now? Srry if your PC gets injured slightly. You can take it from here.

[Lord Spitfire]

((Mrcharlton, I'll let this one slide, but please, Revan was supposed to be on his way to Taris; let it be up to me to decide whether or not he decides to return to Telos))

 

Revan scanned the sight before, then looked ahead and saw Telos in flames. "Telos . . . Lord Kandor, I gave you direct orders to spare the planets surface! How could this catsotrophe had happened?" At that moment, he called upon his command of the force and lifted the two Lords in the air in an intense force crush.

 

He dug through their minds, ripping their privacy and dignity to shreds, completely exposing them to his power. Then, he realized the truth. "Malak," he whispered.

 

"Lord Malak, you have been stripped of your rank! You are now a renegade in my army, and I will have my soldiers shoot you on sight.

 

"Here's my job for you; go to Taris in my stead, and go alone. You will infiltrate the Republic government incognito and try to rally support for our cause there. If you fail, I will force you to turn yourself in to Coruscant."

 

He let Malak's unconcsious body crumple to the ground, though he knew that his apprentice had heard everything before he lost concsiousness. He released Kandor as well. "As for you," he continued, turning to Corsair. "You have alway proven yourself wise and cunning, but you have failed me in this instance. However, it was partly my mistake that I let Malak come here.

 

"You have been promoted to the First Marshall of the Revanchist; you are now my second-in command until Malak proves himself on Taris. Now, we must act quickly. Our brethren on Foerost need help, and we need to clear this planet of our ships; there will be a powerful fleet from Corellia arriving soon. I will take Admiral Karath and we will leave to Foerost to intercept the Republic reinforcments. I would like to have you along."

 

((Mrcharlton, do you understand the new scenario? Do not change the entire plan of the story again please.

 

Darth Betrayal, you have a choice to come with Revan to Foerost or to take another story path, since I know you won't completely skew it.))

[bobafett56]

Davi continued to watch as the battle proceeded. So far the battle had been going well. The enemy force's were pushed out of the base and the main battle was at the gate. Davi proceeded forward and continued to eliminate enemy force's. He shot three, hid, four, hid, two, hid, and finally ran out of shots. He took out his combat knife and cut down three more enemies before he tried slicing through a enemies Vibro sword. He watched as the blade snapped in half and rolled backwards as the enemy tried slicing him.

 

Davi drew his saber staff and blocked another strike. He then started to fight at his full abilities. The problem was that the Saber was so light, that for anyone trained to use swords would never be able to cut through anything due to never striking with force. Davi however had used Saber's before, mostly from fallen friends in the Mandolorian war, and could fight with a saber as good as a sword or knife.

 

Davi lunged forward with his staff and watched as it went through the chest of the enemy soldier. He withdrew the saber and started to cut down soldier's by him. He had a feeling that unless Revan himself showed up, he and the republic would win this fortress.

[Te Darasuum Mandalor]

Malak had never wanted to kill his Master this much! His anger was burning within him, he could have pulled out his lightsaber and easily begun his betrayal! But no, he had a job to do, to prove to his fool of a Master that his fool of an apprentice was not fit to rule such a mighty empire.

 

Malak's shuttle lifted off and set coarse for Taris where he was to infiltrate the Republic embessy. As much as Malak wanted to bomb Taris, he just couldn't. Not just because he had made that mistake on Cathar and Telos, but because Taris was his home planet!

 

Once he arrived on the surface, he was treated like an embassador, despite being a Sith. He was escorted to his chambers in one of the higher apartments in the dignitary sector. He gave a sneer and pretended to meet the other dignitaries down for dinner, but Malak had other plans. Because Taris was his old planet, he knew many people their, and one place to rally them all would be in Javyar's Cantina.

 

He marched into the lower city later that night, and saw many familiar faces, not just old freinds, but other grey Jedi once stationed on Taris before the destruction of the Jedi Tower during the Mandalorian Wars. He then spoke, "Friends, good people of Taris! I have come on behaf of the Sith! The Republic are weak, and they shall not have Taris under their command any longer. We need our own foothold in the outer rim in order to conquer the weaklings!"

 

An elderly Jedi spoke up, "But sir, what will us Jedi do?"

 

"Well my good friend! You shall all become Dark Jedi!" A cheer went up before the entire Lower City, they all marched up to the uppercity as if on a rampage. A squad of Republic troops were sent to investigate and Malak showed them the true power of the Dark Side. The people were sure convinced that this man, Malak was the right person to follow.

 

"Are their any poloticians here? I have an idea."

 

"Indeed!" a drunk looking man said stumbling through the crowed. "I'll help, Sith."

 

"I need somebody to infiltrate the administrative center and assasinate the Tarisian president, then you can replace him."

 

"Indeed, my secret service will take care of it, His Exelency is a weak fool! I will take his place, and then Taris will be under the influence of the Sith!" So the order was carried out.

 

Within two months, their was a drastic change in goverment, and Taris was under the Sith's control, for now......

 

 

"Master, Taris is a Sith World now, at least under this leadership!" Malak said one day. I have sent a message a while ago regarding other ways I can gain prestige, are you interested?"

 

Note for Spitfire: I did post a transmition for Lord Revan five or six posts ago, read it and give your input in the next RP!

 

 

Then Malak began to sing a song: "Pants on the Ground! Pants on the Ground! Lookin' like a fool with yo pants on the ground! Pants on the Ground!"

[The Betrayer]

[Now that charlton has been unfortunately banned, can I take control of Malak?]

[Lord Spitfire]

((Nah, he'll be back, so I've been told by a moderator that I'm not allowed to do that))

 

Revan walked the ashes of Telos as the Sith scoured its surface. So many dead, slaughtered. He looked up and saw that the saw was darkening, as toxins started to fill the air. He shook his head. This was his fault. It was in his name that this genocide was commited.

 

But he could not stop. Not now, while they were on their way, while he was on his way to making sure this never happened again, not until the Sith Empire emerged from the dark corners of the galaxy.

 

"Field Marshall!" he called out to his general. "Leave the planet; nothing is to be pillaged. We're leaving this place."

 

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Nelniath swore under her breath. They were losing.

 

She called to her communicator to a fellow captain; "We're under heavy fire! Seventh Battalion, move in on the left flank!"

[The Betrayer]

[Are we condoning the two-month time shift Te Darasuum Mandalor introduced in his latest post? Just pointing it out.]

[Lord Spitfire]

((Yeah, I am. That way, even he has more room to make his story and adventure as the two months goes on. Continue as you would ))

[The Betrayer]

The interception of Republic reinforcements planned by the Revanchist was a great disaster. Intelligence reported two flagships and a few other cruisers, but the Sith fleet did not anticipate the number of the Republic Navy that showed up. The number of the ships was almost ten times the projected count, destroying the advantage Revan's and Krandor's fleets thought they had. Lord Revan was able to escape as Corsair stayed, and his fate was unknown for two months.

 

It had remained a complete mystery, those two months. As the momentum of the Sith advance came to a skidding halt, those two long months saw a lack of activity from the Sith Lord Corsair. It was not just a lack of activity too, but a lack of appearance. No one, not even Lord Revan, has seen the mysterious Krandor, and a lot of conspiracy theories have been formulated around the fact.

 

The two months, however, were over. Corsair was still alive, and he was still First Marshall of the Revanchists.

 

On the bridge of his cruiser, the not-so-gigantic-but-still-elegant Tormenter, Corsair stood in front of the hologram of his master, delivering his status report.

 

"Forgive me for the two-month leave I had to take, my Lord. Unexpected circumstances arose, and as First Marshall, I had to see they were taken care of.

 

After I personally ensured you escape the space battle over Foerost two months ago, I was able to recover a fragment of Karath's fleet. Along with the Leviathan, I count three Sith ships, and I have placed them under my personal command.

 

That said and done, my Lord, I await new orders."

[bobafett56]

“Keep pushing! The battle is almost won!” Davi yelled to near by troop's. And he was right. Most of the enemy had pulled back, and all that was left now was to continue defending and fight as much as they could.

Davi cut another enemy troop down then used the fallen man's rifle to start shooting at more troops. All they really needed to do now to win is just gun everyone down.

[Lord Spitfire]

((Alright, I'll be unavailable for the next week, until next Sunday; to all of you guys, just keep the story going while I'm gone, and hopefully it will be progressed by the time I'm back ))

 

Revan nodded. "I see, Lord Kandor. It seems that I have made a lapse in judgement as to the strength of the Republic forces, and its will to fight us off.

 

Well, as you can see, the war is already underway. We have completely taken Foerost, but only singly Republic base remains, and they are fighting well. I have relayed orders to the Captain in charge of the assault on that base, and she has given them term of surrender. Whether they surrender or die, Foerost is taken and Coruscan't lifeline is cut.

 

Here is your next order, Lord-Marshall; if you return to the star Forge, you will find a fleet of Four Interdictor Class Capital ships, and the Dreadnought Deathreaver, a massive ship built off the Ravager, a great Republic ship lost at Malachor, which you may use as a flagship if you desire. You will also find five cruisers, six carriers, 26 frigates, and a total of about 5,000 fighter pilots.

 

Take this mass of forces and lead an assault on the Republic world of Endethron IV. The Republic fleet their surpasse the one you will be leading in both firepower and numbers, but we have the will of the Force on our side. We will prevail.

 

Take the fleet, and crush the Republic!"

[Te Darasuum Mandalor]

"Master, this is Lord Malak, I am checking in. I have been most succesful here on Taris lately. I am off to Coruscaunt next, am to recruit more Jedi to the cause." At that moment, a large man appeared behind Malak, he wore an opaque mask and stood almost as tall as Malak. "My Lord, this is Lord Nihilus, one of the Exar Kun Sith Maurauders I have recruited to the cause. He is captain of the Ravanger and will have his fleet assist us in any means nessisary. He only requests that Malchor becomes his base of operations along with two other Lords, Traya and Sion. What do you say?"

[The Betrayer]

As the figure of Darth Malak lit up on another hologram beside Darth Revan, Corsair Krandor decided it was his time to go. He grunted, then said to his master:

 

"To fulfill your desire is my heart's wish, my lord. I shall now take my leave."

[Te Darasuum Mandalor]

Malak had just arrived at the Jedi Temple with intensions to recruit more Jedi to the cause, most important, Bastila Shan. He knew his master knew her as a child, he was a few years older than her though. His master told him that he must get Jedi to join the cause and Padawan Shan was one of them. He was about to fullfil his destiny as Revan's apprentice.

[The Betrayer]

[seriously Darasuum, you should really try getting your feet back on the ground. Your character shifts from storyline situation to storlyine situation like crazy, and it's a bit annoying.]

[Te Darasuum Mandalor]

(What do you mean? I already finished the job on Taris, I'm not godmodding, and I am not being any other character)

[The Betrayer]

[You shift from storyline situation to storyline situation and location to location too fast and too frequently. It peeves me off.]

 

[spitfire, you really should post. ]

[Te Darasuum Mandalor]

(Its ok, if my posts tick you off, I just won't post for a while. Don't you agree it is kinda begining to get outta cannon a little? I mean, what would be cool is if Corsair is Darth Bandon or something and/or eventually becomes friends with Malak. What exactly do you want me to change?)

[The Betrayer]

[i don't want you to change anything in your content - it's fine enough as it is. It's just that you might want to get settled in a place for about 3 posts or so. ]

[Te Darasuum Mandalor]

Or I just won't post for a while. Malak is off doing his thing right now. I just wanted to get it overwith in one post.