Yar Cydoh Posted July 3, 2002 Share Posted July 3, 2002 I'm making a Lone Starr (from Spaceballs) skin. I still need to put his face in and a few minor color adjustments but here's a taste for what's in store: http://acdc.netfirms.com/lonestarr.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KMan Posted July 3, 2002 Share Posted July 3, 2002 Could you maybe show us a better angle? Like one from the front, side, back and closeup? I think that would be better to give you comments and criticism on. But what I can see is that there doesn't seem to be a good separation in values on that jacket (if that is because it was taken with 16 bit textures, that would explain). And the pants seem kind of disorganized and don't show creases or pockets or seams that clothing would have. And the hair looks blotchy and has inconsistant detail. Looks like he is losing hair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanodagiardino Posted July 3, 2002 Share Posted July 3, 2002 Yar, are you using modview? You should realy take screenshots from modview at first since you have total control on the position of your screenshots. If you don't know what modview is, download raven's editing tools, it's included. You can find the link of the tools in the sticky resources thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucko Mabri Posted July 4, 2002 Share Posted July 4, 2002 From the back it looks great! Use the schwartz! -Lucko Mabri Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 4, 2002 Author Share Posted July 4, 2002 OK. I'll try and get a better screenshot with that modview program. And I do need to work on the pants. Thanks for your comments! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 4, 2002 Author Share Posted July 4, 2002 if that is because it was taken with 16 bit textures, that would explain Yup. My color depth is set at 16bit. I'll see if I can get a 32bit screenshot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vanexel711 Posted July 4, 2002 Share Posted July 4, 2002 'nuff said. Kareem (Liquid Schwartz) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 4, 2002 Author Share Posted July 4, 2002 UPDATE: Here's a couple better screenshots of the skin. Fixed the pants and started work on his face. http://www.drunkensanta.50g.com/lonestarr2.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucko Mabri Posted July 4, 2002 Share Posted July 4, 2002 Skin looks great besides the face-skin issue -Lucko Mabri Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 4, 2002 Author Share Posted July 4, 2002 OK this is how I think I'm going to release it. Unless you think I should change or improve on anything: http://www.drunkensanta.50g.com/lonestarr3.jpg PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KMan Posted July 4, 2002 Share Posted July 4, 2002 To start with, go here: QBranch fabric Tutorial And fix those nasty lookin pants. More will come when you fix that up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HapSlash Posted July 4, 2002 Share Posted July 4, 2002 I think it's looking pretty good, I especially like the face and the back of the jacket. The pants do look like they need to be worked on, maybe look at some of the textures from the game to see how they're done. The boots could use a little more detail as well. Adding the seam lines, some laces, and a bit of shading could really make them look fantastic. -HapSlash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nanodagiardino Posted July 4, 2002 Share Posted July 4, 2002 There is something funny about the gaze. I don't know if it's the distortion but is eyes make him look like a mad berserker in a frenzy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 4, 2002 Author Share Posted July 4, 2002 The boots could use a little more detail as well. Adding the seam lines, some laces, and a bit of shading could really make them look fantastic. I'm leaving the boots alone becuase he wears boots with no laces. Just cowboy boots. There is something funny about the gaze. I don't know if it's the distortion but is eyes make him look like a mad berserker in a frenzy. If you look closly you'll see that the eye lids are way to bright making him look a little "funky" I'm starting work on the pants right now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 4, 2002 Author Share Posted July 4, 2002 How is this for the pants, kman? http://www.drunkensanta.50g.com/lonestarr4.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KMan Posted July 4, 2002 Share Posted July 4, 2002 Aboot half-way. Need to add in those dark darks, and then a few highlights. Also, I can hardly tell that there are any seams on those pants. At least you are improving. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrevHimself Posted July 4, 2002 Share Posted July 4, 2002 one thing i think really needs fixing is the hair going over on to his forehead, it doesnt match at all with the hair on his head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 5, 2002 Author Share Posted July 5, 2002 Originally posted by kman@polycount Aboot half-way. Need to add in those dark darks, and then a few highlights. Also, I can hardly tell that there are any seams on those pants. At least you are improving. How is this: http://acdc.netfirms.com/lonestarr5.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 5, 2002 Author Share Posted July 5, 2002 OK I wasn't happy with that last pic so I used a smaller brush for the darks: http://acdc.netfirms.com/lonestarr6.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 5, 2002 Author Share Posted July 5, 2002 That still doesn't look right. As you can see I'm not a master at Photoshop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 5, 2002 Author Share Posted July 5, 2002 Well, thanks for all of your help kman but I'm just going to use Kyle's legs. I'm not too swift with Photoshop. I'm just going to work on the hair and then release it as it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 7, 2002 Author Share Posted July 7, 2002 The skin is ready to download at http://www.jk2files.com/file.info?ID=3696 ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kranckor Posted July 7, 2002 Share Posted July 7, 2002 GREAT! Now get working on Colonel Sanders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yar Cydoh Posted July 7, 2002 Author Share Posted July 7, 2002 If someone made a model then I would make the skin! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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