bleek Posted August 18, 2002 Share Posted August 18, 2002 My first model ever! Yes....I need to fix some things but I just wanted to get up some pics of him. Critiscim wanted! Mabey his horns need to be bigger:confused: . Sasee Tiin err Saesee Tiin I meant..i think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rex_Raptor__ Posted August 18, 2002 Share Posted August 18, 2002 it looks like jelly with the color purple:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BradFu Posted August 18, 2002 Share Posted August 18, 2002 Good start. The face is going to need a lot of work, though. Eyes need to be farther apart, I would make the head not as tall, and the bridge of his nose needs to come up between the eyes and meet his forehead. You might want to work on making the horn curves smoother. Right now they look almost like they're head-tails resting on his shoulders. Since the head is what will make this Saesee Tiin, you should put a lot of effort into making it as precise a match as possible. I would also recomend ditching the folds at the ends of his sleeves. Long, baggy sleeves like that wouldn't bunch up, especially at the ends. I would make them featureless and then use the skin to show wrinkles/folds. This will save you a bunch of polys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dreamer Posted August 18, 2002 Share Posted August 18, 2002 face needs to be narrower, lift the chin higher and smaller Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleek Posted August 18, 2002 Author Share Posted August 18, 2002 Thx for the help. About the sleaves though...I added the things on the ends cuz I couldn't make it sorta sink inside at the end of the arms. Instead it was just a flat surface at the ends of the arms. Mabey cuz of the shape I used...might need to fix that . I'll add some hands and feet and work on his head a lot more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midgit Yoda Posted August 18, 2002 Share Posted August 18, 2002 you need to spread the eye's and brows apart a bit and make the horns a bit bigger and make em hang a tad bit lower on his chest. Also on the cloak my might wanna add a little bit of depth. I mean like make it a little tighter on him so he doesn't looks so, plain. Also maybe make his chest a little bit smaller. I am impressed though, that's a good first model (my first sucked royaly) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleek Posted August 18, 2002 Author Share Posted August 18, 2002 I've worked on it a bit more..changing around facial things. I think its not his horns that need to be bigger, but his face needs to be not so wide. I got a pic of him facing the front...its only a small one though and he has his hood on. If anyone can find a good front view of his face..that would be nice. And also I dun really know what his belt looks like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeAndTheBots Posted August 18, 2002 Share Posted August 18, 2002 I think the horns should be a little smoother and his eyes should be a little but farther apart. But aside from that he looks great, keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BradFu Posted August 18, 2002 Share Posted August 18, 2002 Here's one that might be helpful for the head: http://www.starwars.com/databank/character/saeseetiin/index_movie.html Not a direct front shot, but you can pick up a lot of the detail for his head. Here's one a bit more distant, but has good front, side, back views: http://www.theforce.net/multimedia/archive/Images/Episode_1/Characters/Jedi_Council/Saesee_Tiin/saesee.jpg Thats the best I could find for now, hope it helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleek Posted August 19, 2002 Author Share Posted August 19, 2002 Thx for the pics...2nd one is a huge help:D . Need some more crits on the face. I know the body needs work...chest big time:mad: . I'm having some trouble shaping the face perfectly.....I move one vertex and it messes it all up:p . Oh well I'm trying. Saesee Tiin I think once I start skinning him...I should be able to make him look a hell of a lot better...his skin is pretty kewl lookin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deetox187 Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 Wow i was expecting to see some mediocre newbie model but that actually looks pretty darn good! nice work bleek. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleek Posted August 19, 2002 Author Share Posted August 19, 2002 thx. I was comparing my model and the picture....I dunno but mabey I should bring out the entire front part of his face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deetox187 Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 i think you may be right, but it might be easier to tell if you posted some side view pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BradFu Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 Looking better I would make his brow considerably thicker, and blend it with his forehead more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZBomber Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 Nice.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SithMaster01 Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 Definitly doesn't look mediocre. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deetox187 Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 http://www.fortunecity.com/village/martina/460/jedi/saesee.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleek Posted August 19, 2002 Author Share Posted August 19, 2002 thx for the great pic of him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MikeAndTheBots Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 Wow, looking better. I think his face should be a little smoother, his cheeks shouldn't pop up as much, a little less...rigid (is that a good word?). But still, so far so good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
12thMonkey Posted August 19, 2002 Share Posted August 19, 2002 He is coming along nicely but you need to make his horns thicker at the top and his horns curl slightly forward at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bleek Posted August 22, 2002 Author Share Posted August 22, 2002 Well I took a break from the model a bit...but I have fixed his head a bit more. May be asking a lot but...could I send my model to someone so they can model the hands and feet for me...and UVW map it....unless there is a good tutorial on UVW mapping that i have yet to see. -For the hands...do I need to get the skeleton or whatever to help model them...cuz I never did anything like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mariners2001 Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 Here's a link to a gigantic UVW Mapping Video tutorial: http://www.bobotheseal.com/vids/UVmap_tut01_big.avi Hope that helps you out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wes Marrakesh Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 looks good! I have tow suggestions: 1. Maybe change the color of the pieces to maek it a little easier to look at details (he looks like he's made out of clay in red, not that it's a bad thing ) 2. Make his chest flater. How should I put this..... *thinks hard*. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
§ith Lord Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 Make his horns curve out alittle more as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
keo718 Posted August 22, 2002 Share Posted August 22, 2002 Also his head should be bigger in proportion to his body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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