NiKo Posted March 23, 2002 Share Posted March 23, 2002 since were all sharing songs, i've been in a writing mood today i wrote 3 songs in 30 minutes.... -------------------------------------------------------- Your Heart in a Jar sometimes i feel you slipping away away from my hands i know you'l disapear from me one day no one but me understands but i can keep a part of you the part that left me with a permanent scar i can keep your heart in a glass jar you always said i'm crazy you tried to lock me up well now we'll see who's laughing last we'll see who's mind's corrupt. i will keep your heart in a glass jar and store it on my shelf, and when i'll look at it i'll remember what a ***** you are and be glad that i'm alone with myself this is my revenge for all the times you pained my heart you can say that i'm deranged it will nevermore tear me apart. so now your heart belongs to me i can do with it as i please but i wont torment it the way you did just use it to bring you to your knees. you always said i'm crazy you tried to lock me up well now we'll see who's laughing last we'll see who's mind's corrupt. i will keep your heart in a glass jar and store it on my shelf, and when i'll look at it i'll remember what a ***** you are and be glad that i'm alone with myself, i'm forever alone with myself. NiKo Watts, Gatorbait 2002 ® -------------------------------------------------------------- Teenage Crisis You grownups think it’s so easy for us You’ve forgot about all the stress, the mess That us teens need to go through to achieve success Nevertheless, You have to understand Were at the prime of out lives And were waisting it on a moment that never arrives You give us responsibility You take away our freedom You trust on our ability But we always disappoint you. We don’t have a moment of rest House-work, jobs and school tests, And when we finally have a moment of peace You remind us of how perfect you used to be. (Oh please!) It’s the time we discover love Its the time were young and have the power to live! But you make us stay home and study, were so sick of this! "You need to graduate To get a good job, If you don’t study all day, You’ll turn out to be a slob" Who cares?! Let us live! We’ll achieve what we can achieve But in the time be, Let us live Let us live Oh let us live I WANT TO LIVE!! NiKo Watts, Gatorbait 2002 ® -------------------------------------------------------- Shredded (family) Tree they keep asking me questions questions i dont want to answer they ask me about my family i dont like talking about my family its not my fault i come from a broken home... stop investigating me! i said i dont like to talk about it! STOP IT!!!! So what? you think your better? cause you got a 2 parents and a perfect home? what, you think i'm a freak now? cause i live with my mom, and my dad lives alone? what, does that make me a weirdo? cause i have to visit my dad and step sis' every week? what, you feel sorry for me now? well i dont need your pitty, SHOVE IT, you dick! i dont want to talk about it! i said stop, i said quit it, so stop it so quit! why do you have to make a big deal out of it? i was born, i was raised i turned out a bit crazed its not a big issue dont hand me your tissues, just accept me as a person is all i want! just accept me as a person is all i want! so what? you think i'm not normal? cause my life is not as glamourous as yours is? what, you want to ignore me? cause my dads proffesion isnt as good as your dads biz? what, now you have different opinions bout me? cause i dont have anyone wo take care of me when i'm sick? what, you feel sorry for me now? well i dont need your pitty, SHOVE IT, you dick! i dont want to talk about it! i said stop, i said quit it, so stop it so quit! why do you have to make a big deal out of it? i was born, i was raised i turned out a bit crazed its not a big issue dont hand me your tissues, just accept me as a person is all i want! just accept me as a person is all i want! JUST ACCEPT ME AS A PERSON IS ALL I WANT!! NiKo Watts, Gatorbait 2002 ® ------------------------------------------------------------ (i doubt anyone but GB122 will read this) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MurrayDude Posted March 24, 2002 Share Posted March 24, 2002 (i doubt anyone but GB122 will read this) Originally posted by NiKo Wrong. Cool songs, man. You must have a lot of songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted March 24, 2002 Author Share Posted March 24, 2002 not really, 25 songs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted March 24, 2002 Author Share Posted March 24, 2002 but i write like 4 songs a week sometimes all depends on my mood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MurrayDude Posted March 24, 2002 Share Posted March 24, 2002 So you have a Gatorbait album? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted March 26, 2002 Author Share Posted March 26, 2002 no... we have enough songs for an album or 2..... but we dont have one.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted March 26, 2002 Author Share Posted March 26, 2002 heres another one i just wrote: Speechless thoughts Life confused me today Left me with a blank stare and disarray. Left me on a one way street I’ve never felt so incomplete. I want someone to go into my head Someone to explore my thoughts Cause right now I feel my mind is dead. I’ve battled with my brain, I really fought But i can’t understand my own mind It’s hard to say what I’m meaning to say I need to relax, to let go, to unwind, I feel a good brain is waisting away... I know something that no one else does I know the meaning of life But i can never share my knowledge because Its so complex i can’t put into words. Its so frustrating to cant say what’s on your mind The words i try but can not find. I have to unload and share this with some one Some one who will understand and wont make fun Of me, i can’t take this pressure any longer The pressure is just getting stronger! I can’t take it any longer! The pressure is just getting stronger! I know something that no one else does I know the meaning of life But i can never share my knowledge because Its so complex i can’t put into words. I’m sure you know something to Something that is bigger than you And you can’t really explain it And you really need to share it... You can share it in many ways… But not communication… Niko Watts - Gatorbait 2002 ® Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted March 27, 2002 Share Posted March 27, 2002 youre so good why? MAN YOU ROCK i say you make a tape and apply for Epitaph Records or Hellcat Records....thats what my band is trying to do....theyll except you guys in a second im stoked on the band topic: we record our first song soon in april...yet we dont have a name... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Feral Posted March 27, 2002 Share Posted March 27, 2002 Yeah, and my band can't practice until the new school year because our lead guitarist broke his collarbone, and the other guitarist pulled out to work on his own band, Pyrotechnic Llama... I'm not sure why I'm calling it my band...I'm not even in it Ah, well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted March 27, 2002 Author Share Posted March 27, 2002 Originally posted by Guybrush122 im stoked on the band topic: we record our first song soon in april...yet we dont have a name... erm....what happened to 'Human Error'? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MurrayDude Posted March 27, 2002 Share Posted March 27, 2002 Here's a tip: Get the songs copyrighted or else some creep will come on the board and steal the songs. Your stuff is too good to risk to plajerism (did I spell right?). It's very important. Nice work, NiKo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted March 27, 2002 Share Posted March 27, 2002 Originally posted by NiKo erm....what happened to 'Human Error'? taken.......taken by a POP BAND *barfs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted March 27, 2002 Author Share Posted March 27, 2002 they are copyrighted.....so watch out!! a pop band!!? daaarrghhhhhhhh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fender Posted March 28, 2002 Share Posted March 28, 2002 I need people who play instruments before I can start a band. I have me. I suppose I could go solo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Feral Posted March 28, 2002 Share Posted March 28, 2002 Where did you find that out? About the name being taken, that is... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted March 29, 2002 Share Posted March 29, 2002 Originally posted by Wrapped in Glass Where did you find that out? About the name being taken, that is... i went on audiogalaxy.com and searched for Human Error..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted March 29, 2002 Author Share Posted March 29, 2002 *checks* phew....no Gatorbait thank you god! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexa Posted April 1, 2002 Share Posted April 1, 2002 Cool songs... I loved them...especially the first one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted April 4, 2002 Author Share Posted April 4, 2002 the 1st one? thats the one i like the least...it didnt came from the heart. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
COJ Posted April 4, 2002 Share Posted April 4, 2002 so what, all the popular bands dont even write their own songs, so ur special.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alexa Posted April 4, 2002 Share Posted April 4, 2002 so what, all the popular bands dont even write their own songs, so ur special.. I totally agree with that... there are so many bands/groups that don't right their own lyrics and then say that they put so much into the music and that it reflects where they are in their lives but really its someone elses. the 1st one? thats the one i like the least...it didnt came from the heart. its still a great song.. diffent compared to a lot of the stuff you hear today. The other two are great aswell, I can relate to them, which makes a song really stand out... i'd love to hear what they sound like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
StarEye Posted April 4, 2002 Share Posted April 4, 2002 Do you only write the lyrics (I do), or do you compose music too? Is there music to those lyrics? I only write lyrics, but I hand them over to my brother. I can see you’re a grunge/punk kind of guy. I’m more of a Dream Theater/Transatlantic/Spock’s Beard kind of guy. Those are my favourite bands (for the moment). Here’s one I wrote… Myself Again Verse1 I wake up in the middle of the night Standing in my room, with myself to the right At last I see where I am going to But I don’t want to go, must be something I can do Verse2 All this time I never cared to really see Everything I needed is right in front of me “If I could make it, I would do it right away” Those are the memories of the words of yesterday Chorus Everything I longed for Everything I used to need Has become an offer To the beast I used to feed Now times are changing I have water in my veins Now all I long for Is to be myself again Verse3 Today’s the day when I take my final step Out of the vision of a path my father set I’m giving up the illusion that is me This is the day when I finally break free Verse4 As for the past, I’ve been play for too long It wasn’t me that made it all go wrong But now I understand, my life was just a scene I’ve lived my nightmare, instead of living out my dream Bridge I’ve been used now I’m bruised I’ve become but now I’m gone Can’t accept it, can’t regret it This is everything I am I refuse to let this through I must make my final stand Bridge out Disturbance ended that day My other me has flown away Agony has left, dissappeard into the past I’ve become myself again, at last StarEye (23/03/02) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted April 4, 2002 Author Share Posted April 4, 2002 Originally posted by StarEye Do you only write the lyrics (I do), or do you compose music too? Is there music to those lyrics? yeah. i compose the music as well cool song man hey everyone thanks for all the comments...makes me feel like my songs speak out to someone other than me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guybrush122 Posted April 4, 2002 Share Posted April 4, 2002 Originally posted by NiKo yeah. i compose the music as well cool song man hey everyone thanks for all the comments...makes my songs speak out to someone other than me. why do you rock so much? YOU BASTARD! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NiKo Posted April 4, 2002 Author Share Posted April 4, 2002 lol, what, i didnt post any new song...why do i rock now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.