Guybrush122 Posted April 23, 2002 Share Posted April 23, 2002 My new and FINAL song about love The Last Song I'll Ever Write About You This was a long good bye Starting from the word "go" There was no beginning Just a good bye I'm walking down the road All this time without you I'm always without you And I dont care I'm living a surprise; You're gone Looks like you love him and always always You were bound to leave me You were never with me You've cheated me out of a short good bye I'm walking down the road Better off without you Because I fell in love Now, as it was I'm living a surprise; You're gone You love him and always always © 2002, Chris Atkins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted April 25, 2002 Share Posted April 25, 2002 i LOVE it!!! but what made you write it? what happened with Trish? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fender Posted April 25, 2002 Share Posted April 25, 2002 DUDE, what a song! BTW, I'll post my latest 4 up here tonight maybe. WEell, one of them you'll have to email me for, because I think I'll get banned if I post it here. It swears a leeeeetle to much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted April 25, 2002 Author Share Posted April 25, 2002 Originally posted by NiKo i LOVE it!!! but what made you write it? what happened with Trish? "oh, um ... i love my ex boyfriend now ... sorry! :-(" i guess she never loved me ...... im not letting me bug me: im getting all my depression and anger out on songs ....... like the one i wrote today: The Pool You Have Put Me In now this is all done im going to take a shower what if my radio comes with me? and im determined to soak in this awkward pool of oddity of oddity im alive again never stuck in this heartbreak soaking through the heartbreak well im doing fine doing fine without you was it always this way for you? can you say that i meant nothing? i dont care anymore not anymore you're under my skin i cant even begin to tell you how much i loved you you know i loved you now this is all done im going to take a shower what if my radio comes with me? and im determined to soak in this awkward pool of oddity of oddity yeah, i know it sucks ...... but it numbs the pain ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fender Posted April 25, 2002 Share Posted April 25, 2002 OK, Three from me. Death (A Sort fo Instrumental which has the words whispered all the way through until the first lot of deaths stop) Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death, Death. F****** F****** S***! DEATH! Pain of The Mind Slow intro: I feel the pain, Feel it wander through my Brain, It Rips my mind.... To shreds. I can't tell why, Cannot open up my eyes, The Pain con-trols... my head. -------- Chorus: I want to run, But I know I cannot hide. I want it out of me, but it dwells inside. It will control me as it wanders through my mind. -------- I wonder how, it wins its battles easily, Could there be something wrong within my mind? I know I should, be using all of my strength, to combat this evil that grows inside my brain. I'm gonna take it on man, Whether I live or I die! Gonna fight the fight boys, So you'll know that I tried! Will ya give me strength god, Try to keep me alive? Pain controls my mind... Pain controls my mind... -------- Chorus: -------- *Nice Long Riff* Slow Speaking: I sometimes wonder why I even bother going on, This pain inside of me, it hurts to bad. but If I give up and let it win, I lose a part of me, and I can't do that. I'm gonna be a great man, I'll assure you that's the truth, But only if I lose the evil part. For Evil has no form or shape, it has no place to rest, unless you let it live inside your heart. -------- Chorus: X2 -------- *Slow Lead Out* Sh*thead email me for it if you want it. I don't dare post it here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fender Posted April 26, 2002 Share Posted April 26, 2002 OK, another one.... (I wrote half of it yesterday waiting for my dentist appointment) Deserve This? So l lie there, Ashamed and Confused, Wondering why you did what you did. Are you lying there Proud of what you done Bragging 'Bout what you did to me ----- Chorus: Why, oh why, have you done this to me? You ripped out my heart and threw it away, Why, oh why, have you done this to me? Do I mean so little to you? What have I doen to deserve this? ----- When I wake up, With a heart of stone, Will I remember why I feel this way? How can I forget, You ruined my life, Is this a good deed to you? I loved you, Loved with all of my heart, Gave you all that you wanted from me. But you took it, And threw it away, It's all a big game to you. ----- Chorus: ----- Will I face you, The very next day, Will I be able to stand, your presence? Can I wait there, In the very same room, Without screaming my vengeance on you! ----- Chorus: ----- When I saw you, I knew what you felt, but I refused to ackknowledge the truth. I needed you, To feel what I felt, So I decided to ruin you. I held your life in my hands, And whispered... To the gods of our land, Help me please... This woman who has just betrayed me, Should burn in hell, burn in hell, Burn to the Bone! *Guitar Solo* So I destroyed you, Made you share my pain, Because why should I suffer alone? Now you know what, I feel like, I'm sure you regret what you done! ----- Chorus: And now, I've paid back what you owe to me, I screwed up your life, The way you screwed mine! Do you know, just why I did this? If I mean so little to you, It won't matter a bit... ----- If you lie there, Ashamed and Confused, Knowing why I did what I .... did. Copyright: Paul Andrews 2002 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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