Aristotélēsticus Posted May 22, 2005 Share Posted May 22, 2005 Hi fellows, two days ago when I was writing a story about star wars, I had a brilliant idea: I'll share it with you as rpg game thus we could help each others and make it a great story, so I've decided to post it here so you could see it, but first I'll post the game chronicles for it'll be the characters information about the past….well the story will take us to a new areas of the star wars universe, to the real sith after Kotor 3, so there are no Jedi only sith, we will see a different sith order, the real sith areholders of a certain lore not only pure evil, we will enter the soul of the sith and embrace their dogma, this story is about love and hate, revenge, and forgiveness, emotions and peace...etc…..so tell me your thoughts then I'll post the chronicles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristotélēsticus Posted May 22, 2005 Author Share Posted May 22, 2005 The Chronicles of the Real Sith : Part I The Real Sith (the very beginning): For a long time ago, the sith lived in the planet of Korriban, they were a primitive people. Fighting with each others, they had a prophecy tells that their God will send them his prophet from the sky, who will bring peace to their lives and lead them to a great glory, and after a period of time the DARK JEDIs landed on the planet of Korriban, amazed by their magic and forces, the sith believed that the dark jedis is their prophesied saviors, thus the dark jedis elevated themselves to god-like status on Korriban, becoming the rulers of the Sith people. Being enslaved by the dark jedis, some of the sith realized the truth, that these people are not their saviors, thus they tried to rebel against them but the great dark lord of the sith MARKA RAGNOS perishes their hopes for salvation, still their leader Siin was able to escape from Korriban with some people in to the outer rim. The sith were amazed by the space as the dark jedis forbade them from flying in order to keep them under their control, anyway Siin's ship landed in the surface of undiscovered planet named Samaraa and they lived there without any disturbance. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristotélēsticus Posted May 22, 2005 Author Share Posted May 22, 2005 Part II Knights of the Old Republic Through time the real sith were growing stronger and they started to put a plan to revenge the dark jedis who enslaved them once. a dark lord of the sith named Darth Tranka, was able to convince the Mandalore to unleash a war against the republic, then he took jedi master kriea as his apprentice and named he DARTH TRAYA. Revan destroyed the Mandalorians and discovered the presence of the real sith so he conquered the republic in order to make it stronger to face the real sith, but Tranka was aware of Revan's plan thus he cheated his apprentice Malak and lead his to betrayed his master and so, Revan's plane were doomed as the real sith had more time to build their army and make it stronger. After a period of time Revan succeeded in killing his apprentice and traveled deep in to the outer rim to find the real sith empire, meanwhile Traya was manipulating another man known as The Exile to kill her apprentice Nihilus then join her to bring death to the force it self. She had failed in that and met her demise at the hands of the Exile, who followed Revan to the outer rim. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristotélēsticus Posted May 22, 2005 Author Share Posted May 22, 2005 Part III The Dark Tranquillity (Kotor 3) Revan and The Exile met each others in one of the real sith base, and after many dangerous missions the two reached Darth Tranka's ship, and there Tranka reveals his plans of choosing one of them as an apprentice, and that he knew that Traya will betray him thus he was looking for another apprentice, and then he was able to make them fall into the dark side as the two fought each others but the arrival of their friends including Bastila, Carth, Visas and Mandalore made them return to the light side as the two united their forces and defeated Tranka and his fleet was destroyed, but they didn’t destroy the sith order as they didn’t reach the planet Samaraa, however Tranka's son Babek rebuild the order a new era of peace covered Samaraa once again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristotélēsticus Posted May 22, 2005 Author Share Posted May 22, 2005 Part IV Beyond the Veil Somewhere deep in the outer rim in a planet named Samaraa, the real sith order is in a great danger as the dark lord of the sith Darth Kaban get closer to death day after day, and many of the sith lords are ready to fight for his title especially after his oldest son's sudden death, which may lead the order in to a neverending chaos, thus the faithful servants of dark lord Kaban, sent an instant message to his youngest son and his only heir, who is traveling in the space to seek knowledge from many places, thus they needed him to take his heritage as the dark lord of the real sith. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
montnoir Posted May 22, 2005 Share Posted May 22, 2005 Originally posted by Korfredonn the real sith areholders of a certain lore not only pure evil Sith by definition are users of the dark side. The dark side corrupts and makes everyone that uses it, evil. The dark side make them live through their dark impulses like greed, lust, hate, etc. How are you going to get past this problem? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristotélēsticus Posted May 22, 2005 Author Share Posted May 22, 2005 i didnt say that they aren't evil, i just said that they follow a certain belive which is a kind of combination of thier previous believes ( before the coming of the dark jedis) and the dark side lore, the dark side gives you power by giving in to your emotions and that includs hate and love and many other controducted feelings, thus the real sith are not necessarily more evil than the dark jedis, they've tasted the dark side and realized that there is no benefit in keep betraying each others, yes they are evil but from a point of view (the jedi for example) but from thier side of story they are right and the others are wrong( if you read the chronicles you'll know that they were enslaved by the dark jedis and killed by the jedi thus they were deniled by the two sides of the force, so they've took a path between the two but closer to the dark side of the force). plus we get tierd of the stupid evils in SW universe who are always wanting to cheat eachothers for thier own benefits not the common goal. anyway thanks for your clarification, and please if you have any more points of what did i wrote just tell me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
montnoir Posted May 22, 2005 Share Posted May 22, 2005 Originally posted by Korfredonn ...the dark side gives you power by giving in to your emotions and that includs hate and love and many other controducted feelings, thus the real sith are not necessarily more evil than the dark jedis, they've tasted the dark side and realized that there is no benefit in keep betraying each others... ...plus we get tierd of the stupid evils in SW universe who are always wanting to cheat eachothers for thier own benefits not the common goal. I'm not criticising you. I think you've got a good story idea, but there is contradiction about the dark side. The use of the dark side of the Force makes the user evil. Even if he is a soldier fighting for the survival of his people, by using the dark side it will make him greedy and distrustful and he will turn on his friends and his people, because he is warped by the dark side. There is no cooperation withing the dark side. In the movies there are only 2 Sith a Master and an Apprentice. At 1 point in time the Apprentice will become so strong that he will kill his master instead of working together and become invincible. Look at Anakin, he only wants to save his wife but after falling to the dark side he wants to rule the galaxy. Look at Revan, he wants to save the galaxy from war (Mandalorians) and after falling to the dark side he wants to rule it. See? The dark side corrupts. That is why you can't have an army or a circle of "friends" using the dark side to a common goal. Because it will corrupt them and they will turn on each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Devon Posted May 22, 2005 Share Posted May 22, 2005 The story looks pretty good, but it should be moved to Dantooine theater academy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RaV™ Posted May 22, 2005 Share Posted May 22, 2005 Any stories SHOULD always be moved to Dantooine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristotélēsticus Posted May 23, 2005 Author Share Posted May 23, 2005 Originally posted by montnoir I'm not criticising you. I think you've got a good story idea, but there is contradiction about the dark side. The use of the dark side of the Force makes the user evil. Even if he is a soldier fighting for the survival of his people, by using the dark side it will make him greedy and distrustful and he will turn on his friends and his people, because he is warped by the dark side. There is no cooperation withing the dark side. In the movies there are only 2 Sith a Master and an Apprentice. At 1 point in time the Apprentice will become so strong that he will kill his master instead of working together and become invincible. Look at Anakin, he only wants to save his wife but after falling to the dark side he wants to rule the galaxy. Look at Revan, he wants to save the galaxy from war (Mandalorians) and after falling to the dark side he wants to rule it. See? i didnt say that you are criticising me, i said that i want to share it with you to hear your thoughts coz i cant come up with a perfect story and i wanted my story to be perfect and thats why i said that together we could make it better. (no hard feelings ok) about the dark side, yes its true that the dark side corrupt but what if some one has the power to control it, the result will be a good story, in this story there will be a man who tried to change the ideas of the real sith, they were evil like the dark jedi, (DARTH TRANKA was evil as he tried to destroy the republic) but the man that i mentioned in the last chronicle has gained knowledge from deferent places around the galaxy thus he will try to make the deference i'm talking about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristotélēsticus Posted May 23, 2005 Author Share Posted May 23, 2005 Originally posted by Emperor Devon The story looks pretty good, but it should be moved to Dantooine theater academy. thanks devon, i promis you that it will be in the Dantooine theater academy as soon as possible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor Devon Posted May 24, 2005 Share Posted May 24, 2005 Originally posted by Korfredonn thanks devon, i promis you that it will be in the Dantooine theater academy as soon as possible. Only moderators can move threads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aristotélēsticus Posted May 24, 2005 Author Share Posted May 24, 2005 Originally posted by Emperor Devon Only moderators can move threads. i know this, i'll re-post it there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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