Guest ZeroXcape Posted August 23, 2001 Share Posted August 23, 2001 Check out the main news page for the details on this, or simply click the image below. Be sure to let Bill know what you thought right here <center><a href="http://www.jediknightii.net/fan_bounties001.shtml"><img src="http://www.jediknightii.net/graphx/bounty.jpg" border="0"></a></center> [ August 23, 2001: Message edited by: ZeroXcape ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wardz Posted August 23, 2001 Share Posted August 23, 2001 good work bill, keep it going, wardz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acdcfanbill Posted August 24, 2001 Share Posted August 24, 2001 thanks, i've always wanted to write something, but was too lazy or something... i just got into the mood for it though, after reading vag's fiction, thanks vag oh, and cool headline picture zero! [ August 23, 2001: Message edited by: acdcfanbill ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Vagabond Posted August 24, 2001 Share Posted August 24, 2001 My pleasure, bill, and nice story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
access_flux Posted August 24, 2001 Share Posted August 24, 2001 good stuff aca daca you might have inspired me to write one as well..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elite_man2002 Posted August 25, 2001 Share Posted August 25, 2001 mabe next chapter you can leave the curses out i'm only 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
elite_man2002 Posted August 25, 2001 Share Posted August 25, 2001 mabe next chapter you can leave the curses out i'm only 11 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rapt0r Posted August 25, 2001 Share Posted August 25, 2001 to be honest i think the cursing in it wasnt really that bad, its not the type of thing that would effect anyone for life no matter what age you are Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acdcfanbill Posted August 25, 2001 Share Posted August 25, 2001 well,i didnt think there was much for cursing, i figgured it was probably pg-13, but who follows that anyway... i am pleased that people enjoyed the story, and look foward to more... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DashRendar11587246510 Posted August 26, 2001 Share Posted August 26, 2001 I really liked the story. It was kinda like the beginning of JK. Informat comes, double crosses Kyle, Kyle gets P'oed, starts following infomat. Not that it was bad or anything. I just noticed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acdcfanbill Posted August 26, 2001 Share Posted August 26, 2001 wow, i guess that is true... i never even gave that any thought... but chap2 is different from jk's storyline, i can tell you that much... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DashRendar11587246510 Posted August 27, 2001 Share Posted August 27, 2001 Hey, I wouldn't mind if Kyle blazed through a cantina, and several loading areas with a stormie rifle. Whatever. I'm lookin forward to chapter 2! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkEra Posted August 30, 2001 Share Posted August 30, 2001 I liked it. Suggestion: Instead of "oh crap" use something like "sithspawn" to keep it star warsy . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CaptainRAVE Posted August 30, 2001 Share Posted August 30, 2001 I loved chapter 2 even more than the first one ....watch that spelling though....remember to read over it aswell because spell check doesnt pick up words like though, when you wanted thought.....simple mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
acdcfanbill Posted August 31, 2001 Share Posted August 31, 2001 thanks, guys, my own personal editor-ing site!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rapt0r Posted September 5, 2001 Share Posted September 5, 2001 chapter 2 was very nicely done, hoping theres gonna be more -cheers Raps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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