Tysyacha Posted April 2, 2006 Share Posted April 2, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART I I, Tysy, began as a young female apprentice studying in the Jedi Enclave upon Dantooine. Fourteen years after the Jedi Exile defeated Darth Traya at the heart of the evil Malachor V, the Order had slowly been rebuilt. I was given three trials: an Echani duel with Master Brianna, an analysis of the Jedi Code from Master Visas Marr, and an undercover scouting mission from Master Atton Rand. During this mission, I helped to find and rescue Canderous Ordo, the Mandalore in exile, who had been trying to convince his people to join the battle against the True Sith. The Mandalorian raiders who had captured him, however, said they were more interested in robbery and murder as common thugs. Canderous and I returned to Master Atton at the Enclave, who finally made me a Padawan! I chose to become a Jedi Consular, and I built a silver saberstaff. Very soon after I finished constructing it, Master Atton told all of us that there was a meeting at the Khoonda government outpost. We decided to attend, even Canderous, because Master Atton told us we "could be in trouble." When we got to Khoonda, there was a stranger in a Jedi Robe trying to speak with Administrator Adare... "I've told you," said the stranger. "My name is Bastila Shan, and I am a Jedi Master. I've spent the past ten years looking for Revan. Revan is the key to ending the evil that threatens our entire galaxy!" Administrator Adare was confused. She thought the Sith had already been defeated, since the three previous Sith Lords were dead. Bastila Shan said no. She said the True Sith were still at large, beyond the Outer Rim. She asked Administrator Adare for help-- lots of credits, and access to the Ebon Hawk spaceship, which the Jedi Exile had abandoned when he left my Masters behind on Dantooine. Administrator Adare said yes, and Bastila picked her crew. Atton Rand would pilot the Hawk, as he had 14 years ago. Canderous Ordo would be aboard as a soldier, a war veteran. Bastila, as Commander of this mission, would lead us. Master Visas Marr volunteered to be Bastila's lieutenant. I, as a Padawan, vowed to do all I could to stop the True Sith. And, as always, the loyal droids HK-47 and T3-M4 would serve us. At first, Bastila Shan did not want me to go on this mission. She said it was too dangerous, that untrained Padawans would be no match for the True Sith. I volunteered to do the lowest kind of work aboard the ship, and Canderous Ordo mentioned that Master Bastila herself had been a Padawan while she traveled with Revan. Bastila relented, and all of us boarded the Ebon Hawk. Alas! The same Mandalorian raiders who had captured Canderous were intent on breaching Khoonda's new hangar bay and taking the ship! With quick turbolaser fire from Atton Rand, that threat soon ended. We were on our way into the black void of space with nearly nothing, headed to fight an enemy that none of us really knew anything about... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 2, 2006 Author Share Posted April 2, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART II Aboard the Ebon Hawk for the first time, I very quickly learned the story of Revan, the Jedi Exile, and the True Sith. I asked where Revan and the Exile could be. Master Atton suggested that they were probably wandering in the realm of unknown space by now, if they had gone beyond the Outer Rim. I told Master Atton that we should not discount the possibility that they could be within Republic space, on planets we knew. Master Atton said that if anyone wanted to wander and hide anywhere, then the place would be Nar Shaddaa. We touched down for a landing in the Refugee Sector and were surprised by another strange visitor. One with wings and a surly attitude... "Hey! Hey! Deja vu! Whatcha doing on my landing pad? You here for the big rally?" I asked what rally this was, and the Toydarian told us excitedly, "It's the Tretiak speech! No one should miss it!" Commander Shan, Canderous Ordo, and I went to this "rally". At first, the speaker, Ula Tretiak, congratulated the people of Nar Shaddaa on turning their planet into a manufacturing giant, but then she proceeded to bring out an enormous Hutt in a cage. He was Vogga, a former crime lord on Nar Shaddaa. The people around us began to throw garbage at him. Ula Tretiak did nothing to stop them. Rather, she smiled like she enjoyed the whole thing! After the rally, the three of us went back to the Ebon Hawk to warn the others. We told them what had happened, and they all agreed that this Ula Tretiak woman meant trouble. How much trouble, we could not say--yet. I told Commander Shan that I wanted to clean Vogga the Hutt up a bit, but she told me not to. "The Jedi help the poor and oppressed," she told me, "and not the perpetrators of injustice. Let him sit there in filth, and learn a lesson." Nevertheless, I went to ask my own Master, Visas Marr, for advice. She taught me her special method of vision, and told me to look at the Hutt through the eyes of the Force. I did, and I bathed him well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 2, 2006 Author Share Posted April 2, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART III During his bath, Vogga the Hutt told me that Ula Tretiak was a diplomat from worlds beyond the Outer Rim who had brought production and exportation methods to Nar Shaddaa, allowing the planet to become self-sufficient through purely legal means. However, all was not well. He also said that Ula served two beings he called the "Sith Sith," who hungered much like Darth Nihilus had. Unlike Nihilus, they had perfected his art, controlling their appetites instead of letting their appetites control them. I yearned to hear more. I asked about Revan and the Exile, but Vogga said that neither of those two people were on Nar Shaddaa at the moment. I nodded. He told me to speak to Hanharr, Ula Tretiak's Wookiee bodyguard. Either that or seek out Mira, a former bounty hunter who wished to challenge Tretiak in Nar Shaddaa's quadrennial presidential election. Quickly, I ran back to the Hawk to tell the others. Commander Shan was skeptical, as I should have foreseen. She said that since Vogga had once been a crime lord, he could have been telling me things that were not true. She wished to go see him herself, after putting me in an intensive cleansing bath. Even washing a Hutt makes you smell like one! She, Master Visas, and Master Atton left the ship. While I was in the bath and safely covered with cleansing fluid, I asked Canderous Ordo about Bastila. He was on guard duty. He said that he and the Commander had never gotten along, even when they both traveled with Revan. Both of them had strong wills, he said, and he disliked the fact that Bastila seemed to have no respect for him. That was when he told me his secret. As a Jedi, I had sworn to follow and serve the path of the Light, but Canderous was on the Dark Side. With his love of war, fierceness in battle, and absolute dedication to victory at any cost, how could he not be? I felt confused. Was I supposed to hate the Mandalore now, to banish him from the ship? I did not, and could not. Instead, I respected him for telling the truth. Soon Commander Shan returned with news. She had visited Vogga (who'd smelled far better, by the way,) and then gone to Mira to see if Vogga's story had any ring of truth to it. Bastila said that Mira told her if she wanted any information on Ula Tretiak or the True Sith from her, then Mira had to have a running mate for the election in one week. Commander Shan then told me something I never expected to hear... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 2, 2006 Author Share Posted April 2, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART IV "I've volunteered you," said Commander Shan, "to be Mira's running mate. You're good with persuasive skills, and together you shall govern Nar Shaddaa wisely and well." I was shocked. "What about our mission, to find and defeat the True Sith?" I cried. "I want to stay with you aboard this ship, to help you!" "Padawan," said Commander Shan, "I know how you feel. You have been a great asset to this mission so far. However, the dark regions beyond the Outer Rim are beyond the point of no return. We could all perish in the fight ahead, young one, and I do not want that. You should live a long life, serving others in a peaceful way. Please try to understand. Mira is waiting for you, Tysy." I couldn't believe it. Commander Shan was planning to leave me on Nar Shaddaa, whether Mira or Ula Tretiak won the election. She was trying to keep me safe, and yet keeping me from the only dream I'd ever known. I wanted to help save the galaxy. How would THIS help?!? Now out of the cleansing bath and in my Padawan robe again, I fled to the eastern crew quarters that I shared with Master Visas to cry. Jedi are supposed to control their emotions, but I couldn't this time. Not after this betrayal, after I'd volunteered to be part of the crew. So what if I was just a Padawan? Hadn't Bastila herself been one? Master Visas urged me to reconsider. She said that if Nar Shaddaa fell to Ula Tretiak, the consequences would be very serious. The planet would lie under the control of the True Sith, but they would have even more control if Mira and her future running mate were to do nothing. I wept in Visas' arms, not caring if I wasn't supposed to cry. So this was it? Playing politics instead of venturing off to fight the True Sith for me? I knew absolutely nothing about governing a planet. What good would I be? Master Visas whispered, "Trust in our Commander, Padawan. More than that, trust in yourself, and in the Force. Death will not come your way." I told her, "Master...for this cause, for the True Sith to be vanquished, I want death to come my way. If I must die, that's what I'll do, because I love this galaxy and the creatures in it more than I love my own life." "In you I see passion, through my eyes," Visas said gently, "but it's the kind of passion that saves lives through peace instead of war. With you at Mira's side, the bounty hunter will become stronger. Wiser. More able to lead, now that she knows she has the full support of the Jedi behind her. With she herself being able to use the Force, and a Padawan as her running mate, there is no way a lowly servant of the True Sith could ever triumph." Master Visas smiled and left, and I heard heavier footsteps approaching me... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 2, 2006 Author Share Posted April 2, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART V Canderous Ordo, clad in full Mandalorian armor, knelt down in front of me where Master Visas had so soon been before. He breathed heavily through his visor, and I could tell that heavy thoughts were on his mind. "Jedi," he said with an edge of anger. "They're wrong." "About what?" I asked him. At the same time, I knew what he'd say. "About leaving you here. Nar Shaddaa is an insignificant and wasted planet, known for its factories now instead of for crime lords and thugs. Do you even know what they're building, all of these workers? I don't, either. However, there's one thing I do know. No one is going to stop the True Sith through winning some namby-pamby four-year election." I nodded. I was glad I wasn't the only one who thought that. "Our only option is action, Tysy, and I don't want to call you Padawan. You know my secret, and you haven't exposed me yet. Thank you." I nodded again, and this time a blush came to my cheeks. What was this pain, this confusion? I was supposed to be wary of Canderous... "I know what you're thinking. I want to kill Ula Tretiak, and you'd be right. She is dangerous, and no election is going to stop her from doing whatever she wants. Unlike Commander Bastila, I believe we must take Ula out by force. If she serves the True Sith, then one day she'll become one of them. We must act now." "Canderous," I said in a choked whisper. "Mandalore. Do we have to kill her?" In a bold and utterly surprising gesture, the Mandalorian warlord took my shaking hands into his, covered by metal gauntlets. "You won't, but I will. "Let's go see Hanharr, that Wookiee you told us about. The one who was guarding Vogga? He said to speak to Hanharr about working for Ula Tretiak. Let's find the location of her hideout, unbeknownst to Her Highness Bastila, and then we make our move. Understand? I'll always be there for you, Tysy." Through his visor, I heard Canderous take two more deep breaths. He was very afraid, but not enough to back down. I understood all too well... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 2, 2006 Author Share Posted April 2, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART VI "Canderous," I asked him, "are you trying to lure me to the Dark Side?" "The True Sith are the Dark Side," he said, "and I have no wish to join them. Would I want to remove Ula Tretiak if I was that evil? I view her as a threat and a danger to us, not an ally. For the past fourteen years, I've wanted to go beyond the Outer Rim, to where the True Sith Empire lies in wait. I want to find it and bring it down. Who knows what dark future they're planning for the galaxy right now? "I know you've just become a Jedi. You don't have to come with me if you don't want to. The Mandalorians are a sturdy race. I've fought more battles than most of my comrades combined. I'm a veteran. You can stay here and wait with the others. I'll soon bring news that Ula Tretiak is dead, along with any bodyguards who protected her. Hanharr can choose what he wants to do--join me, or his master." "I--I don't know. Something could go wrong. No Jedi have ever gone on a mission without at least one other person along. It's not that I don't trust in your fighting abilities, but what if we get swarmed by Ula Tretiak's thugs? One person isn't quite fit to fight off dozens of attackers. I don't want to see you hurt or killed, Mandalore." "You're actually worried about the life of one stubborn Mandalorian?" "Da," I told him. "Yes. You were the first one on this mission that I met who wasn't a Jedi. I'm very--drawn to you, and I don't know why. If you're going to fight Ula, please take me with you." "I'll give you a few more minutes to decide, but we must move quickly." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 2, 2006 Author Share Posted April 2, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART VII I relaxed my shoulders and exhaled deeply, my breathing as heavy as the Mandalore's through his visor. "Violence is not the way of the Jedi," I told him sadly. "It never has been, because we seek to spread peace through the galaxy instead of war and conflict. "I know in my head that I should listen to Master Visas and Commander Shan. This Mira needs an honest running mate, or else she has less of a chance to win against Ula Tretiak. "Despite this, I'm inclined to follow you. Commander Shan may think that Ula Tretiak is nothing but a pawn of the True Sith, a third-rate servant who can't even use the Force, but even third-rate servants can wreak irreparable havoc in the galaxy. I'm as afraid of Ula as you are NOT afraid of her. I, too, wish she could be 'removed' somehow." "Consider it done, then," said Canderous, his voice lacking the softer touch that it had before. "We'll leave immediately. I'll tell Her Highness that I'm escorting you to Mira, the bounty hunter. One thing about our culture, the very core of our being, is that all Mandalorians hate lies. I more than most others. However, sometimes lying and subterfuge are the only ways to get things done. I don't want Commander Shan being suspicious. This mission is only between you and me, and perhaps HK-47. That assassin droid might be useful if I can convince him to follow us." I nodded. We both approached the Commander, hiding our thoughts. "Commander Shan!" Canderous announced, saluting crisply. "I request permission to escort Padawan Tysy to Mira, the former bounty hunter. Permission also requested to take HK-47 along." "Well," replied Bastila with a wry smile. "I'm glad you're finally showing me proper respect. Permission is granted on both counts, and I shall program HK to accept your commands during the trip. He shall not target either of you on this escort mission--only those who try to attack. Farewell, Padawan. May the Force be with you!" As we left the Ebon Hawk, I noticed Commander Shan had not said farewell to Canderous. I suppose to her, respect only went one way--to her, not from her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 2, 2006 Author Share Posted April 2, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART VIII "Interjection: How ignominious! Why does my Master send me out on a mission of pacifism? Escort duty is undeniably tedious." HK-47 wasn't happy to do it, but Canderous gave him good news. "You want to know why I wanted you with us, assassin droid? Because you can kill," he stated. "This isn't an escort mission. Rather, it's a 'hit' on Ula Tretiak. She's a threat to us and the galaxy, and I mean to take her out." There was no denying the fierce protectiveness in the Mandalore's voice, and the anger. "Shocked Statement: This compromises my ability to follow my original Master's orders! However, since Bastila programmed me to follow you during the course of this outing, I shall. Nothing would give me more pleasure than to vaporize meatbags--I mean 'organics'. Let's move on. I am anxious to execute your plans!" I laughed nervously, glad that both man and droid were with me. Step by step, I felt more afraid and guilty. Not only were we betraying Commander Shan by doing this, but I felt I was also betraying the Jedi and the Light Side of the Force. Why was it that peace was the only way for us? Some people were surely too dangerous to be left alive for long. Right? Like Darth Malak. There was no good left in him, in his galaxy-conquering ways. What of Ula Tretiak? It was then that I made my second decision: If she yielded in battle and asked for mercy, then I'd spare her. If I were about to strike her down and she repented, I'd spare her. However, if she remained hostile to the end, all bets were off. "Canderous," I said as we neared Vogga's enclave. "We're traitors." "I know," he said. "In the eyes of Commander Shan and the Jedi, we will be. However, would you consider us traitors to our mission? We must find and defeat the True Sith. Taking down Tretiak is our first step to succeeding in our ultimate goal. We're only traitors if we join the True Sith instead of fight them. Do you agree, Tysy?" I nodded. The Mandalore must have seen the pain in my eyes, even in the dark. He told me, "The greatest victories come with the greatest price. I know you won't like killing even the peons that serve Tretiak. That's why I beg you--fight only if attacked." We moved on. Vogga the Hutt was being guarded by another thug of Ula's, however. He said Hanharr was taking a break in the Jekk-Jekk'Tarr cantina. We both would need spacesuits to get inside. The place was full of cyanogen gas to cater to its wholly alien clientele. One whiff, and we'd be dead in minutes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 3, 2006 Author Share Posted April 3, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART IX Not only did we have no spacesuits, even aboard the Ebon Hawk, but Canderous and I also needed a password to get into the Jekk-Jekk'Tarr. Luckily, in return for his bath, Vogga the Hutt said that several spacesuits were stored in his former warehouse. It was now being used as a workers' storage space. Many factory hands on Nar Shaddaa had jobs making spacesuits now, so the Mandalore and I were grateful to borrow two. For the password, I threw up a wild guess, not knowing how Canderous would react. "When we were at the rally," I told him, "do you remember the slogan that Ula had the crowd repeat? 'We give our lives to PRODUCTION. Through production, we gain PROFIT. Profit is the only thing that will give us POWER.' Perhaps if we say those three words in order, we'll get in." How, by the Force, was it ever as easy as that? The bouncer at the Jekk-Jekk'Tarr nodded at the two of us, secure in our spacesuits, and we lumbered into the cantina like huge rancors. Just as the thug guarding Vogga the Hutt had told us, Hanharr the Wookie was prowling around stealthily, watching everyone with angry and suspicious eyes. Would he expose us right then? He looked at us, our bodies hidden. "Have you come to see Ula Tretiak?" he asked, roaring out a disdainful question. I wondered how Canderous would respond. Again, he surprised me. "We've come to see Tretiak," he announced, "and to assassinate her." I almost fainted right there on the spot, even in my spacesuit! The Mandalore may have hated lies, but couldn't he at least have told one more for our protection? We'd be the ones who'd meet our deaths unless we ran! However, even more surprises were in store for the both of us. Hanharr lowered his two Ryyk blades and grunted. "Even better," he told us, performing a downward-slash flourish. "She cares not for those such as I, and considers Wookiees slaves. I will not have my will broken again, and this is what Tretiak wishes to do. I am one of the few permitted into her secret lair at the rear of this cantina. I will say I've brought more bodyguards to replace the ones we have lost. Then we shall attack, the four of us, and finish her!" Canderous nodded. "Sounds like a plan. I'm ready whenever you are." As usual, I was a bit more worried. "Let's all watch each other's backs." "Glad Statement: Oh, glorious day! We shall fight and kill!" HK-47 cried. Hanharr led the way into the gas-filled tunnels below the Jekk-Jekk'Tarr, and we crawled through them breathing slowly. Our oxygen had to last until at least our arrival in Ula Tretiak's secret headquarters. Let me tell you, navigating through tunnels in a huge, bulky spacesuit is NOT easy! Neither is dealing with your conscience when you know you might be making a mistake. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 6, 2006 Author Share Posted April 6, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART X Despite all my misgivings, all the twinges of my moral compass that warned me to turn back before it was too late, I proceeded ahead. I followed Canderous in his spacesuit, while HK-47 clunked along behind me. I expected Ula Tretiak and her guards to be ready for us, what with all the racket we were making in the tunnels! Ready they were, and many of them were wearing characteristic gold-plated Sith Trooper armor. HK-47 and Canderous were quite busy with their high-powered blasters, and I did my best to deflect Ula's guards' energy bolts with my lightsaber. Luckily for Canderous and me, we had time to take off our spacesuits in an outer chamber before we plunged ourselves into the heat of battle. Yikes, it was hard! As for Hanharr, he must have ducked behind a guard or five, because I didn't see him for the longest time. What was he planning to do? Suddenly, I saw HK-47 and Canderous stand stock-still. Ula Tretiak emerged, wearing a light-gray Sith Lieutentant uniform and square cap. "So," she said with a cruel smile. "More underlings to try and stop me. For whom are you working? Vogga the Hutt, who hates me? Or perhaps Mira, that former bounty hunter who thinks she can beat me in the election?" "Neither," growled Canderous, and he started blasting away, rapid-fire. So did HK-47, but neither of them could penetrate the energy shield that Ula had cloaked herself with very well. Could it have been a Verpine Prototype? Those shields were expensive, but also near-best in the galaxy. Quickly, I threw myself into what I thought was a lightsaber form and attacked. "A Jedi? Hah! Merely a Padawan, if I analyze your awkward moves correctly. The Juyo form you wish to learn, do you? If I were you, I'd stick to more primal forms of fighting--like cutting flesh!" She unsheathed two vibroblades. Uh-oh! Here I had thought this was going to be a saber-on-saber duel, but I had forgotten that Ula did not know how to use the Force. Not only that, but two vibroblades could have a distinct advantage over an opponent who was not skilled with a lightsaber. I fought against Ula as best I could, but soon the blood began to flow from my slashed arms and legs. I cringed in pain, gritting my teeth and swinging my silver saberstaff for all I was worth. When I thought all was lost, I heard a rumble in the room, like distant thunder. "Hanharr." There was a pause in our duel. "I was wondering where you were, you ungrateful beast. Why didn't you protect me? No matter. I'm getting a chance to prove my prowess against a slave girl who thinks she's a Jedi. This one bathed Vogga the Hutt, the lowliest service one creature can do for another. I'll finish her now, and then I'll deal with you. Do you think I cannot?" Hanharr simply picked Ula up--by the neck, mind you--and started to choke her. "Jedi!" she cried. "Aren't you going to save me? You spare your victims, correct?" "If they surrender and repent," I told her. "Yield, Ula. There's more that we need to know about the True Sith if we're going to stop them. If you tell us what you know, then we'll spare your life. Not only that, we might trust you enough to take you aboard our ship." Canderous and HK turned their heads, shocked. "You think I'd fall for such a trap, lowly one? Never, and---kkkhhhhh!" Hanharr had gained the upper hand over his cruel mistress. He looked toward me for a sign--should I let him kill her, or signal for him to let her fall to the floor? "Your time is up, Sith-servant scum," intoned HK-47, and he raised his droid arm. Hanharr broke Ula's neck with an audible snap. "Statement: Too easy a death." Tears were now streaming down my face, from the pain and from my guilt. The world grew blurry in front of me, and soon I felt myself hit the floor. After that...blackness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 7, 2006 Author Share Posted April 7, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART XI "Tysy...Tysy? Padawan? Are you all right?" I stirred and struggled to open my eyes, but they both were very watery. I saw a red-violet veil, a wet shape through the tears I was still shedding. Master Visas had one arm wrapped around me, and I felt grateful. "You've taken a hard fall. Luckily, no bones were broken, and you don't have a concussion." With Visas' gentle assistance, I sat up on the medbay cot. "Good! Relax. I'm not going to judge you or think less of you. Simply answer my questions if you can. Why were you unconscious in the Jekk'Jekk Tarr?" "I was fighting a Sith Lord," I told her, "or not exactly a Lord, but one of the servants of the True Sith. Her name was Ula Tretiak. I saw her at a rally. Canderous, Bastila and I were all there. He and I decided to take a 'hit' out on Ula to try and kill her. We knew how dangerous she was, Master." "Didn't Commander Shan ask you to help Mira, the former bounty hunter, instead?" Master Visas was confused. She hadn't known about our mission. "Yes, but I didn't go. Canderous Ordo approached me with a different plan, one that would supposedly take out Ula the 'quick way'. It did." Feeling a bit woozy, I started to slump over, but Master Visas caught me. "A Wookiee named Hanharr was the one who actually killed her, though. Hanharr had been Ula's bodyguard, and he wanted revenge for being mistreated and thought of as a slave. I fought Ula, too, but she got the better of me with her two vibroblades." My head was hazy. "So I see. I'm truly sorry for the injuries you've suffered. However, do you realize that your refusal to obey Commander Shan's orders could result in your banishment? You took the path of violence and revenge. "That is not the way of the Jedi, and Bastila is not pleased with you. Humble yourself to her, and she may lighten your punishment. As it stands, it's exile for you, along with time at hard labor according to Nar Shaddaa law. Pre-Ula." I nodded. Suddenly, I heard a slight roaring. "Master Visas--what's that sound?" "A riot. Hanharr's been captured by the crowds, and they want to throw him into the Central Pit of Nar Shaddaa! Most supported Ula, but now she's dead. I don't know if we can save him even if we tell everyone Ula served the Sith!" I dashed forward out of the Ebon Hawk. Master Visas and Commander Shan followed. Where was Canderous, my partner? I wiped my eyes and saw a terrible picture: Hanharr, being hoisted on the shoulders of thousands, was edging closer and closer to the Central Pit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 8, 2006 Author Share Posted April 8, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART XII "Wait! Wait!" I shouted, trying to grab anyone's attention amid the chilling roar of the Nar Shaddaa mob. As I should have known beforehand, no one listened. Rather, no one in the crowd was able to listen, as the clamor of their shouts and screams for vengeance deafened everything else. They had Hanharr at their mercy, and they weren't about to give him any. "Slave spit! Slave spit! Let's throw this one in the Pit!" they all chanted. Even though I had no memory of what happened in the Jekk'Jekk Tarr after I fainted, I thought some of the people in the crowd must have captured him. Knowing Hanharr, I also guessed he'd confessed proudly to murdering his master. Ula Tretiak, in his eyes, did not deserve to live. That was why the crowd, bathed in a red swath of hatred, thought that he did not deserve to live either. What in Nar Shaddaa could I do now? I heard a highly-amplified voice suddenly rip through the crowd's chanting. "Now! You will all stop this madness. Let the Wookiee down, and do not harm him." With hot fear, I recognized the woman speaking. Commander Shan! She was standing next to a red-haired woman, perhaps Mira, at a speaker's podium. Her face was as stern as a statue's, and as stonelike. "The Wookiee was not alone in his plot to kill," Bastila continued. "There is a man here, an arrested Mandalorian, who wishes to face punishment for his crime. Four years at hard labor he faces, and four years at hard labor he shall get. Assassination is not the way of Nar Shaddaa. Not anymore. You've grown stronger than that in fourteen years. Speak now...Canderous." I saw ten guards, not merely one or two, bring my partner forward. He had a neural inhibitor around his neck, and as he took the podium and confessed, my heart broke. I would not let him suffer alone for what had happened! "Citizens of Nar Shaddaa," he began, "you have been betrayed. Not by me, nor by the ferocious Wookiee and droid who helped me. Ula Tretiak served the True Sith." Here, a gasp from the crowd, as if right on cue. "You sound as if you never suspected it," continued Canderous, "but is that really true? Hadn't you noticed that her 'production, profit, power' slogan echoed the code of the Sith? She intended to use all of you, to control you. I did not. "I believed assassination was the surest way to rid this world of Tretiak, and thus I enlisted the aid of Hanharr, her most personal bodyguard. Not only that, I deceived my own commander into sending a droid along. His name is HK-47, and he is a protocol droid with a sniper's programming. Together, we three struck down all of Ula's thugs, and then Ula herself. "Four years of hard labor for me, you say? I'll take it, if only so you'll release Hanharr. That's all I have to say, as the convicted mastermind of this assassination plot. Let no one say that the Mandalore failed to do what he thought was right. He intended to rid you of the threat of a woman who served the Sith, and that he did. Punish me if you will, but do not let your lust for vengeance turn you into dumb brutes once again!" The silence of the crowd was deafening. I, for one, was shaking all over... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alkonium Posted April 11, 2006 Share Posted April 11, 2006 Very well written, I really think you should continue the story, although technically Bastila would be referred to as Commander Shan, not Commander Bastila. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 14, 2006 Author Share Posted April 14, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART XIII The woman beside Commander Shan now took her turn to speak. "Good people," she began, even though the sentiments of the crowd were not so good-natured. "My name is Mira. I intended to defeat Ula Tretiak in Nar Shaddaa's presidential election in one week, but I have been deprived of that chance. I condemn my opponent's assassination. Ula may have served the Sith, but that does not mean her death should have been automatic. Why, you may ask? Am I a fool, you may wonder?" At this point, she unsheathed her yellow-bladed Jedi Sentinel's saber. "Fool or not, I am indeed a Jedi. Peace and diplomacy are our ways, not war and underhanded secret plotting. Since this Mandalorian has confessed to murdering my opponent, along with a droid specifically designed for such a purpose, I sentence him to the mandatory four years at hard labor. The droid I will have disassembled, permanently put out of service. As for the Wookiee--let him live, and be sent to the labor camps along with his partner in crime. Even if you do not elect me as your President, my duty to the Jedi Order still stands." Coughs and snorts from the crowd. My knees were beginning to buckle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tysyacha Posted April 14, 2006 Author Share Posted April 14, 2006 KOTOR III: THE WRATH OF WAR: PART XIV At last, I couldn't take it anymore. Whoever said living with guilt was unnecessary, or at least an easy thing to do, was wrong. Canderous was now a prisoner about to be exiled to hard labor. What kind of a Padawan would I be, what kind of servant of the Light, if I kept my mouth shut and said nothing while he faced his fate alone? Begging the massive crowd's pardon, I wandered my way through it. Commander Shan and Mira looked at me quizzically, moving back for me to speak. "I'm guilty," I confessed, cringing at the high-pitched feedback from the microphone device at the podium. "Canderous, Hanharr, and the droid weren't the only three in the Jekk'Jekk Tarr. I was there too, and what makes it worse--I'm a Jedi. A Padawan, actually, but after tonight, I don't think I'll even be one anymore. It's what I deserve. "I thought Canderous' idea was a good one. After all, if Ula served the True Sith, why would it be a bad idea to kill her? She and I fought a duel, and at the end of it, I said I'd spare her life if she told me more about her Masters. I even offered to let her come aboard our ship if she'd join our side. Unfortunately, Ula refused, and HK-47 urged Hanharr to kill her. For this, and for us, I'm sorry. "I'm not proud of what I did. Not proud that I broke the Jedi Code, and not proud that I betrayed Commander Shan and my Master, Visas Marr. Right now, I'm still crying, even though the tears seem to have congealed upon my face like sticky slime. I--I wish I could take it all back, and rewind time, but it's not possible. Have mercy!" The scarlet-haired Mira turned to me. "In this case, Commander Shan and I banish you from our esteemed Order. You are exiled, and you are a Jedi no longer. However, since you have come and confessed your guilt, you have cut Canderous' sentence in half. Surrender your lightsaber to us. Will you serve your time peaceably? The remaining two years that the Mandalorian had are now yours." "Sdelayu katorzhnie raboty v techenie dv'let," I said humbly. Commander Shan and Mira did not understand me yet. "Pardon?" "Dvukh let. I'll do hard labor for the course of two years!" I wept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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