christos200

Don't worry. Being too hard is good because you can tell the other guy what mistakes he makes and so he can become a better writer. It's just that I didn't have free time those days. That's why I did not comment on the review thread or posted a new chapter of my story.

I just started a new story. Here is the link:

http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?t=209834

Okay. Thank you. Any criticism is welcomed.

Hi. What do you think of my story? I have tried to improve it. Although i mainly write dialogs and add some scenes.

Thanks.

All of your story series are good, but i really liked the last one. I hope that soon you will write another installment. Cant wait for it.

What do you think of my story?

Thanks. I appreciate the comments on my story, because it makes me see what i have done wrong, so i can fix it.

Hi. I want to say sorry if i offended you in the last thread, about reality and phantasy.

i finished my fic STAR WARS :RETURN OF THE SITH http://www.lucasforums.com/showthread.php?p=2759759#post2759759

can you review it?