NiKo Posted February 13, 2002 Share Posted February 13, 2002 it's not one of my most intelegent songs. but it's catchy when i sing it... (sounds a bit slipknot) tell me what ya think ok? ------------------------- Falling in love is easy. snaping out of love is hard. its easy going crazy staying sane can tear me apart. dreaming about the future may please me. but remembering my past pains my heart. the road may seem easy but the way is much harder than it seems. the goal may look close to reach but remember, Life's a B*tch. life's a b*tch... having a good time is easy. not loosing your control is hard. {or is it the other way around?} asking a question is easy answering a question is hard. {some answers can never be found} the road may seem easy but the way is much harder than it seems. the goal may look close to reach but remember, Life's a B*tch. life's a b*tch... life's a b*tch... no matter what your mommy tells ya... life's a motherf*cking- backstabbing- sh*tgiving- doublecrossing- filth tossing- fartsniffing -faith killing- joy stealing-eye poking- blood drinking- heart biting- B*tch!!! so enjoy the ride... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fender Posted February 13, 2002 Share Posted February 13, 2002 ****in' Brilliant! You are one hell of a song writer, NiKo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kylilin Posted February 13, 2002 Share Posted February 13, 2002 life's a ***** and then you die, thats why we get high, cause you never know when you're gonna go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted February 13, 2002 Share Posted February 13, 2002 man niko..its so true i just wrote, like, two songs thinking they were pretty good and yours blows them both out of the water lol, it would be an embaressment to post them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
José Mané Posted February 13, 2002 Share Posted February 13, 2002 its good, but its kinda weird the way you organized it. I need to see it together with the instruments. do you have that part done too? i see what you tried to do by reapeating easy and hard, but (im not sure y) it didnt sound like a game of words, but more like a simple repetition was the "seem" repetition intentional? what happened at the end? (again, i need the instruments to be sure) this part is awsome: the goal may look close to reach/ but remember, Life's a B*tch./ life's a b*tch... at the end, eye poking is kinda ramdom there in the middle, try it as one of the first ones. Originally posted by Kylilin life's a bicht and then you die, thats why we get high, cause you never know when you're gonna go nice. Guybrush122, you should post it here, so we can all give constructive advices. Fred Mercury is 1 of the best composers i ve ever seen (or heard), he is the 1 that inspires me (who cares if hes gay and hes dead, he good and period!). Who inspires you guys? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted February 14, 2002 Author Share Posted February 14, 2002 Originally posted by José Mané its good, but its kinda weird the way you organized it. I need to see it together with the instruments. do you have that part done too? i see what you tried to do by reapeating easy and hard, but (im not sure y) it didnt sound like a game of words, but more like a simple repetition no we havent recorded it yet. the easy and hard thing may not rhyme. but when i sing it you really dont notice, cause those 2 words are kinda 'burped' (listen to KoRns "children of the korn to know what i mean by that) and when i sing it i stretch the word untill you cant really see that it doesnt rhyme, (easyyy-aaaah - haaarrrd-aah) something like that. Originally posted by José Mané at the end, eye poking is kinda ramdom there in the middle, try it as one of the first ones. once again, this part is being sung really really fast and once again in the 'burby' way, so i dunno if anyone will even notice... but i can always play with the lyrics some more. and hey, thanks for all the positive replyes dudes, makes me feel good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted February 15, 2002 Author Share Posted February 15, 2002 stop being so modest GB! modesty is a girly thing... c'mon i'm sure...no....i KNOW they're great cause you have a Great mind for these things! anyways here's another song i've just written....its called 'Overload" Overload sadness, anger, chewing up my heart confusing me so i dont know where to start how can i express myself when i got no lips how can you even hear me, you ungreatfull little b*tch? i cant seem to find the words to express the way i feel the confusion in my brain deny's all that is real hate, love, all mixed up together now depression, joy, f*cks me up completely now nothing makes sense to me anymore what am i even here for!? holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!! to many thoughts going in my head!! to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad! to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!! i think therefor i am, therefore i'm going mad! why,what,where, and when every answer i got is replaced by a question i can open my mouth, but only screaming comes out nothing i say makes sense nothing i think makes sense am i making any sense? or am i saying nonsense? holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!! to many thoughts going in my head!! to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad! to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!! i think therefor i am, therefore i'm going mad! where's the off switch to my brain!? there's gotta be a way to keep me sane! all i feel is the pain of my brain trying to NOT go insane. whoah, thats a lot off rhymes in one little f*cking verse ....erm.......nurse, purse, oh f*ck this, lets reverse... {reversing sound} holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!! to many thoughts going in my head!! to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad! to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!! i think therefore i am, i think therefore i am!! i think therefore i am!! Mad!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted February 15, 2002 Share Posted February 15, 2002 Originally posted by NiKo stop being so modest GB! modesty is a girly thing... c'mon i'm sure...no....i KNOW they're great cause you have a Great mind for these things! anyways here's another song i've just written....its called 'Overload" Overload sadness, anger, chewing up my heart confusing me so i dont know where to start how can i express myself when i got no lips how can you even hear me, you ungreatfull little b*tch? i cant seem to find the words to express the way i feel the confusion in my brain deny's all that is real hate, love, all mixed up together now depression, joy, f*cks me up completely now nothing makes sense to me anymore what am i even here for!? holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!! to many thoughts going in my head!! to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad! to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!! i think therefor i am, therefore i'm going mad! why,what,where, and when every answer i got is replaced by a question i can open my mouth, but only screaming comes out nothing i say makes sense nothing i think makes sense am i making any sense? or am i saying nonsense? holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!! to many thoughts going in my head!! to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad! to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!! i think therefor i am, therefore i'm going mad! where's the off switch to my brain!? there's gotta be a way to keep me sane! all i feel is the pain of my brain trying to NOT go insane. whoah, thats a lot off rhymes in one little f*cking verse ....erm.......nurse, purse, oh f*ck this, lets reverse... {reversing sound} holy f*ck!! cant even remember what i just said!! to many thoughts going in my head!! to many thoughts! i think i'm going mad! to many thoughts! cant distinguish good from bad!! i think therefore i am, i think therefore i am!! i think therefore i am!! Mad!!! Christ, man.....Overload rocks the casbah! alright...ill stop being modest and post my ****ty song (its called "Loving Hate") Is love worth living for? Is love worth breathing for? Then why am I so unhappy With Love? And people toy with my effections of... And tell me lies about my rejections from... I'm rejected from you. I can't stand another broken heart Not one God, not one They say that time can heal all of loves wounds yet mine have never been... they were never healed before Yeah! My heart is broken and bleeding on the floor and they just point and laugh My heart is broken and bleeding on the floor and they just point and laugh like all the others did before All Ican say is When my heart breaks I'm never the same as I was before! before! before! After my first heart break Ive never been the same before! ok, *cringes* tell me what you think....no holds barred....I can take it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted February 15, 2002 Author Share Posted February 15, 2002 ...and you were ashamed to post that why!? that song wets the cat's pajamas....mmmm, or something with that affect.... its cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted February 15, 2002 Share Posted February 15, 2002 Originally posted by NiKo ...and you were ashamed to post that why!? that song wets the cat's pajamas....mmmm, or something with that affect.... its cool! thanks man....but overdrive was way cooler than loving hate...by far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted February 15, 2002 Author Share Posted February 15, 2002 Originally posted by Guybrush122 thanks man....but overdrive was way cooler than loving hate...by far so you say.... oh and....overLOAD.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted February 15, 2002 Share Posted February 15, 2002 Originally posted by NiKo so you say.... oh and....overLOAD.... *ahem*i knew that... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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