Guybrush122 Posted February 26, 2002 Share Posted February 26, 2002 theyre two songs I wrote for Human Error...tell me your comments...im eager to know Awkward Moments: Tiny ****ing moments Eating at my brain All those awkward times They drive me insane They spit and tear at my heart Rip off my arm And I know it's all my fault And these ****ing moments They rip me apart They just eat away My skull is numbing I'm throbbing with pain My heart is mangled I can not see I feel like I'm strangled Why can't I see? They spit and tear at my heart Eat out my guts And it's all my fault Those long spent moments They chew at my brain **** those damn moments Send them straight to hell-- My heat is pumping I can not see There's heavy breathing Sweat dropping **** THIS They spit and tear at my heart I cant ****ing see And I know that it's all my FAULT Things Wrong With Life: She said "get out"-- I packed my bags She said I suck And that I'm a fag But do I care? No; it ain't a lie She's just another thing wrong with life He said "do your homework" I said "**** you, Dad" Then he hit me Right on the head **** him; I don't need him Know why? He's just another thing wrong with life Life's a ***** And then you die You're married? You have kids? Damn, you're gonna die My Mom said "****, you better clean your room" I said, "God No! So screw you too!" She hit me and left She didn't say goodbye... Cause she's just another thing wrong with life The teacher said to me, "Dentention for you!" I said, "No, I'm smarter than all of you!" He locked me up Wouldnt care if I died Schools just another thing wrong with life Life's a ***** And then you die People are **** And that's what's wrong with life comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted February 26, 2002 Share Posted February 26, 2002 2 thumbs way way up in my nose! great songs GB!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted February 26, 2002 Author Share Posted February 26, 2002 Originally posted by NiKo 2 thumbs way way up in my nose! great songs GB!! approval from niko!?! thats a good sign Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted February 26, 2002 Share Posted February 26, 2002 heh, really. i like the message! the 2nd song kinda sounds like an eminem song, but that's a first impression...and screw first impressions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joshi Posted February 27, 2002 Share Posted February 27, 2002 Originally posted by NiKo heh, really. i like the message! the 2nd song kinda sounds like an eminem song, but that's a first impression...and screw first impressions. well if were doing that, the songs crap. second impression: it's great! three thumbs up (genetic mutation, i don't want to talk about it.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted February 27, 2002 Author Share Posted February 27, 2002 Originally posted by NiKo heh, really. i like the message! the 2nd song kinda sounds like an eminem song, but that's a first impression...and screw first impressions. ill send you some of the music......it sounds a lot like the Clash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted February 28, 2002 Share Posted February 28, 2002 Rock on dude! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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