Phantom: The Revenge

[Sebastian Vlay]

(Oh man, I'm so very sorry. I sort of got behind on all my activities, because I've been learning PHP, BASIC, reading developer newsletters, chatting on several different forums, and just having fun browsing the Internet. Sorry guys, I'll try my best not to do that again. Now, the Emperor's Servant is the most powerful ship at this moment in the galaxy. It is a fully equipped Eclipse-class super star destroyer or star dreadnaught, whichever you prefer. Supported by thirty other Victory and Imperial class star destroyers, plus loads of lancer frigates, escort ships, and more, there is little stopping it. No more can be said for now, and I win this game. Only I.)

 

 

Sergeant Renae had came to a Lambda shuttle, along with corporal Fejia, five army soldiers, and an officer. Together they boarded the transport, knowing exactly what was happening.

Renae was in the back of the shuttle when it took off, gaining altitude and leaving the atmosphere of the planet. He was switching his uniform into his stormtrooper outfit, as was corporal Fejia. When done, they had already left the planet. Both Renae and Fejia walked into the cockpit, staring into space.

"Is that it, sir?" Fejia asked.

"That is it," the sergeant answered.

"Quiet, you two." The officer said.

From the comlink in the cockpit of the shuttle came a voice demanding verification codes and cargo destination.

"Alpha three one decimal six five nine, hyphen one six one two. Eight men, and some disabled artillery or worn-out equipment, requesting permission to board." Replied the officer.

The whole thing sounded so proper and planned out, and they were indeed given access to the ship's docking bay number 62. From a distance, the lamda shuttle was nearing nothing, but however, if you looked close enough with the right precision, you could see pure black (often a little bit shiny) plates and lights all over a huge star destroyer shape in space. Then, also, if you looked around the vast beast, you could see dozens and dozens of other ships including support ships of all kinds. And of course you could see TIE fighters just swarming around the ships. Mostly the rare remote-control or droid fighter sorts.

Within another minute or so, they had made it to their docking bay and shut down the engines and landed. Everyone moved back towards the lift on the shuttle. With Fejia and Renae on the sides, and the army troopers behind him, the officer walked down the shuttle's little lift. They were warmly greeted by about six officers, and the hangar felt like home. Lit up by every little measurement, and shiny metal was seen everywhere. Beautiful.

The officers all met up, and the usual routine took place, but the two stormtroopers just walked over to the turbolift, and prepared to take it down quite a ways. The final battle was about to occur, and the Galactic Empire would be victorious. Afterall, the young Rebel on the TIE droid may just die how it is, because nobody ever said that a TIE droid's navigation meant perfection, did they?

[FiStO-KiT]

OMG! sorry for my VERY long absence(sp?) i have completley forgot about this i have been swept up in h/work and other games. ok now back to the my main post, can i please be updated on whats up whats up with my character(Stu). Thanks

[jediofdoom]

well becuase you havn't posted for a while and wer can't control you (stu) we made it so he has gone missing. pretty much the story is...

 

jax, Mira, and other rebel soliders went to find Stu after the phantom ended. They found Stu's firespray ship but not stu. The firespray had been flown there by the bounty hunter. They assumed you had been on the firespray ship. So the bounty hunter left you there and no one has seen you since.

 

and thats pretty much the stu story....so far

 

Don had come across the abandoned firespray ship little less that ten mniutes ago. Don had searched it using a space suit and line. The engines had died a while ago and the oxygen supply was gone. there was no sighn of jax. A space suit was missing from the storrage and Don assumed that jax had taken it to stay alive. Don had then checked the area around the firespray. There was evidence of Tie fighter activity. Don had assumed the worse. He returned to his A wing. On the radar a faint dot was moving away from him. He sped after it. As he got much larger ship appeared on the radar. It was far away but moving at a steady pace towards the rebel's position. Don knew then that this was the emperors servant. Don came acorss the droid Tie a short while afterwards. He knew the droid would not change it's coarse unless Don changed it. Don fired an EMP at the droid and it became lifeless. Don was not about to try and mount the Tie so he towed it back to the rebel cruiser, Ghost Town. Jax was almost dead. He was very pale and his hair was on end. he had a scorch mark on his face. He had been to taken the medical facility...

 

Jax awoke to aches and pains all over his body. He sat up. The medical droid turned

"oh you are awake sir"

"what? where am I?"

"you are in the medical centre unboard the rebel crusier Ghost town"

"what? how?-"

Don walked through the door

"Jax you're awake!"

Don grabbed jax's shoulder and pulled him into a hug. Jax's face stung

"oh sorry jax" Don said as he saw Jax wince from the pain

"how?" Jax repeated again

"I found the Tie, it's in the hanger now, sgt. ramoan is having tests run on it"

Jax was confused but did not want to persue the matter

"and....the emperors ser-"

Don gave him a server look

"what?"

He swallowed

"it's coming"

Jax stared

"what?"

"It's coming...."

"why?"

But jax knew why. There was only one reason why the emperors servant would come after them....to exterminate them

Jax jumped out of the bed. He ran to his room. He quickly found his jump suit and put it on.

Don appeared at the door

"how can you expect to figh against this?"

"how do you expect to run? It will catch us either way!"

Jax grabed his helmet and walked towards the bridge, The captain looked up at him scared

"you've heard?"

"yes, sir we have no choice....we have to fight it"

"I know, it will find us where ever we go....but we have no hope of winning"

"maybe sir but we must try"

"hmmmm, yes i know....This will be the biggest space war we have ever seen, every single rebel cruiser ans fighter will go to battle"

Jax had a sudden idea

"sir there is a way would could reduce the loses in space"

"how?"

"draw them onto the planet below, if we could set up some deffences, we could draw them onto land, the biggest war we have ever known, even bigger than the clone wars"

The captain looked at Jax

"so be it"

 

Hey guys before this fight starts i think we should make a new topic...this is no lnger about the phantom this is about survival. This will be the biggest fight between the rebels and the imperials ever! so we should make a new topic....any ideas on what to call it?

[FiStO-KiT]

well i dont have any ideas but if i did it would probably be about a Podracing Championship, lol.

 

Stu had caught a glimpse of who he thought was Jax running of into the distance, he knew that his mind was playing tricks on him, the last few days for him were a blurr, although he had found scrap parts of discarded Droids and ships around the area. He managed to build himself a make-do Ship, the energy levels were low so once he hit space he would have to quickly get to a nearby cruiser.

 

"I just hope to hell that this works!"

Stu was able to get flying even though it was a serious struggle,He saw a rebel cruiser an indicator showed that the ship was called the 'Ghost Town.' He hoped that it wasnt one. he began to black out and with his last moments of conciousnus he typed in the co-ordinantes to the Ghost Town.

 

"I hope someones there."

Stu Then Blacked Out as his ship flew towards the Ghost Town......

[jediofdoom]

"sir an unidentified ship sir coming towards our position"

"i see it"

"shall we open fire sir"

"no, send out recon droids to search ofr life, make sure they have live feeds"

"yes sir, im on it"

As the recon droids were being prepared, Jax felt something

"captain we need to start fortifying the planet if we hope to engage the imperials sucesfully"

"oh coarse, Adequate 5, i repeat cruiser adequate 5 do you copy?"

"this is captain Johnson of the adequate 5, how may i help?"

"Johnson, what is you position?"

"we're closing in ou your position captain"

"change your coarse, set a coarse for the planet below, it is uncharted, set up a base and as quickly as possible"

"yes sir, but....we alone can not hold that planet of the imperials are going to attack"

"do not worry Johnson, i believe Caotain Gennaid of the "lawrence arm" will asist you"

"The lawrence arm? am i hearin you right?"

"you are"

the lawrence arm was possibly the biggest rebel ship, it could hold more men that any oher cruiser. It's precise numbmber was unknown. it could aslo caryy vast amounts of weapons, cannons, guns, speeders and other land assualt vehicles.

"Good god"

"also Fat wreck will be joining"

"what? two of the biggest rebel craft! what going on here sir?"

"this the fight- just do it....and good luck"

"yes sir, you too, over and out"

The captain sat back. The recon droids had tarced life. the person was unconsious.

Jax had gone to the hanger to meet the ship. When he saw Stu's limp body being taken out of the cock-pit he rushed forwards. He grabbed stu and flung him over his shoulder. He took him to the medical lab. He told the droid when he came around to tell him to come and find him. Jax went nback to the hanger. All of the pilots onbaord the ship where there in their jump suits. they were ready.

Jax stood infront of them, some looking egar some scared.

"The time has come" he said

"The empire is launching an asualt on us"

"whats new?" said a young pilot

"whats new is this time, it could be the end"

There was silence

"The emperors servant-"

Gasps from the crowed

"-is coming and we are going to go out there and-"

"DIE! ARE YOU CRAZY! WE'LL BE SLAUGHTERED!"

"We can not run from this, this is it, what we've been training for"

"but-but-"

"No Buts, I know that you're scared but we will fight!"

A cheer rose from the crowd

"The emperors think's we're push over but we'll show him what real pilots are capable of!"

Another cheer

"everyone, ready your ships and be prepared"

Jax turned, over his inter-comm he heard Dave say he had found Mira and Gus and would be returning shortly

Jax knew this could be his final hour, he went to his room and sat on the bed silently. wating...

[Renegade Angel]

Gus and Mira walked into the room. Gus had blood all over him.

"We're not too late, are we?"

Alot of people looked suprised to see him.

"Lets just say.... I killed a force ghost.... and found an old shuttle."

"But Jax, Why? why'd you leave me there to get killed by your Force Ghost? Why?"

"You don't know, do you? About the Force Ghost? Do you?"

Gus started to get angry.

Suddenly, the ships hook violently.

[FiStO-KiT]

Stu awaked in a medical lab.

"Wha-Where am i?"

Medical Droid :"Colonel Zandar,you are in a rebel cruiser called the 'Ghost Town'."

"Very well but who brought me here.?

Med Droid :"A Captain named Jax Polara brought you here sir, if he did not have you would have died from lack of oxygen in minutes."

"Jax! he's here thank god!"

Med Droid :"I'll go tell him that you've came round, might i just add that we are in closing range of a bunch of imperial ships".

"Oh man How could the same crap happen to the same guy twice!"

 

As the med droid goes off to tell Jax that Stu had awoke, Stu got dressed and sat down on the medical bed just thinking over what has happend and what is going to happen.....

[jediofdoom]

Jax stared up at Gus starting to get angry

I didn't leave you, I told Don to get you out, and he said he couldn't find you. As for the force ghost" he paused, something glinted in his eyes, "i don't know what your talking about"

Jax left the room and walked into the med droid.

"ah sir, Stu Zander has awoken"

"good, take me to see him"

"very well sir"

The droid led Jax back to the medi-lab, Jax glanced at Stu and then looked away

"Do you know of the situation? Of coarse you do, thats why i must ask you to help fight, I know you've been gone for weeks but we need you back in the driving seat"

Jax stopped

and thought for a moment. the ship shook again.

"I must ready our guys"

He looked at Stu

"I'll see you out there, Im leading the first assualt....Good luck old friend"

He left and made his way to the hanger....

[FiStO-KiT]

Stu was stunned at Jax's sudden reaction.

'I Suppose i'll get my crew ready as well.' Stu thought out-loud to himself.

 

Stu Ran down to the hangar and ran into his old team consisting of his friends; Adrian,Colleen And Alan.

Adrian:"Stu! how are you?"

"I'm Fine Adrian How are you guys?"

Alan:"We're good man but i dont know if you should be flying so soon after your ordeal."

"I know but if theres a whole bunch of imperial attack cruisers about to attack us then i'm ready to do my part i hope you guys are ready to."

Adrian:"Yeah we're ready we're gonna be flying a squad of your specially customized E-Wings."

"Sweet lets go."

 

Stu and his squad flew out of the hangar bay and slowed down infront of the hangar......

 

P.S.I hope that E-wings are acceptable in this story.

[jediofdoom]

(yeah they are)

 

Jax was shocked at himself. He hadn't seen stu for over a month and here he was ordering him around. Jax shook his head, he would apologise later. He had a lot on his mind. He walked staright past Don and Dave.

"Het Jax wait up"

"come on guys get it together!" He snapped

Don looked shocked

"sorry, I just...just feel a bit weird today"

Don looked at Dave

"you think it's wise you lead this assualt then?"

"I can do it!" Jax spat

Jax entered the hanger and turned to the other two.

(over speaker) "All pilots to your stations"

"Come on guys" jax nodded and dave then Don

"see you out there" Don muttered, and they seperated.

Jax got into his B wing (specs below)

and pushed the ignition and he flew out of the hanger. He turned to see the rest of blue group to come out and the start of green group (i assume you are gunna be green leader again Fisto-kit?) Jax followed standard procedure...

"All wings report in"

"Blue 2 standing by"

"Blue 4 standing by"

"Blue 18 standing by"

"Blue 3 standing by"

"Blue 5 standing by"

"Blue 6 standing by"

"Blue 7 standing by"

"Blue 9 standing by"

"Blue 24 standing by"

"Blue 12 standing by"

"Blue 19 standing by"

"Blue 17 standing by"

"All wings in attack position"

The members of blue group in B wings went into attack formation, As Jax's ship's wings unlocked and his cockpit swiveled to keep him level, he saw in the distance a huge ship

"Wooooah that emperors servant is massive"

"Thats not the emperors servant"

"What?"

"Blue Group pull up and stay focused"

As the ships pulled up, a blue light flashed and the emperors servant came into view as it left hyper space...

[FiStO-KiT]

(Yeah I'll be Green group Jedi.)

 

"Okay Guys Report in."

"Green-2"(Adrian.)

"Green-4"(Colleen.)

"Green-5"(Alan.)

 

The Imperial Cruiser gained on our position.

"Oh My god?!"

Alan: "T-T-That thing is H-Huge!"

"Calm down everyone, all ships have a weakness lets just hope its not well guarded."

"Guys Attack positions."

Colleen: "Er..hem"

"Oh right sorry coll."

As the ships were getting nearer the first rebel transports began to decend to the planet below to establish a foothold in the planet.....

[jediofdoom]

(ok because this battle is going to take place on the planet below too, i am also going to use another character to be part of the battle on the land)

 

Name: Kenny Skiba

Age: 21

Faction: Rebels

Class: foot soldier

Weapons: Blaster Rifle, Blaster Pistol, Standard grendades, Custom sniper rifle

Strengths: good eye sight, good infiltration techniques

Weakness: weighed down with equipment, friends

Bio: Kenny is a young rebel soldier. He has been shooting since he was very young. He used to go out with his father and shoot for sport. He and his family had to flee Dantooine when the imperial presance made it too dangerous. During this time his mother was killed by an impeiral officer. Ever since then Kenny has vowed to return home and avenge his dead mother...

 

Kenny stepped out of the cruiser. The light shone on his carky trousers. He put his helmt on and grouped with the others. Behind them speeders, speeder bikes, Weapons, Cannons, gun's, mortors and all the other stuff was being un-loaded. A Y wing came out of the hanger. The ship brought a few Y-wings along as bombers to bomb the paths used by the imperials. Also snow speeders were going to be used even though there was no snow, the harpoon would come in use if the imperials used AT-AT's, which they probably would.

Kenny gripped his rifle. He knew this was going to be tough. The rebels had established a base here before. It consisted of two bunkers, a sought of fort made from wood and metal and the front line wich was filled with trenches. The bunkers led into an underground passage to a small cleareing where a rebel cruiser had landed. The guns where being placed all around the fort and the trenches. If all else failed the trenches were to be set alight. There was also a certain point the Y wings could bomb. If they came too close to the fort and on bomb went astray the mission could be lost. The rebels alos had a plan up their sleeve. Kenny looked to the sky and he could see 4 star destroyers coming down to meet them. The plan better work...

 

 

(meanwhile)

The emperors servant ground to a halt. It did not move. It did not release any fighters. It did nothing. Jax had to make his mind up.

"Blue Group do not, i repeat DO NOT, attack that ship"

"what? why not?" Carlson asked confused

"Becuase it's not doing anything. The other star destroyers are going to attack then that thing will fiish us off!"

"but...the emperors servant could do it in one!"

"yes! but where the fun in that? they want to toy with us!"

Jax turned and started his assualt on the first star destroyer....

[FiStO-KiT]

The battle in space was just begining and stu and green squad were about to begin their assault on the star destroyers.

 

"Ok guys you know the the drill get under it and shoot the uunderbelly of the ship,its main cannons cant hit us then ok?"

Group:"Ok!"

 

Green group began their attack...

[jediofdoom]

Jax run along the ships hull. He knew he was in range of the ships cannons but he also knew if he could knock out the bridges defences and get a good shot on the bridge it would eb the end of the star destroyer.

"Don cover me on this assualt Blue Group split up, Carlson lead you assigned guys over to target 2"

"copy that Jax"

Jax armed a EMP torpedo. he knew if he could knock out the shields, the others could barrage it with normal torpedoes casuing damage and possibly rendering it useless. A group of Tie intereceptors were released from the ship.

"Damn, Rik keep those ties off us!"

"copy that Blue Leader"

Jax fired his EMP torpedo. A tie interceptor shot at it.

"shi- PULL UP!"

Too late, the Tie hit it and it exploded. The star destroyer's light flickered. Jax's B wing had escaped the blast but one ad not. Shark had been in the line of fire. His B wing floated useless. All of it's controls had been knocked out. It hovered just above the hull and then crashed into it.

"NO!" Jax returned fire on the Tie. It spun out of control and also hit the hull....

[jediofdoom]

meanwhile.....

 

The battle on the planet below had begun. The Imperials had landed and had sent scouts out. The rebels were already in place and rebel scouts were everywhere. The snipers had gone into the forrest. When the imperial scouts had not returned The imperials sent out AT-ST's. The scout radiod back saying they were safe and the plan was going smoothyly. The imperials had alnded in a hawks head foramtion

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and this made the rebels plan much easier.

Kenny went into the vast forrest. He heard nothing but a whistiling. The great thing about the imperial scouts was that they wore white unifroms and were easy to spot. The rebel scouts, in karky, blended in. The base had been further fortified. All the guns were up. A look out post slighly above and behind the base had signalled to them that the imperials had landed and were moving in. The Huge AT-AT's could not manouvere throught the vast forrest and were aparently trying to flatten it but with no luck even the AT-ST's were having trouble nagotiating throuhg the forest. The rebels had not taken any vechiles not even a speeder bike. they knew it would be easy to spot and they knew the sound would atract the imperials. They hoped the impepials might get lost in the forrest as well and they did not want them to make their job any easier. One thing they did was to make animal noises. This could disorientate a solider and make him loose track of direction.

 

 

Kenny gripped his sniper rifle and placed it to his eye. In the distance he could see a white head bobbing towards him. He took aim...he did a quick check to make sure there was no one else there. He made a Bird noise. This was a signal. Another sniper would return the noise and they while kenny took the shot the other sniper would watch is back and take out any other imperials scouts if they were there. The noise was returned. Kenny pulled on the trigger. The scout fell to the floor.

"Got ya" kenny whispered to himself....

[Renegade Angel]

Gus was angry at Jax, but he had to put that aside and help his fellow soldiers. He was going to lead his old team again.... Gold squadron. Originally, they had all been Spec Ops, But after Gus's Special Ops years, he quit Gold Group. when he saw all his old comrades he was shocked. they seemed.... Tougher... Gus also noticed a girl that caught his eye.

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New Character! (Lol, This is gonna be based off my girlfriend, Kaitlyn)

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Republic Pilot Profile: #016630068986

 

Name: Kaitlyn

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Class: Co-Pilot of Gold Group

Fighter: modded x-wing

Apperance: Red hair down to shoulders(Carrot Top)

Bio: Error_ CANNOT READ END OF DATA STREAM

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Gus walked up to the girl. She was putting on her pilot helmet.

"Hello"

"Oh, Hello.... Ah.... Sir?"

"Guess your new, huh?"

"Yes, sir"

"You really dont need to call me sir you know. besides, Im the same age as you so..."

"Ok, No Problem!"

Gus could tell the girl was nervous.

"So, you're my Co-Pilot, Right?"

"Yep"

Kaitlyn climbed into her Modded X-Wing. Gus took one last look at her.

"Good Luck" He said queitly.

Gus's B-wing lifted off the ground, and flew out of the hangar.

"Gold 2, Kaitlyn, Standing By"

"Gold 3, Wes, Standing By"

"Gold 4, Flare Standing By"

"Gold 5, Marine, standing By"

"Gold 6, Alex, Standing By"

"Gold 1, Gus, Standing By"

"All Fighters, attack Position!"

All ready, 3 TIEs were firing at them.

Wow, His squad was amazing! They dodged every shot, every torpedo.

Kaitlyn was right beside him, When He looked at her ship, his stomach felt... Funny.... Hmm... Odd...

Wait coul- No, pilots never knew ''love''. He never had feelings for anyon in his life, since he was a pilot....

[jediofdoom]

As Jax glanced over at the motionless Emperors Servant he knew he would have to the face up to his demons sooner or later. He had a plan imbeded in his mind. Jax turned and fired An EMP torpedo into the bridge. A rippel of elecetricity engulfed the bridge. Don then followed the attack by firing a cluster torpedo into the bridge. They seperated and bombarded different part. The bridge had sustained minor damage but the ship was still moving towards the rebel cruisers.

"Carlon, do you copy?"

"I do Jax"

"Whats the situation over there"

"well it's looking good we're all still here and this star destroyer soon won't be"

"Ok keep going"

So far Jax had only lost one pilot. He knew that theses guys knew what they were gettng them selves into. He glanced towards Gus's ship. He saw how gold group dived and dodged and felt a sudden rush of anger. Those kids were all spins and dives know but just wait until they saw one of their mates blown out of the sky. Jax had been like that once, cocky, but it all changed. Jax snapped back to the here and now. He dodged Tie fire. If Gus was imressed from that wait until he saw what him and Don were about to do.

"Don....do it!"

"now?"

"yes now!"

"Got it bo-"

"lets go!"

Jax and Don dived towards the bridge. Don fired an Seismic charge....It exploded gashing the bridge and the hull. They saw their opurtunity, the shields were down and there was a hole in the ship. They dived into the centre of the star destroyer....

[jediofdoom]

meanwhile on the planet below.......

 

Kenny ducked behind a tree log. He had sworn the had seen a imeperial scope pointing at him....but if he had he was sure he would have been dead by now. He crouched. He could just about see under the log. The scope was moving. He looked down his own scope. He knew what he had to do. It wouldn't kill him but ruin all chances of killing someone and possibly blind him. Kenny took the shot. The scope on the imperials sniper shattered. He cursed. Then he made a big mistake, He stood up. Kenny shot again and hit him in the chest. The scout fell. Kenny's comm link buzzed and an explosion ripped the still air. An AT-ST?

Over the intercom: "Return the the base now!"

Kenny stood. It was a bad idea. The AT-ST shot in his direction. he hit the deck and then ran. He saw his friend Ryan ahead. He caught up with him and they ran flat out until they were safe. They jumped into a trench near the base.

"Base this is scout-89 they saw us, they're coming!"

An AT-ST crashed through the undergrowth. It came out of the forrest. It looked beat up. It stood there for a moment....then it exploded. Kenny looked at ryan. Then looked behind them and in a tower was a rocket trooper. clutching a rocket launcher. He looked stunned. "I didn't get a chance to fire" he yelled

Kenny raised his eyebrow. More crashing. The imperials were getting closer. The other soldiers manned guns and mortar launchers. Kenny grabbed Ryan and they jumped out of the trench. The position of the base was in between a sought of valley. There was hills on both sides. On top of the hills were more soliders. with snipers, roket launchers and machine guns. Kenny ran up the hill. as the jumped to the ground and Ryan hit the floor next to him and Fyling Imperical carrier come into view from behind the trees in circled and landed heavily on the grass. the ramp dropped. and hundreds of imperial soliders jumped out and all hell broke loose....

[jediofdoom]

Jax kept his finger on the trigger. he had to constantly blast debrey, metal wires out of the way. They could run out of space real quick. Jax dodged a beam, He blasted at some wires and they sparked and expoloded. He dived throught the fire.

"Jax this is crazy! what do you expect to do? this isn't like the death star this has no core!"

"Just follow me!"

Jax knew they were going to be in trouble soon. The hull of the star destroyers wasn't a walk in the park. well it was a walk in the park....if it was a park full of the possibility of running out of space and crashing into a wall. Jax Fired a torpedo. The torpedo exploded. He could see the end. He fired. He closed his eyes. The force of the explosion threw him through space.

"I AM NEVER DOING THAT AGAIN!" Don yelled as the star destroyer exploded.

"i have no idea how we just did that.....it's....impossible" don muttered

Jax and don flew back to regroup with blue group....

[FiStO-KiT]

Green group witnessed the destruction of the star destroyer.

"Jax, Nice shot but theres still a few left,Do you have a plan to take the others out?"

Adrian:"Stu,We have some company."

"All E-wings attack position."

Colleen:"I cant get it into position its jammed but i can still fl..*Explosion*

"Colleen?! Do you read me?"

*Static*

"Damnit its just us three now guys."

"Take out them TIE's by any means nessecery!"

Adrian:"I've got a l..o..c..k on it FIRE!!"

*Explosions*

"Good work guys all we need to do now is wait to hear Jax's Plan."

Stu and his men flew up to Jax and Don....

[jediofdoom]

Jax was deep in thought. He knew there were more star desroyers than they could handle. as if reading his mind 6 rebel cruisers exited hyper space. Jax was shocked. They released fighters. Like a plague of locusts the fighters were released.

"This is white leader, does anyone copy?"

"White leader this is Blue Leader"

"ahhh jax could to hear from you"

"you too"

"what's going on?"

"well i was expecting more...resistance but it's.....OH GOD!"

At least 1000 Ties were being released from the emperors serant.

"This is it guys!"

"who have we got here?"

"Red Group, white group, grey group, black group and yellow group"

"Ok guys let's do it!"

Jax shot towards the cloud of Ties...

[FiStO-KiT]

Green Group Sped towards the TIE's....

"R7 Power up all front shields and increase the range of the cannons."

R7:"Bee-Woob."

"Ok guys new plan."

Alan:"What is it stu?"

"Just blast any tie you see and try to stay together so we dont accidently kill each other,ok."

"OK!"

"Fire!....Fire!...FIRE!!!!"

*Multiple explosions.*

"Good work guys keep it up."

 

The Battle in space was heating up.....

[jediofdoom]

Jax fired at ant tie that came in range. which was most of them. The ties dodged and ducked. The rebels were out numbered but not out classed.The rebels were certainly better flyers. An explosion ripped through space and jax was thrown forward. A Star Destroyer had exploded.

"What happened? we didn't hit it?"

"It just.....went"

"Theres somehting weird about this"

"I agree White Leader, all fighters full back...IT'S A TRAP!"

Another star destroyer exploded. And then suddenly out of no where star destroyers surrounded them. Jax was speechless. The rebel cruisers were surrounded. But a few seconds later more rebel cruisers arrived. The real battle was about to start...

 

(meanwhile....)

 

Kenny fired. A storm trooper hit the floor. The storm troopers had realised, too late, that they had walked into a trap. The anti-aircraft guns had taken down the landing veichles. And were on the watch for more. The imperial soliders did not know which way to turn. They were surrounded. The rebel cannons stopped firing. The imperials had their hands in the air. They had surrendered. A cheer rose. Kenny did not cheer.

"We've won!" cried a soldier

"HOLD POSITION AND DO NOT LOWER YOIUR RIFLES!" yelled a commanding officer

Kenny understood, this was a trap.

"You boy, which one of those is the leader?"

Kenny looked down his scope

"that on" he pointed

"The one with the blue markings on his armour"

"Right....take him out"

"what?" voiced a soldier

"we arn't permited to shoot prisoners"

"we are when it's possibly a trap and the imperials wouldnt hesitate to kill you!"

*Silence*

"Do it" he said simply

Kenny took aim. and fired. The officer hit the deck. The storm troopers automatically started shooting again.

"see, they had hidden weapons and...."

The last trooper hit the floor, dead.

"see if we had fallen for that..."

*silence*

"well get ready i doubt we will be alone for long"

[FiStO-KiT]

Green Group were about to attack the cloud of TIE's when Jax gave an order...

'All Fighters Fall back....IT'S A TRAP!!!'

Stu:"You heard him guys fall back!"

Adrian:"Right boss."

Alan:"Copy that."

"Jax or white Leader, do you have a plan for this."......

[jediofdoom]

"this is....un-believeable"

The rebel cruisers released fighters and at the same time so did the star destroyers. This massive battle was about to heat up.

"All groups this is Blue Leader, im pretty sure this is a trap, something dosn't feel right, the emperors servant hadn't done anything and some star destroyers have exploded without being hit. I think they all might be filled with-"

The emperors servant exploded

"what the-"

and the real emperors servant took it's place. It was even bigger than the false one. It's glaring lights fixed on Jax and he felt a pounding in his head. He then knew this was the end.

"Don take control of blue group"

"what?"

"you heard me, i have to board that ship"

Jax spead off leaving a dazes Don behind

"right blue group follow me" Don said dazidly

Jax was allowed to get close to the star destroyer, some how they knew it was him two Tie fighters escorted him to the hanger bay. Jax was sure he was also surrounded by Tie Phantoms. Jax docked with the ship. He got out and was immediatly grabbed by storm troopers. His lightsaber was taken and so was his pistol then he was lead to the commander.

"Ah Polara i thougt i'd be seeing you"

"Did you or did your master tell you"

The commander went pale

"My master has awated your arrival he will see you shortly, throw him in a holding cell" he added to the guards who nodded. Jax was thrown roughly into the cell and waited for a visit from an old friend.