Death Posted January 27, 2002 Posted January 27, 2002 Okay so...a lot of people were posting poems and I wrote some and...well here is one. I don't know where this came from. When my mom read it she freaked and I had to tell her that I never ever thought about suicide before. Maybe I should just stop writting like this but my rpg characters make me do it. Anyway... *hides* The Immortal Suicide It hurts to breath My blood flows free I feel the pain It’s mean to be I take the blade It slices deep This is the moment We all seek Blood is essence Blood is life Blood is sticking To the knife Please don’t worry Please don’t cry For I’m immortal I won’t die My blood may seep Into the floor But soon I’ll go out Through that door The blackness comes It won’t stay long I’ll be up Before the dawn The night is cold It freezes me And once again My death can’t be I open my eyes I get up slowly I fold my hands This time is holy A ritual This has become A year won’t pass Until it’s done God has spared My life again A hundred years I might die then I crawl into a cave to hide for I am the Immortal Suicide!
Guest Rogue Posted January 27, 2002 Posted January 27, 2002 Was that a comedy or sad poem? I couldn't tell
EvilleApplePie Posted January 27, 2002 Posted January 27, 2002 I really like that, Death, it reminded me of my angsty vamp lol.
Death Posted January 27, 2002 Author Posted January 27, 2002 Originally posted by Rogue Was that a comedy or sad poem? I couldn't tell It was supposed to be sad but the more I read it the more I laugh about it. Everyone thinks it's really cause it's an immortal. I think it's a sad comedy. People like it! Yay! Thanx!
LQ. Posted January 27, 2002 Posted January 27, 2002 ^_____^!! I LOVE it Death!!! It is very well written and flows so nicely. I could swear it was a professionaly written poem.
Redwing Posted January 28, 2002 Posted January 28, 2002 whoa...awesome...me likes (and more importantly, my charas like ^_^)
Dark Sad Shadow Posted January 28, 2002 Posted January 28, 2002 *clap clap clap very good, i see in you, that you have some potence in the letters
Kyle d'Tana Posted January 31, 2002 Posted January 31, 2002 *claps in his hands all the times* very good
Devil Doll Posted February 1, 2002 Posted February 1, 2002 That´s so good death!, i think i will post my stuffs too , but.... I think it will be long, I´m a writer, and my short novels are a little big for the forums but anyway, i will work with the RPG to try to make it better , a very good work Death , I liked it
Dark Sad Shadow Posted February 6, 2002 Posted February 6, 2002 ey Thats not a bad idea... i mean imagine RS the only Star Wars FORUM with poetry!!! it should be called: The RS Poetry Coffe Corner
CaptainRAVE Posted February 6, 2002 Posted February 6, 2002 Well the mods havent got anything else better to do
StaindCitizen Posted February 16, 2002 Posted February 16, 2002 Thatis very good. When can we expect more of this quality?
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