HK-42 Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 To the readers of my Darth Yoda Fic, I'm having trouble with the DY fic and i am going to shorten the chapter length. Sorry. But instead im going to do a fic About the things Revan did in the Unknown Regions. I made a RP for it in the Dantooine theater. But anyway the Prologue will come soon. The Main Charecters will be Darth Grivis The Great and Darth Zeorg the Great. Enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 STAR WARS The Battles In the Unknown Regions Prologue The Sith Lord, Darth Revan, has entered the Unknown Regions of the Galaxy. Soon the Jedi Exile, Darth Valk, follows. Now Darth Grivis and his apprentice Darth Zeorg gather the sith council to decide what to do with him. Meanwhile Bastila Shan enters the Unknown Regions to find Revan. Two Empires Shall Rise They Shall Clash A War Will Break Out Support Will Come One Shall Rise To Victory While the Other Will Fall Forever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 Right now im reserching the unknown regions, but heres the Characters right now and the planets of the unknown regions. Characters: Name: Darth Grivis the Great Age: 31 Race: Human Fav. Weapon: Lightsaber Fav. Saber Color: Red and Purple Strength: 55 Occupation: True Lord of the Sith, Sith’ari Wisdom: 43 Dexterity: 30 Constitution: 51 Lightsabers: 2 single bladed sabers Color: Red and purple Apprentices: Darth Zeorg the Great BIO: One of the "True Sith" Who plots to Destroy Revan Name: Darth Zeorg the Great Age: 18 Race: Human Fav Weapon: Lightsaber Fav Saber Color: Red Strength: 45 Occupation: Sith Wisdom: 33 Dexterity: 30 Constitution: 41 Master(S): Darth Grivis the Great BIO: One of the "True Sith" Who plots to Destroy Revan like his Master. Name: Darth Revan the Powerful Age: 22 Race: Human Fav Weapon: Lightsaber Fav Saber Color: Red Strength: 55 Occupation: True Dark Lord of the Sith Wisdom: 55 Dexterity: 35 Constitution: 51 Lightsabers: Double-Bladed Lightsaber Color: Red Apprentices: Bastila, aka Darth Shenosae Bio: Revan returned as the Sith Lord, after slaughtering Jolee Bindo in the Rakatan Temple... he also "persuaded" Juhani and Mission to join him in destroying his old apprentice. The two Jedi were powerless against this magnifisent Sith Lord's power. Revan soon after killing Malak started remembering all of his memories. Then he remembered about a "True Sith" Artifact. He went into the Unknown Regions searching near and Far for it, until he landed on a Sith Planet, one that had a huge Citadel on it. There he found the Artifact, but the Sith were contempt on keeping it from him.... Name: Darth Corona the Great Age: 32 Race: Human Fav Weapon: Lightsaber Fav Saber Color: Red Strength: 45 Occupation: Sith Wisdom: 33 Dexterity: 30 Constitution: 41 Master(S): Darth Grivis the Great BIO: One of the "True Sith" Who plots to Destroy Revan like his brother Name: Darth Ferio Age: 30 Race: Zabrack Fav Weapon: Lightsaber Fav Saber Color: Red Strength: 35 Occupation: Sith Wisdom: 15 Dexterity: 29 Constitution: 67 Master(S): None BIO: One of the "True Sith" Who plots to Destroy Revan Name: Talarius Age: 56 Race: Human Fav Weapon: Lightsaber Fav Saber Color: Red Strength: ?? Occupation: Rouge Sith Wisdom: 99 Dexterity: ?? Constitution: ?? Master(S): None BIO: A Rouge True Sith, who turned against them and tried to kill the Sith’ari “Darth Grivis. Name: Darth Valk Age: 23 Race: Human Fav Weapon: Lightsaber Fav Saber Color: Red Strength: 34 Occupation: Former Jedi, Sith, Jedi Exile Wisdom: 23 Dexterity: 12 Constitution: 23 Master(S): Kreia BIO: The Jedi Exile, now sith here to help Revan Name: Bastila Shan Age: 27 Race: Human Fav Weapon: Lightsaber Fav Saber Color: Red Strength: 34 Occupation: Former Jedi, Now Sith Wisdom: 23 Dexterity: 12 Constitution: 23 Master(S): BIO: Revan’s lover. Will help Revan try to beat the True sith. Bastila Shan Age: 34 Race: Human Fav Weapon: Lightsaber Fav Saber Color: Red Strength: 34 Occupation: Former Jedi, Now Sith Wisdom: 23 Dexterity: 12 Constitution: 23 Master(S): BIO: Revan’s lover. Will help Revan try to beat the True sith. Planets: Unknown Regions Ankus Carrivar Crakull Crustai Csilla Kariek Kilia IV Lehon Lwhekk Malagarr Mobus Morcanth Munlali Mafir Nagi Osseriton Pesfavri Qoribu Rhigar Sarvchi Shikitari Tenupe Tof Umaren'k'sa Yoggoy Zonama Sekot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 nice intro, and looking forward to your fic. eh, why do Darths plot to betray each other? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin Skywalker Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 Because we're evil and wish to kill each other P.S. I wish you wouldn't have based it off of our RP, cuz you're gonna make it to where you win... but i'll end up winning the RP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 Looks good Grivis. A shame about the Darth Yoda Fic. Anyway I'm looking foward to more. And CSI, the Sith always plan to betray each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 Because we're evil and wish to kill each other P.S. I wish you wouldn't have based it off of our RP, cuz you're gonna make it to where you win... but i'll end up winning the RP it might not be based off the RP. Thanks to everyone for the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 theres a new pic on the Prologue pic. thanks to iyman. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
igyman Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 Btw, interesting prologue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 7, 2006 Share Posted December 7, 2006 Nice heading igyman. Where did you find the background? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 9, 2006 Author Share Posted December 9, 2006 i found it on Wookiepedia under galaxy i belive, CSI. Chapter 1: The Meeting Darth Grivis sat down in a chair next to Darth Ferio. Then, he raised his hand for silence. In a flash all of the sith council focused on him. “It seems that a new threat has risen,” Grivis began. “A sith lord from the Rim has entered our Region.” “But Grivis, I thought our Great Region was impenetrable,” Ferio protested. “Obviously not,” Grivis sneered back. “Talarius must have done a bad job putting up my Prototype.” “What,” Talarius yelled. In anger Talarius ignited his Red saber. “You dare to blame me?” Talarius asked. “Yes,” Grivis replied calmly. Talarius snorted and charged at Grivis. Grivis jumped back and activated his Red saber. The two sabers clashed together, and Talarius’s was stronger. Talarius pushed Grivis back; Grivis stumbled but quickly twisted and activated his Purple lightsaber. Then, he brought the saber up and cut the emitter on Talarius’s saber off. Talarius stood stunned as his saber spit out sparks. Grivis then slammed the bottom of his saber into Talarius’s head, knocking him unconscious. Bastila rode the Ebon Hawk through the Unknown Regions. She had seen Revan’s ship fly to the planet Sekot. She knew the planet was the most known of all the Unknown Regions, and might have civilians on it. Bastila reached up to the Ebon Hawk’s main computer terminal and flipped the landing switch. Then, the Ebon Hawk slowly approached the planet’s surface. Darth Valk walked into the cockpit of the Ebon Hawk. Bastila, surprised swiveled around in the pilot seat. “Valk,” Bastila said upon seeing him. “Bastila, if were going to find Revan together you have to at least show me some respect.” “Whatever, were approaching the planet Sekot, I saw Revan land there,” “Good,” The faster we find Revan, the better,” Valk told her. “Like I didn’t know that,” ********* A preview for Chapter 2: On the planet Sekot, Darth Revan looked up. Above him, the Ebon Hawk flew through the sky. Revan started to pull out his comlink to contact the ship as a hard piece of metal slammed against his head, making him fall unconscious…. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 Very good Grivis. I'm looking foward to more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 9, 2006 Author Share Posted December 9, 2006 Thanks Pottsie, you will see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 Thanks Pottsie, you will see more. I know I will. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 9, 2006 Share Posted December 9, 2006 A preview for Chapter 2: On the planet Sekot, Darth Revan looked up. Above him, the Ebon Hawk flew through the sky. Revan started to pull out his comlink to contact the ship as a hard piece of metal slammed against his head, making him fall unconscious…. Huh. That's a funny scene. Always looking forward to see more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 10, 2006 Author Share Posted December 10, 2006 Chapter 2: The Capture On the planet Sekot, Darth Revan looked up. Above him, the Ebon Hawk flew through the sky. Revan started to pull out his comlink to contact the ship as a hard piece of metal slammed against his head, making him fall unconscious. Revan awoke and found himself on a stone bunk in a small room, surrounded by a stone wall with only a small hole for air. He got off the bed and stood up. He then walked over to the small hole and looked out. Revan could see a room full a machines and men. Revan grinned he knew how to ruin there day, for putting him in here. Grivis carried the unconscious body of Talarius out of the temple and into his ship. Quickly he threw the body into Talarius’s escape pod and shot it into space. Grivis watched the escape pod soar away, and then he entered the temple again and took the turbo let to the high council floor. Revan sat back and waited for someone to come. A few minutes later someone did. “Hello,” a female human said as she came in. “Hello,” Revan returned, trying to think of Bastila and not this woman. “I’m Laden, you?” “Revan,” he told her. “Nice to meet you, now you must be wondering who we are,” “Yes, I am,” “Good, we are a company on this planet that deals with newcomers,” “In what way?” Revan asked. “In ways, anyway why are you here?” “For reasons,” “Fine. I’ll be back later to finish interrogating you.” She turned and walked out of the room and disappeared. Revan reached down and felt his lightsaber. They had taken all his weapons except it. Perfect. He walked over to the hole in the wall and summand the force. He then used it to crush a nearby machine. Flames shot out of the machine and started to spread. Revan saw a group of people taking water to try and put out the fire, he used the force again to choke the group. They fell to the ground. Revan then grabbed his lightsaber and cut a hole in the cell door and he quickly jumped through it. ********* Preview for the next chapter: Bastila ran down the ramp of the Ebon Hawk and stood on the landing platform. She could see Revan’s ship on the platform left to hers. She was about to turn around to leave, when a hand grabbed her shoulder and she heard the snap-hiss of a lightsaber. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin Skywalker Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Ummm...... short interoggation... but good chapter.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 10, 2006 Author Share Posted December 10, 2006 she was going to come back to continue it. but she never got to. anyway thanks for the comment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 10, 2006 Share Posted December 10, 2006 Good Chapter, even though it was short. I'm looking foward to more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 11, 2006 Share Posted December 11, 2006 Another good chapter. And looking forward to see more. *Da** insomnia! (Also correct me if I'm wrong.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 19, 2006 Author Share Posted December 19, 2006 Chapter 3: The Crash Bastila ran down the ramp of the Ebon Hawk and stood on the landing platform. She could see Revan’s ship on the platform left to hers. She was about to turn around to leave, when a hand grabbed her shoulder and she heard the snap-hiss of a lightsaber. She flipped her lightsaber with the force and it zoomed into her hand. The saber activated and she flipped back landing behind the attacker. Bastila peered at his face… It was Revan. “Revan,” she cried in surprise. “Bastila,” he breathed. Bastila ran into his arms and embraced him in a hug, which soon developed into a kiss. Valk choose that moment to appear. “Who is this,” Revan asked Bastila. “Darth Valk, he was a Jedi who served with you in the Mandalorian Wars, the other jedi general.” Revan rounded on Valk, “You mean the one who fled near the end of the battle right before I was crowned Dark Lord of the Sith?” Valk looked at him with hatred in his eyes, “I didn’t flee.” “Yeah, then why weren’t you there, and you were exiled in Council from the JEDI ORDER after the battle,” Revan practically screamed. “Believe what you want, one day will pay for it.” With that Valk walked away. “Coward,” Revan sneered after him. The escape pod finally slammed into a planet. Dirt hit the view screen, blocking out Talarius’s view of where he was. Talarius grabbed his lightsaber and quickly started to cut a hole in the escape pod. The door fell off and he quickly jumped out. Talarius’s body slammed against the ground as he landed and he quickly got up. He looked around and saw he was on the abandon moon of Sekot called M-3. Revan walked into the Ebon Hawk’s apartments and sat on his bunk. He then started to work on his journal. From the Private Journals of Revan Skywalker: I run through the Star Forge with Bastila at my side. Her hair moves like the wind as we run. I look ahead and see three dark jedi ahead. We ignite out lightsabers and I spring into action. My lightsabers flash and kills one of the dark jedi. Bastila leaps up and silences the other two. Then she motions me that we should continue so I continue to run with Bastila at my side. –Star Forge, 3,956 Preview for the next chapter: Grivis walked up and entered the high council room. He then quickly took his seat. “Shall we continue?” he asked. “Yes,” Ferio said. “Of course,” He then motioned for Zeorg to speak. “Master,” He started. “We have some very bad news.” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 19, 2006 Author Share Posted December 19, 2006 also on the charecter im working on putting url images of all them so keep a eye on that. so far revan and Ferio are done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 19, 2006 Share Posted December 19, 2006 Good Chapter, as always Grivis. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted December 19, 2006 Author Share Posted December 19, 2006 thanks pottsie:) also the charecter url images are complete except for 1 person. But i've found a good pic for one, but the sabers need to be red not blue. So i've asked on the pic request thread for that change. The is The Jedi Exile, Darth Valk is the one i found. Edit: i just found the other one a pic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin Skywalker Posted December 19, 2006 Share Posted December 19, 2006 BTW i just looked at the bio's again, and you made Bastila younger than Revan... Bastila is about 20 not 34.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.