zelda 41 Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 My new (and less suckish) story. PART 1 of 3 (I won't use the "start a new thread" butten this time) (Zelda runs up to her friend) ZELDA: Okay, I'm ready to go, Gewn. GEWN:Go where? ZELDA: Dah, Whispering Rock. GEWN:..ehh.. ya, about that... ZELDA: Don't tell me. You forgot, didn't you. GEWN: No, no. I just... can't go. ZELDA: (begins to twich) AHH! GOD DANM!! HOW THE FREAK DID YOU FORGET?!?! GEWN: I'm sorry. *cry*(jumps off the side of a building) ZELDA: Oh well.(walks to the bus staition) Later FAT BUS DRIVER:All abored, ya phycho freaks! ZELDA: HI YA FAT LOSER!^^ FAT BUS DRIVER: Just find a seat you noob. ZELDA: Kay. ZELDA: Hi Lili! Can I sit here? Lili: (not paying attetion)...okay...noob. ZELDA:Kay.^^ ZELDA: Hey Lili, where's Raz? LILI: (still not paying attetion)... Huh? ZELDA: (annoyed) WHERE IS RAZPUTIN? LILI:..Oh. In the back. ZELDA: Kay. ZELDA: HI RAZZY!! RAZ: Hi...weirdo. FAT BUS DRIVER: We're here, ya phycho freaks! ZELDA:YAYAY!!^^ OLEANDER: Listen up! The brain rocks and you will enter it alot! KIDS:......... OLEANDER: (sigh) You get to shot stuff, too. Kids: YAYAYAYAY!!!!!!! SASHA: Okay. Off to bed children. KIDS:BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SASHA:....god, I hate my job. MILLA: Ah, screw you Sasha. PARTY TIME CHILDREN!!!!!!! KIDS: YAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!! SO THEY PARTY TILL 5:00 A.M. MILLA: (yawn) Okay, time for bed. KIDS: ...okay.(go to bed) ALARM: DINGGGGGGGGGGG!! ZELDA: YAYAYAY!!! TIME FOR CLASS!!!! ^^ RAZ:*cough. NOOB. cough* ZELDA: ^^ SASHA: Okay, time for class. KIDS: ............ SASHA:...oh god, I hate this job.YOU GET TO SHOT STUFF!!! KIDS: YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ZELDA: ^^ TO BE COTINUIED!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smon Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 Very leet circus-ish.... ... ...also, a little.... uh.... dry.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthAve Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 Add some fashion, Danial Vosovic, and Tim Gunn singing Closer by Nine Inch Nails and you got a spiced up story, Zelda. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zelda 41 Posted February 26, 2006 Author Share Posted February 26, 2006 One Thing: is it better then the other one, Raz's Life? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthAve Posted February 27, 2006 Share Posted February 27, 2006 They're both crap. If they were picture's.... Well, I'll let Santino explain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zelda 41 Posted February 28, 2006 Author Share Posted February 28, 2006 Hey look! I was bored, so I made pt. 2! *with guest star, Tim Gunn! ZELDA: YAY! CLASS!^^ LILI:... okay, you're too weird to be seen around. ZELDA:Okay. (walks off) OLEANDER:GET IN THERE, DAMMIT! ZELDA:Okiy dokiy, short man ^^ (Throws phycho portal on head) ZELDA: So this is the mentel world. Very... meaty. Raz: The coach is obsessed with meat. ZELDA:Huh? RAZ: HOW BIG OF A NOOB ARE YOU?!?! PLAY THE ****IN GAME!!!!!!! ZELDA: :3 oops... RAZ: I'm going. When you're not a noob, you can bug me. ZELDA: Kay ^^ SO ZELDA DOES THE COURSE WHILE SINGING KELLY CLARKSIN SONGS. ZELDA:YAY, the end! ZELDA:Hello? Mr. Shortie, where are you? Ohhh, pretty white room OLEANDER:GET THE HELL OUT'A THERE!!!!!! ZELDA: Oh. Hi Mr. Shortie Oleander: (Begins to twich.) JUST GET YOUR ****IN BADGE!! ZELDA: YAY! Basic Braining badge! Thanks Mr. Shortie! Wait, how do I get out? OLEANDER: Dah, take the exit. (points to door that just appeared) ZELDA: Wait, what was that room? OLEANDER: NOTHIN LIKE AN EVIL PLAN, IF THATS WHAT YOU'RE THINKI'N. ZELDA: WHAT?!? OLEANDER: Hey look it's Tim Gunn!! ZELDA:Tim!!!!!!! (gets pushed out of mind) ZELDA: WTF WAS THAT?! RAZ: ZELDA, IT"S TIM GUNN!!!!!!! ZELDA: OMG,WHOS HE?! RAZ: WE DON"T KNOW!!! ZELDA:KOOL! ^^ RAZ:^^ ZELDA:Im going now. (goes to the woods) ZELDA: Why is it dark all the sudden? WEIRD VOICE: ZELDA!!!!! ( Ground starts to shake) ZELDA: Gewn?!? GEWN: Yes, it is I, Gewn! NOW DIE!!!!!!!!! (Shots Phy blast at Zelda) ZELDA: WTF!!?? ARE YOU ****IN INSANE?! GEWN: YOU ALMOST KILLED ME!!! NOW YOU MUST DIE!!!!!!! TIM GUNN: Hi girls! GEWN: (shots Tim) DIE!!!!!!!!!! TIM: OHHH GOD!!!!!! GEWN: NOW!! LET US FIGHT, ZELDA!!!!!!!!!! TO BE CONTENUIED!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthAve Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 Ok, now is there a Red Lobster anywhere in this story's future? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zelda 41 Posted February 28, 2006 Author Share Posted February 28, 2006 SURE!! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthAve Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 Ok, now we're gettin somewhere. Everyone has to join Tim Gunn and Andrae at Red lobster and they have to have a delicious dinner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smon Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 Ok, now we're gettin somewhere. Everyone has to join Tim Gunn and Andrae at Red lobster and they have to have a delicious dinner. Can't. Seafood costs way too much up here. I'll just pick up some KFC. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zelda 41 Posted February 28, 2006 Author Share Posted February 28, 2006 Don't forget FREE dessurt, Smon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smon Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 Don't forget FREE dessurt, Smon That.... word.... my old arch nemesis.* This time I'm prepared, DESSERT. *See issue 89:Vocabulor Vs. The Ice Cream People. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingCheez Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 WHY DID YOU RIP OFF THE FIRST CHAPTER FROM MY STORY!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zelda 41 Posted February 28, 2006 Author Share Posted February 28, 2006 I did? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingCheez Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 FAT BUS DRIVER Overuse of the word noob Sounds VERY FAMILIAR. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smon Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 FAT BUS DRIVER Overuse of the word noob Sounds VERY FAMILIAR. OBJECTION!!! While very similar, the storys are completely different in many fundamental ways. (I'm getting Phoenix Wright very soon so I'm celebrating by defending anything... even if it means lawyering against myself.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zelda 41 Posted February 28, 2006 Author Share Posted February 28, 2006 1).Noob is a fun word to use. 2). I based the bus driver off of MY fat busdriver. DON'T ASSUME STUFF!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klia Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 It's not too different from the l33t Circus. And I'm really getting tired of the snide comments being given to zelda41. How does it improve the situation? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KingCheez Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 I also made l33t circus. Also, Smon, I want that but I think it's out of print :< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthAve Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 Go ahead Klia, be the junior administrator of this board. Not to sound rude, but why are you always so uptight about this whole site? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klia Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 Go ahead Klia, be the junior administrator of this board. Not to sound rude, but why are you always so uptight about this whole site? Because I get tired of seeing these boards degenerate into name calling and randomness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthAve Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 Well, we're just chaotic, alright. Do you have to start calling you Ms. Klia soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klia Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 Well, we're just chaotic, alright. Do you have to start calling you Ms. Klia soon I have no trouble with people having fun, but this is primarily a Psychonauts board and when the whole thing just becomes a chatroom between threads...well then it just gets out of control. There is no problem with members of a board telling eachother to chill every once in a while but you're absolutly right.You're right, I should not moniter these boards. It's not my job, I have no obligation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthAve Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 So, I don't have to call you Ms.? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Klia Posted March 1, 2006 Share Posted March 1, 2006 So, I don't have to call you Ms.? Never did, never will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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