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using a stelth feild generater the figure came from the shadows and snuck up on dwain and then cut the generater off to reveal himself. he is a 6' 3" human male with short spiked up jet black hair and a gotee. he is wearing customized dark jedi master robes.

 

"marvelous language, isn't it. a pitty you dont understand a single word. allow me to introduce myself. i have gone by many names, most of wich have been forgotten long ago. my most recent title, however was darth ranis.......sith lord. oh but do not be alarmed my friends. i left that life behind many years ago."

 

ranis pulls a datapad out of his red and black robes and uses it to interface with the computer, then hands it to dwain.

 

"even the biggest imbicile knows to carry a translator program in this day and age."

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(Hmm, perhaps you could have used a better entrance, no?)

 

Zayne was startled by the appearance of the newcomer, "Who the hell are you and how the hell did you get here?"

 

The stranger then introduced himself, claiming to be Darth Ranis, a Sith Lord who had forgotten his ways. Zayne still found this most weird but shook it off. He gazed at the computer terminal. He understood some Rakatan but this was most advanced.

 

"I'm not sure a translator can translate this dialect."

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Zeldron was as surprised as Zayne at the appearance of the newcomer, a former Sith Lord, Darth Ruin, he introduced himself. "Hmph, a Sith Lord who renounced his ways?!Seems hard to believe to me...", he thought to himself. Suspicious by nature, Zeldron told the newcomer:"Whatever your motives and intentios are Ranis, I'll be keeping my eye on you...".

 

Turning then towards the Rakatan computer, he tried to comprehend what the computer was saying and succeded in it, albeit only partially and he was still uncertain. "I think the computer's saying that you can ask it various questions, including who was here before us and I think something about Rakatan genetic material...my Rakatan's a little rusty though...".

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(yea, i know the entrance was weak but its all i could think of at the time. it was almoast 2 am.)

 

"oh calm yourselves! you all look like a bunch of startled wamp rats. as hard as it may be to believe i did indeed cast down my title of sith lord. thoe my reasons are my own and i dont feel you deserve an explanation just yet, however my purpose....... i know little of your travels but much of your goal. revan is indeed a valuable key to saving the republic, and i wish to join your search."

 

ranis looks around at the doubtful faces, and can see that his words have swayed no one

 

"i have much to offer"

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(No offence but could you please try to improve your grammer? I know none of ours is perfect, but we've got the basic down like capitals and periods.)

 

"If you want to join then join, I have no problems with it, but if you do, then we'll be watching you closely, but then again, it's not my desicion," said William.

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((Yeah, it makes things alot more easier for us to understand. Comprende?))

 

"Hmmmm...." Dwain eyed this new lurker. "Should we trust a former Sith? This seems awfully fishy to me!" he thought.

 

"A lot to offer, eh? Then you wouldn't happen to know Rakatan dialect, would you?"

 

He really wished he had a Sonic Imprint Sensor on him. Translating the Rakatan language would be most helpful. He turned to the computer.

 

"Err... do you speak Galactic Basic?"

 

The computer spoke somethng again, but this time used a different language... one Dwain couldn't understand.

 

"This is hopeless..." Dwain muttered.

 

"Not as hopeless as you think!" That definatly came from the computer.

 

"Hey, I understood that! But why would a 25,000 year old computer speak Noghrese?"

 

"Subject: Noghri. A primitive being native to their homeworld Honoghr, one of the 500 planets the Rakatan Empire have conquered."

 

"Hmm... I suppose that explains a few things..."

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Although knowing more about sith than she was letting on, Natalie had no comment to make regarding the newcomer.

 

"If the computer seems to respond to the Noghri language, then why cannot it not understand basic?" She asked innocently, she felt uncomfortable in the dank cold room.

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"Because Galactic Basic was derived by the human race, as well as the Duros and Bothan... which I doubt these races were taken under control by this Rakatan Empire. Otherwise, we would certainly know about it." Dwain answered Natalies question.

 

"In answer to your previous question, this great temple holds the secrets of the Star Forge, as well as the entire history of the Rakatan Empire and its planetry archive and databank of certain species."

 

"Certain species?" this brought up Dwain's attention. He knew for a fact that the Rupublic Archive had no knowledge of the True Sith. But perhaps this computer may achieve his expected result.

 

"I'd like to search your databanks!" Dwain spoke in Noghrese. "Search The True Sith... er, please?"

 

"Searching.... one positive file found "True Sith""

 

At last! Some clues regarding to the True Sith. And the sooner they find them, the sooner they'll find Revan!

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"We'd have to obviously know about it since we would be enslaved," He remarked as Dwain then asked the computer to search for the True Sith.

 

"Searching.... one positive file found "True Sith"", He heard the computer said, "I wouldn't get too excited," Zayne replied, "While it may help alot on our journey to find Revan, it may also be just a simple letdown. However, i wouldn't mind a miracle."

 

It was now the moment of truth.

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"Searching.... one positive file found "True Sith"" He heard the computer say.

 

"What!? Is that what Revan went searching for?" Ranis says in suprise as he moves in closer to the console to hear better. "My old masters at the sith academy told me it was nothing more than a story told by senile old sith who could never back up their insanity with a holocron to prove it. If Revan went to find them..........." Ranis is then interrupted by the computer.

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"Sith were the dominant natives of the barren world of what they call Koriban. One of the 500 worlds the Infinite Empire had conqured, up untill Two Thousand Years the Rakata were forced to retreat after a resilence made by the one called King Adas--

 

"Yeah, yeah! Spare us the history lesson and tell us where the True Sith are!" Dwain demanded. But the computer simply continued.

 

"I aplogise, but I am unable to present a simplefied edition. As a result, I must continue... Before our forces have fully retreated, the Infinite Empire was able to discover the species possesing technology to relocate themselves on other systems... even inside of our own region!"

 

If what this computer said was true, then that meant there had to be True Sith settlements on worlds not within the limits of the Unknown Regions. Worlds the republic may no of...

 

"True Sith were scattered in random parts of the region the Rakatan never knew about... except for one place! Our sources tell us one fraction of them are located on one of three moons orbiting a planet, home of a powerful political diversion known as the "Chiss"

 

Dwain had never heard of the Chiss before. Perhaps it was another empire of sorts as ancient as the Rakatan's. Then again, what would he know?

 

"Can you give us the coordinates?"

 

"Certainly... allow me to process the data needed...""

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"WHAT?! Did the computer say CHISS?!" Zayne shouted out pointing at the computer, then sighing and putting his hands on his head, "We're screwed, we're so screwed..."

 

Everyone looked at him in confusion, "Once i was in a Cargo ship and we were supposed to do a trade of goods with some guys but were intercepted by some others called Chiss. Turns out they were almost humans but with blue skin and red eyes, most had black hair. So, all of a sudden, the Chiss take over the ship and send us out of there and even threatened to kill us! Their ships were so advanced i knew one shot could kill us all. And i didn't get paid!" He explained to them, his fear of Chiss unfounded and with roots of only stupidity and paranoia.

 

"Whatever, just let's go."

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"The chiss are a species who live on the unknown reasons, they have a powerful military and have Red eyes and Blue skin." She lamented, she then decided to confront the Ex Sith Lord once again.

 

"What made you turn away from the Sith? One does not simply turn away from such teachings on their own accord, the Sith *Make* you believe their point of view is correct, and no other, do tell." She interrogated (Not literally :p)

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Ranis turns to look at Natalie.

 

"What made me turn away from the sith? My reasons are my own." Ranis moves in closer and whispers in her ear. "The question is, why would someone hide her past from her traveling companions? I know what your hiding from them, but you have my silence..........for now."

 

Ranis then backs away from Natalie and adresses the whole group.

 

"Truthfully, I never actually believed in the teachings of the sith. My only reason for joining them was to work my way up their ranks and lets say........... remove an old friend from a position of power in the traditional sith way. Kill him and take it for yourself. Once I achieved my goal, the title of sith lord ment nothing to me so i took up an apprentice and gave him the title when he was ready, but this is hardly a time for a history lesson. Don't we have a Chiss planet to visit?"

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"Data process complete! Download has been granted!" said the computer. Dwain inserted his DataPad inside of the old computer, and began to send the information they needed.

 

Suddenly, another noise of something demonic filled the entire temple.

 

"Uh... heh heh... Computer? Could you please hurry up? I think we need to get going..."

 

"Upload completed!"

 

Dwain snatched the DataPad from the computer, and cautioned to everybody.

 

"Guys... I think now is a good time to leave... Dont you?"

 

The wall behind them smashed and broke open. Dust particles and pieces of rock filled the air. As the dust cleared, a huge figure was introduced.

 

It was a very large Kretch... atleast three times the size of a normal one. Its mouths had long sharp fangs baring out and its crown was filled with spikes, which ran along its back.

 

Now Dwain knew what Reaper meant about "she"... as in the mother of the Kretch hive within this temple. Drool oozed from it mouth, as it snarled at the intruders.

 

"Time to go!" He ran to the door.

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Zayne heard the rumbling sound as Dwain finished up. "Uh?" He mumbled, confused and then looking behind as he saw the Queen Kretch. His eyes widened in shock and his lips perked to say something:

 

"HOLY-" Zayne shouted out before he rolled sideways to dodge a large piece of debris. He then started to run for the door while he took out another thermal detonator, "Now's the time for this!"

 

Zayne then momentarily turned around while running and threw the thermal detonator, in hopes it would kill the Kretch.

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(I meant unknown REGIONS, not reasons rofl)

 

Natalie held her ground, staring at the Sith, despite being a little nerved by the fact, did he know?

 

"Do not try and blackmail or pretend you know me, your precense is tolerated by the others, not me." She countered, and too busy focusing on the Ex-Sith, she was startled when a large Kretch entered the room.

 

Although caught off guard, she quickly consolidated and followed Dwain.

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Although startled by the Queen Kretch's appearance, Zeldron was quick enough to dodge a couple pieces of debries. Staring then towards the massive Kretch, he remarked: "That's gotta be the biggest bug I've ever seen!!!". Afterwards, he turned towards the door where most of his companions were heading and said:"I'm with you Dwain! The sooner we get outta here, the better! Besides, I don't particularly enjoy the idea of being eaten by a gigantic insect, as I'm sure none of the others don't either."

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"Upload completed!" He heard the computer say.

 

"Good lets get out of hear." Ranis could sense the uneasiness that hung in the air even after he finished telling his story to his new travelng companions. As he streatched out his feelings to try and read Natalie's thoughts he sensed anouther being that he had not sensed before and it felt like trouble. Just as Ranis is reaching for his lightsabers a giant Queen Kretch breaks through the wall and sends rubble flying in every direction. In full fighting stance with lightsabers drawn he sees a few of his companions flee from the room.

 

"Damn! Looks like I've gotta fiht my way out of this." He says as he realizes that the bug had him cournered. Ranis sucsessfully uses beast controll on the kretch and was makeing it leave the room untill a rock fell on it's head and it broke free. The beast then ran twards Ranis and tried to swoop him up but he managed to cut off the bugs arm with his lighsaber and run under it and out the door. Having escaped the bug he ran to catch up with Dwain, Natalie, Zayne, William, and Zeldron.

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Dwain sprinted across that stupid puzzle they had to solve previously. The tiles lit up, but he didn't mind them. All that mattered at this current moment was escaping this wretched tomb!

 

He turned his head around, to see the persuing monster. She was gaining on them. Then he heard the explosion of the thermal detonator. The Queen screeched, as the blast radius managed to hit her. But that didn't exterminate her. The insect crawled through the door way entering the puzzle room.

 

Though it probably didn't have much effect, Dwain aimed his blaster at the creature and fired rapidly. Most of the shots missed, but some of them hit the queen at the thick skull. That just made it even angrier...

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