NiKo Posted January 15, 2002 Share Posted January 15, 2002 just wrote it now in 15 mins. i'd love to see your comments. (warning! contains offensive material) My paranoia i dont know what came over me splitting headaches and agony pain and suffering, not feeling quite allright i guess this is what you feel when you'r about to die. issues i thought about a few minutes ago i dont give a sh*t about them no more i just want the pain to be over f*ck this world and its screwed up society i rather die and not feel a thing than live and feel this pain i'll be okay just as long i keep my sanity i'll be okay if i can focus on reallity i'll be okay i dont need guidance you'll be okay to if you follow my sense. maybe i'm being paranoid maybe i'm saying bullsh*t and cant see the beauty of it maybe i'll just take a pill and the pain will go away and i'll start seeing the world in a positive way nah, i wont do that, i LIKE hating it all gives me something to complain about gives me some f*cked up thoughts gives me the feeling maybe society hates me as well ah who gives a crap, were all going to hell i'll be okay just as long i keep my sanity i'll be okay if i can focus on reallity i'll be okay i dont need guidance you'll be okay to if you follow my sense. the pain is gone. just vanished without a trace i feel fine again. theres a smile on my face so i guess i'm just paranoid somethings f*cked up in my brain i guess thats whats causing my confusion and pain. but i'll be okay just as long i keep my sanity i'll be okay if i can focus on reallity i'll be okay i dont need guidance you'll be to okay if you follow my sense. you can be okay if you follow follow my sense you'll be okay Niko Watts - Gatorbait 2002 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted January 15, 2002 Share Posted January 15, 2002 why are you so damn good? you brilliant *******.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted January 15, 2002 Author Share Posted January 15, 2002 i'll take that as a compliment... thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Al-back from the BigWhoop Posted January 15, 2002 Share Posted January 15, 2002 cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelenW Posted January 15, 2002 Share Posted January 15, 2002 Niko, I'm sorry for being nosy but I just saw your name at the bottom of your song. Watts??? Isn't that an English name?? Were you born in Israel or did your family move there from somewhere else. Sorry if I'm being nosy or ignorant even, but I would expect someone from Israel to have a less English sounding name. Even French names are different sounding to English and they are only accross the channel!!! Again sorry if I sound ignorant, I don't think you should have an arab name or anything in case you think I have that mentality, I was just curious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grannen Posted January 15, 2002 Share Posted January 15, 2002 Helen. You can read about NiKos grandma Magda Watts here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted January 16, 2002 Share Posted January 16, 2002 ..............and you wrote it in fifteen minutes........man, you are some sort of a twisted, gifted, genious.............bah! who needs ya? j/k Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HelenW Posted January 16, 2002 Share Posted January 16, 2002 Wow, what a fascinating story!! What a remarkable Grandma you have Niko, maybe thats where you get your creativity from. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deadmeat_X Posted January 17, 2002 Share Posted January 17, 2002 Oh fu(k! That reminds me i wrote a song myself! I was gonna post it some time ago, but, well, I just forgot. Let me see if I can find it again...won't promise anything BTW great song man! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted January 17, 2002 Author Share Posted January 17, 2002 *blushes* gee thanks guys. Helen, many of us here in israel have 'english american' names but theres also a large population of middle eastern names. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fender Posted January 17, 2002 Share Posted January 17, 2002 Nice song dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deadmeat_X Posted January 18, 2002 Share Posted January 18, 2002 OK I feel really stupid, especially cause I have to post just after NiKo's song, but: This is a song I wrote 2 months ago, it's pretty depressed, although I wasn't sad back then. Just read, and try not to laugh too loud My world - by Deadmeat This world Where nobody can reach me This world Where nobody can see me This world Where no-one understands me This world Where there's nobody but me This dark place Somewhere in my brain My deepest feelings Are driving me insane The ideas, the thing, The thoughts that I hide Bright on the outside, But inside it's night And no-one understands me Cause nobody can see The things that I see, When I'm alone with me This world Where nobody can reach me This world Where nobody can see me This world Where no-one understands me This world Where there's nobody but me I pull myself trough the days Without showing anyone That my mind is half rotten And my soul is long gone My friends think they know me But if they'd look in my eyes They would see the insanity And the conscience that dies And when no-ones around I open the gates to hell Inside becomes outside When I'm alone with myself This world Where nobody can reach me This world Where nobody can see me This world Where no-one understands me This world Where there's nobody but me And I'd like to kill them, like to hurt them To make 'em see Make them cry, make them suffer. To show the real me This world Where nobody can reach me This world Where nobody can see me This world Where no-one understands me This world Where there's nobody but me This world Where nobody can reach me This world Where nobody can see me This world Where no-one understands me This world Where there's nobody but me Copyright 2001/2001 - EVERT VAN AART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted January 18, 2002 Author Share Posted January 18, 2002 wooooh...i like it i like it a lot! nice song deadmeat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fender Posted January 18, 2002 Share Posted January 18, 2002 Ok, though that was a great song Deadmeat, It got me all depressed, so now I'm gonna sing one (Not Mine, just my standard depressed song). Afraid to shoot Strangers - Iron Maiden Lying, awkae at night, I wipe the sweat form my brow...... But it's not the fear! Cos I'd rather go now...... Trying, to visualise, the horrors that will lay ahead... A desert Sand Mound! A Burial Ground....... When it comes to the time, Are we Partners in crime? When it comes to the time, Are we ready to die? God, let us go now, and finish what must be done.... Thy Kingdom come! Thy shall be done.... On Earth. Trying, to justify, to ourselves, the reasons to go, Should we let and Let Live? Forget.... or forgive? But how, can we let them go on this way? The reign, of terror and corruption must end...... And deep down, we know, there's no other way! No trust, no reasoning no more to say..... Afraid to shoot Strangers....! http://www.ironmaiden.com/ironmaiden/discography/fotd/strangers.asf Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted January 19, 2002 Share Posted January 19, 2002 you call THAT depressing, try Pool Shark or Radio on for size: Pool Shark: Lying in my plastic bed, thinkin' how things weren't so cool to me My baby likes to shoot pool I like lying naked in my bedroom Tying on the dinosaur tonight it used to be so cool Now I've got the needle and I can't bleed, but I can't breathe. Take it away and I want more and more One day I'm gonna lose the war Lying in my plastic bed thinkin' how things weren't so cool to me My baby likes to shoot pool I like lying naked in my bedroom Tying on the dinosaur tonight it used to be so cool Now I've got the needle and I can't shake but I can't breathe Take it away and but I want more and more One day I'm gonna lose the war And Radio? Radio: Shaking like a dog ****tin' razorblades, waking up next to nothing after dreaming of you and me I'm waking up all alone, waking up so relieved while you're taking your time with apologies, I'm making my plans for revenge Red eyes on orange horizons If Columbus was wrong I'd drive straight off the edge I'd drive straight off the edge Taking your own life with boredom, I'm taking my own life with wine - it helps you to rule out the sorrow, it helps me to empty my mind Making the most of a bad time I'm smoking the brains from my head Leaving the coal calling the kettle black and orange and red This kettle is seeing red I've got a big fat ****in' bone to pick with you my darling In case you haven't heard I'm sick and tired of trying I wish you would take my radio to bathe with you, plugged in and ready to fall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Natty Posted January 19, 2002 Share Posted January 19, 2002 I still think the most depressing song I've ever heard is Eminem-Kim, sheeeesh who really writes about raping and killing their gf? I don't think I'll be rushing out to see the Eminem movie somehow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted January 19, 2002 Author Share Posted January 19, 2002 .....why is this topic being all depressed and sh*t? my song was about helathy normal teen depressions. a view of life. and i think deadmeats was to. you cant make a rock song about flowers and a purple dinosaur. eminems song isnt depressing, its just.....psychopatic or maybe he wants the atention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted January 19, 2002 Share Posted January 19, 2002 Originally posted by NiKo .....why is this topic being all depressed and sh*t? my song was about helathy normal teen depressions. a view of life. and i think deadmeats was to. True...but, we are showing lyrics of depression because, they too, are healthy. Naturally you'd be depressed when addicted to heroin, and depressed when your gf leaves you...etc...etc...if you weren't depressed you'd be nuts.......... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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