[nsw-fic] Star wars knights of the new republic chapter 1: fall of the new jedi order

[battle111]

Star wars

 

Knights of the new republic

 

Chapter one:

 

Fall of the new jedi order

 

 

In the galaxy's darkest hour the mighty Jaden Korr

with his master Kyle katarn arrived on the planet Taspir

to rescue Rosh Penin the great student from the jedi

academy from the evil dark jedi Alora but when the

two jedi knights arrived on the rocky planet of Taspir

they saperated in two diffrent sides to easily find Rosh

but when Jaden founded Rosh he knew that Rosh is

a traitor to the new republic he wanted to kill him but

Rosh sed to him that he is not a traitor but Rosh felt

that Jaden soon gana fall to the dark side Rosh sed to

him to let go his anger but Jaden striken Rosh with

all of his anger and Rosh did't survived the mighty

sith Alora wonted Jaden to join her and to help Tavion

to free Marka Ragnos but Jaden did't agreed he sed that he

wants to have the scepter of Ragnos for him self he pulled

Alora down from were she was standing and with all of his

anger he striken her when she was not looking Jaden killed

Alora in cold blood and now Jaden is no longer Jaden Korr

but now he is Lord Korr the mighty sith who will restore

the great sith EMPIRE he went to his ship and fleed to

Korriban to eliminate Tavion once and for all but when

Lord Korr fleed to Korriban the great jedi knight Kyle Kattarn

founded Rosh dead on the floor Rosh sed to Kyle that he lost

both his students but Kyle sed to Rosh that he is a jedi and

Rosh died then Kyle realaised that Jaden went to korriban

Kyle quickly went to his ship and floowed to korriban to find

Jaden but when Lord Korr arrived on korriban he saw that

two jedi are trying to stop him Lord Korr called the power of

the dark side and he killed them now Lord Korr began slaying

every jedi and Reborn that were stanting in his way to acive

the great scepter of Ragnos and after then he arrived at the

Tomb and he founded Tavion.Tavion asked Lord Korr to join but

he deniyed he went in a terrible sith duel he finnished Tavion

and graped the scepter after then his old master Kyle Katarn

arrived at the tomb and he founded Lord Korr Kyle tryed to stop him

but Lord Korr was to powerful they went in a deadly confrantation

now a fallen aprentice confrants his old jedi master.Kyle tryed to

defeat him but he lost lord Korr left Kyle unconcues and he taken the

scepter after then the mighty Luke Skywalker arrived at the Tomb

to find what's going on he founded Kyle left unconcues Kyle

awakened and told Luke that Jaden has turn to the dark side and

he was concumed by Lord Korr.Kyle told Luke that we must try to

stop him and to destroy the scepter Kyle sed that he lost both

his students but Luke told Kyle that Yoda and Ben kenobi were

both great jedi and even they lost students then Kyle flowed of the

planet but did Kyle known that soon what's gana happen to the jedi

academy.The mighty sith DARTH KORR gatthered all the remment forces

with all of the dark jedi masters and marched to the massasi temple to

eliminate all jedi and now Luke at Kyle's ship when they were flying Luke

sed to kyle that he sensed a disturbens in the force back on the jedi academy on

Yavin that Jaden has started a second jed purge at the jedi academy and the two jedi realaised that a terible day to the new Republic has began.....

 

to be continued...

l hope everyone liked my story:) l had lots of work to prepare this story and l known that it's weird to see a jedi knight story in the swkotor forum but l just wanted to tell this story l hope you liked it.

[MsFicwriter]

Nice story, but please try and break the text up so it doesn't look like a big wall! XD

[battle111]

Nice story, but please try and break the text up so it doesn't look like a big wall! XD

 

okay then next time l will try to make the text right and my bad and sorry everyone if l made the text wrong but thank's for the advice MsFicwriter thank's!

[machievelli]

read

[battle111]

read

 

Yes,yes l known but l wont to known is my story good:cool:

[machievelli]

review will be posted later today

[battle111]

okay

[duster]

I like it.There is no better way to describe the ending of JKA

[battle111]

I like it.There is no better way to describe the ending of JKA

 

Well the ather story will be abaut the attack on the massasi temple

[machievelli]

Did you read my critique? What this is, is not a story; it's a synopsis, since there is no characterization or detail to catch the reader's eye.

[battle111]

Did you read my critique? What this is, is not a story; it's a synopsis, since there is no characterization or detail to catch the reader's eye.

 

Well not yet l will check it out