randydg Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 [TSL]Poll:Vote on wich intro movie you like or wright in with a modified version. It needs to stay on the same theme main points are: 1. 5 years before manalorian wars. 2. about the jedi academy inside the jedi temple. 3. about trouble sturing up from all corners of the galaxy 4. and something to bring it to the jedi thats going through the jedi trials. Here are the choices for the poll: (1) About five years before the mandalorian wars, the jedi temple on coruscant was filled with promising students. During this time the jedi knights often visited other worlds to settle disputes and keep the peace. At the Jedi temple, the jedi council started reciving distress calls from all over the galaxy. The best of the jedi were sent to investigate. Meanwhile, Master grayson is prepairing his aprentice for knight hood. Will the aprentice suceed or fail.... (2) Around 5 years before the mandalorian wars the jedi temple was filled with masters and students. Around the middle of the jedi tower, promising padawans gathered to learn and train from the great jedi masters. It was a time of peace. The galaxy often called upon the members of the jedi order to settle disputes and brough peace between planets. But like all things peace only lasts for a time. And that time was almost up. Meanwhile, In the jedi academy, Master Grayson prepairs his padawan for the last trial in the jedi trials. Little did the padawan know that he will change things to come for centuries. (3) About five years before the mandalorian wars, the jedi temple on coruscant was filled with promising students. During this time the jedi knights often visited other worlds to settle disputes and keep the peace. However, Peace was not to last. It started with distress calls comming from all over the galaxy. The Council sent their best jedi to investigate, but none returned. Meanwhile, Master grayson is prepairing his aprentice for knight hood. Will the aprentice suceed or fail.... 4. Reply with your own with the conditions above. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
logan23 Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 The ones you have are good, Here is another idea for one based on your original 3....... Five years before the Mandalorian Wars, the Jedi Temple on Coruscant was filled with promising students. During this time the Jedi Knights were sent to worlds to help settle disputes and keep the peace. The Jedi Council has started to receive disturbing distress calls from all over the galaxy. The Council have sent many Jedi to investigate but all of them vanished with out a trace. Meanwhile on Coruscant, Master Grayson prepares his padawan for the last test in the Trials to become a Jedi Knight.... Logan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malpense Posted August 11, 2008 Share Posted August 11, 2008 I like logans... it's written in a better way, more formal and in keeping with Star Wars intro movies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikmin Posted August 12, 2008 Share Posted August 12, 2008 Logan's one is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randydg Posted August 12, 2008 Author Share Posted August 12, 2008 Logan23. I see one problem with it. Didn't they (in others) use the past tense or was it just the "a long time ago" in a galaxy far.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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