Scorge Posted October 30, 2012 Share Posted October 30, 2012 MEDIEVAL CONQUEST Summary: Its the year 1561 and Jordan Griff, a male hunter sets out to find his mother, whom been captured by a group of forest bandits during nightfall at the Kingdom of Goldberg. As he stalks the woods looking for the bandits he encounters a strange woman named Ally…. CHAPTER 1 “I will find them!” Jordan thought angrily. It was exactly one day since the mother of Jordan Griff had been captured by a large group of forest bandits during nightfall. When the bandits raided the kingdom they had trapped Jordan in his house by lighting it on fire. He managed to escape, but with a few wounds. As he was being treated at the local medic he planned on hunting the forest bandits down to get his mother back. As she was the one who mattered to him the most in this world. Jordan Griff lived in the Kingdom of Goldberg working as a smith. His father was a veteran warrior in King Williams’s army. Jordan still mourns his father as he passed away while fighting in the field near the town of Rhodok. As the doctor poured a special antidote on Jordan’s arm, he let out a small cry of pain as the liquid sizzled in his skin. “How did you burn it when the house was lit on fire?” the doctor asked. Jordan replied “As I climbed out of the wall that was burned down, my thigh and my arm had touched the burnt wall as it had a flame that I had not noticed.” The doctor cracked a smile “As long as it wasn’t fatal, you are fine. Now you can go, I have other patients to treat.” As Jordan walked out of the medic, he approached the remains of his house. He bent to his knees and grabbed his traditional bow, and beneath that, his master craft arrows. As he examines his bow, he notices a few burn marks on his bow. A few minutes later he approaches the castle of Goldberg. As the guards give him permission to enter, he walks through the hallway and approaches King William. “I’m sorry to disturb you my king but I request permission to leave Goldberg for a temporary time.” Jordan stated. King William questioned “Reason?” “My mother has been captured by the bandits last night. And I will not let them get away with it!” King William cared for Jordan as he has known Jordan from when Jordan was born. So he thought and replied “If it means that much to you, I give you permission and I will send some of my elites with you on your journey. Good luck!” Happily Jordan said thank you and left. As Jordan came to the marketplace of Goldberg, he purchased bread, butter, cheese, and water for his journey. In addition he purchased a few throwing knives in case he got himself in a difficult situation. As he finishes up his errands, he purchases a regular saddle horse for the journey. A minute later, Jordan waves farewell to the folks of Goldberg and meets up with King William’s elites and departures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferc Kast Posted October 30, 2012 Share Posted October 30, 2012 It seems like an interesting beginning. I'm curious to read what happens next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LDR Posted October 30, 2012 Share Posted October 30, 2012 Nice story Kev! I like this intro, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warlord664 Posted October 30, 2012 Share Posted October 30, 2012 I think it's very good for your first fic. Interested to see whats next. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
battle111 Posted October 30, 2012 Share Posted October 30, 2012 Nice story indeed scorge truly good story!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
machievelli Posted November 3, 2012 Share Posted November 3, 2012 Read; welcome back Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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