Another new hope.

[Wraith 8]

Im opening this RPG. If you want to join in, come on in. but im posting here every time i feel like it.

 

Rules:

so far i have only one rule: You are not invincable. so you CAN die.

 

have fun!

 

-Wraith 8-

[Wraith 8]

*Corzip was flying threw hyperspace. He was counting the amount of money he had left. he had very very little left. he needed a job to get up to credits again. and his old Z-95 was in terrible shape.

 

He connected an old friend of his. Garik Loran. He asked if he had some jobs for him, or who knew people who had a job for him.

He told him that Jabba the Hutt was looking for some people to go bounty hunting for him. Corzip thanked his friend and considered it. He decided to do it and setted his course toward Tattooine.*

[Wraith 8]

*When Corzip came out of hypersapce there were a lot of ships waiting. Corzip got in line but it didnt take long for him to get down there. Once he landed at Mos Espa Space port and paid his last money to get some supplies and the hangar itself he went into town. Corzip blended into the public*

[Wraith 8]

*Corzip walked threw the croud. it was a long walk from the space port to one one of the building of Jabba the Hutt. He went up to the doorstep and knocked on the door. The street where the building was, was very busy. some people looked up when he went to Jabba's building but soon walked on. A Gamorean opened the door. he grunted to Coprzip.*

 

I've come here for a bounty hunting job for Jabba the Hutt.

 

*The Gamorean grunted again and let him in. once inside, Corzip saw a lot of people here. All of them with blasters and all. Corzip rested his hands on his blaster and saber. they were all in a big chamber with chairs and coutches. a lot of the men and woman here were standing. Corzip seeted himself. 15 minutes later a big holo projecter came out of the floor and it activated. Jabba the Hutt apeared on the screen. At the way he was lying, Corzip guest he was at his Palace in the Judland wastes. He startes talking in his great rolling heavy voice. a droid in the room there translated it to standart.*

 

droid:

His exsulted one welcomes you all. in total 40 bountyhunters.

There has been a tradegy within the company of the high one. A group of 120 people started they're own little pirat group. They were working for the honered one himself. They stole several ships and many suplies from Jabba. They spread they're group over the galaxy and started to raid more storage facilaties of his powerfull one. This has been going on for over 2 and half months now and the mighty Jabba wants it to stop right now. You all will get information on theyre profiles and last known locations. and you will all recieve a sum of 10000 credits in advance. you will get and additional 40000 credits with each member you can give us. and 200 credits for all the supplies you can give back to Jabba.

 

Jabba wants all of them dead or alive. he hopes alive so he can sentence them to death, but if you have no choice, then you are authorized to terminate the targets.

 

The credits were transfered to your acount while i was speaking. Only some of you have no acount so please step forward after the meeting.

 

The data of the pirat group naming themselfs the coruscant slashers, will be transferred to your ship in 2 minutes.

 

This meeting is over.

 

*The hologram of jabba and the droid disapeared and the door opened. almost everybody left the room, only 5 of them remained. Corzip was in the room with 2 Bothans, 1 human and 1 wookie. The image of Jabba suddenly reapeard and a droid in the room came up to the hologram. Jabba talked to the droid and told him what to do.Just before Jabba went away he looked at Corzip and saw his sabers, then he was gone. The droid came up to them and gave them the 10.000 credits and some info just in case. then he took off and so did they all. Corzip was out again. on the streets.*

[Wraith 8]

*Corzip walked threw town. he went into some stores in town to look what they had to offer. Most of the bounty hunters had already left. he came to a big hangar that said there were ships for sale. he walked in. it was pretty busy. he walked around to see the ships. most of them were fighters and not in good shape at all. there were some great looking gighters here. a man came up to him and started to speak Hutts to him.*

 

Corzip

Sorry my friend, but im not very good in foreign languages.

 

Man:

Sorry, i didnt know you were an outlander. see anything you like?

 

Corzip

well i saw a real nice yellow fighter... i think it was noobian. I believe it was the N-1. i realy like it. is it in good shape?? and how much is it?

 

Man:

well it is an old ship but it is in flying order. its only 4000 credits, because it is an oldy. do you have an R2 unit? cause you are gonna need one.

 

Corzip

No i dont.... but ill look around. do you buy space ships as well??

 

Man:

Yeah we do. wanna trade it??

 

Corzip

Welll i do think my Z-95 is worth more that this N-1.

 

Man:

we will see. bring it to the back hangar and i will bring this fighter there too.

 

Corzip

ok. ill look for an Astromech unit then.

 

*Corzip shook hands and left the Hangar.*

[Wraith 8]

*Corzip was on his way toward the main hangar when he saw a robotic shop. he went in and there was a wave bleeps and whirs. The shop keeper just came in from the back and pressed a button on the droid caller. all droids went quiet.*

 

shopkeeper

How can i help you sir?

 

Corzip

Im looking for an strodroid, but i see it is foolish to ask if you ahve any.

 

*The man laughed and took out some keypads and a datacard.*

 

shopkeeper

Well, what sort do you want i have all kind of Astromech droids.

r2 series, r5 series, r4 series, you name it we got it.

 

Corzip

well im about to purchase a N-1 Noobian starfighter and i need an Astromech for it. what kind would be good?

 

shopkeeper

well R2 -units are good for it but R4-units are also very fit for that. Any color you want?

 

Corzip

Ill take an R4 unit. and the color. euh. hmmmm. about orange Yellow or something.

 

shopkeeper

Ah yes here we have such a unit. designation is: R4 E6. He is in tip top shape.

 

Corzip

How much is he?

 

shopkeeper

this one ill sell to you for 6000 credits.

 

Corzip

Deal. can you please purge its memory for me and put all the star charts in it and this information files of me and my missions and contact person?

 

shopkeeper

sure. want a droid caller and anything?

 

Corzip

No thank you.

 

*The man went into the back with the droid and came back after 10 to 13 minutes.*

 

shopkeeper

Here you go sir. do you have a name for him yet?

 

Corzip

Ill have to think of it. here you go.

 

shopkeeper

Thank you and have a nice day.

 

*Corzip walked out of the store witha brand new droid behind him.

Corzip was somehow proud of his lttle droid. his first one.

He stopped somewhere down the streets.*

 

Corzip

Now listen up. I want you to go to the big starfighter for sale hangar and wait for me there. i have a comlink, contact me if anything goes wrong.

 

*The droid chirped a comply and went off. Corzip walked to the spaceport.*

[Wraith 8]

*Corzip started up his Z-95 and got clearance fro take off. he went out and just flew a couple of hundred meteres and setted her down in a hangar by the sales of ne fighters.

 

when he exit his fighter the store man was already waiting for him. and beside him was his new R2 unit.

The man looked at the Z-95 and walked around it.*

 

Man:

It looks battered. but as far as i can see it is only cosmetic things. the fighter looks it top shape. Been in a lot of fights with it?

 

Corzip:

No i havent... just one with 12 TIE fighters. i won.

 

Man:

You against 12 TIE fighters? than you must be realy good.

ill give you 7000 credits for this fighter. and the 4000 will be deducted so you will get 3000 credits. follow me please. did you get all your stuff out of the fighter?

 

Corzip:

Yeah i did.. the memory is erased adn you will have to put some new charts in it.

 

Man:

Well we gave you another fighter of the N-1. a better one, in better shape. here are your credits. and the datacards with the release notes. i cleared control and you can go whenever you want.

 

Corzip:

thank you sir. ill go right now. thanks for all your help.

 

*His R4 unit went to the back of the fighter and got set into the fighter. Corzip climbed aboard and set his navigation units to on. he made a salute to the man and took off.

 

He came into orbit and looked at the info. there was believed to be some of them at the Sluis Van space docks. he set his course for Sluis Van and took off into hyperspace.*

[Wraith 8]

*When in hyperspace he checked all the systems of the fighter... a lot of things were broken.. and a lot of things didnt work at all...

Maybe it was a good idea to get this thing fixed in Sluis Van.*

[Com Raven]

How Daron hated Sluis Van.

 

People said he'd get used to the damn noise after a while, but he simply didn't.

 

At least he had gotten rid of the damn Tatooin-ian dirt.

 

And spying around the wharves was quite a lucrative job.

 

He'd never have thought it possible how many people wanted to know what happened around here.

 

Damn, was it late. Time to go to the bar to memt his next "customer"...

[Wraith 8]

*Corzip came out of hyperspace and contacted the shipyards. They replied and said he could land at docking bay 94.

Corzip headed over ther and landed softly. he emediatly started to seek for a repair crew. he found some people and they came back with to his fighter.*

 

Corzip:

This is my fighter. I just bought it, but a lot of stuff doesnt work. could you help me with this?

 

Mechanic:

Sure ill look what is wrong with it and contact you what needs to be done. ill contact you in an hour ok?

 

Corzip:

Ok. Thanks.

 

*Corzip walked out with his droid and searched for the local bar.*

[CM_Third]

Thiris emerges after beating another person who hasn't payed the CM, a group of Mercenaries who are quite well known in this side of the galaxy. His knuckles are bruised. The bartender looks at him.

 

Bartender

 

"We really need to get you some decent customers!"

 

Thiris.

 

"Thats true, but you also need to start serving decent drinks."

 

Thiris laughs at his own joke and the bartender just smiles.

 

"Any more buisness, anything i should know about?"

 

Bartender

 

"Nope, just that some hotshot has just pulled down in an old and battered N1"

 

Thiris

 

"N1, you serious? Jeeze those things are expensive, probably because they are dated what, 60 -70 odd years back. Back the time of the old republic, and that war, what was it, between some droid army and the Naboo. Sheesh he must of dug deep to get one of them.

 

Bartender

 

"Although they are old, they still probably arent outdated, they were one of the finest machines and still are, except for the exposed cockpit. But yeah this guy must be packing serious credits"

 

Thiris

 

"Heh yeah, perhaps and ex Awing pilot such as myself could teach him a few tricks, although im sure hes probalby as good as they come... Hmm may have to introduce myself to him if he comes our way. Maybe since he is someone with serious credits, he needs someone to hook him up with some serious firepower."

 

Bartender

 

"Anything for money aye."

 

Thiris

 

"We'll see"

 

Thiris finally takes a seat and starts sipping from a Corellian Ale.

[Wraith 8]

*He wandered into a bar when the droid alarm went off. The bartender turned his head toward Corzip and his R4-unit.*

 

Bartender:

Hey! we dont serve they're kind here

 

Corzip:

Its ok R4. You have the data on the people we look for. look around for these guys. ask some question. but be carefull. oh and please check on our fighter from time to time ok?

 

*The R4-unit complied with a whir and went off into the croud outside the bar.

Corzip entered the bar. he asked the bartender for a local ale.

He turned around on his stool and looked at the bar. It wasnt that crouded. it was during the day on the space shipyards. a lot of people were working. He saw a group of men laughing at someone's joke. and a couple sipping from a drink looking in love. also some characters that looked suspisious. they looked at Corzip with this face that said: 'i dont trust you'. Corzip looked over those people and kept a constant sweep of the force over them. He turned to the bar and the Bartender was looking at him and came up to him.*

 

Bartender:

You are a Jedi arent you?

 

Corzip:

Why do you think so?

 

Bartender:

I have a very very little feeling over the force. i sometimes can use it to know if someone is honest. but i usualy cant use it. but now that you are here. i felt it again.

 

Corzip:

Yes I am a Jedi. but im not here to cause trouble, much.

 

*Corzip smiled at the bartender and he smiled back. But not a confident smile. more one of distrust.*

 

Bartender:

Are you looking for someone?

 

Corzip:

For several people actualy. have you ever heard of the coruscant slashers?

 

Bartender:

Yeah i heard of the name.

 

Corzip:

Do you have any info on them? a mark? a place?

 

Bartender:

well some of them come here often. But i havent seen them for some days now. they're logo is the planet Coruscant being cut in half by a vibro blade.

 

Corzip:

Thanks. now i know what to look for. Can you help me? what is your name? Mine is Corzip Dinn. Jedi apprentice, and part time bounty hunter.

 

Bartender:

My name is Sam Cally. Sure i want to help you, but i dont want my bar to suffer under it and i dont want any trouble.

 

Corzip:

Sure. Can you get me some tecnicians clothes?

[CM_Third]

The bartender walks back up to Thiris after talking to a customer who just tried to come in with a droid.

 

 

Bartender

 

You better watch him.

 

Thiris

 

Yeah?

 

Bartender

 

Jedi apprentive and part time bounty hunter, his names Corzip

 

Thiris looks Corzip up and down, corzip although looking hte other way turns straight aw ay once Thiris starts checking him out.

 

Thiris

 

hmmm i think you might be right. I bet hes the one with the N1 as well. I think ill have to introduce myself to him.

 

Bartender

 

Just watch what you say.

 

Thiris smiles

 

Thiris

 

Hey, it's me.

 

Bartender

 

Thats what im afraid of.

 

Thiris zips up his jacket and walks down to Corzip, Corzip looks up at him.

 

Thiris

 

Thiris Rupsyd

 

Thiris extends his arm for a hand shake...

[Gaalgoth]

::A man in the back stands up and approaches Corzip and Thiris::

 

Man

You're the one, huh? Not much to look at.

 

::His voice is raspy and he has a suspicious look in his eyes. He is of an average height, roughly 5'10" with shoulder length curly hair that is a dark brown color. His clothes are all black and his boots are caked with dirt. The trim of his cloak is tattered. His face is pale, and while his eyes have a look of knowledge in them they have the bright flare of youth as well. They are an almost luminescent green. As Thiris glances at the man, he does a double take and a look of recognition flashes across his face.::

 

Thiris

You've had too much to drink. Why don't you go si...

 

::Just as he was about to pat the man on the shoulder, the man quickly grabs his hand, spins him around and pushes him forwards. Thiris goes flying across the cantina and crashes through a table. The man reveals a blaster that was hidden in Thiris's sleeve with one hand and grabs Corzip with the other::

 

Man

My name is Varan Torel. He was going to kill you and at the same time set in motion a chain of events that could very well destroy the universe as we know it. He is a spy for those that are one with the shadows. You must follow me; do not ask questions. I am a master, you are but an apprentice. All will be explained in time, but only if you do as i say!

 

::Varan, using the force, pushes a crowd of men that were blocking the exit out of the way and as Corzip gasps pulls the apprentice after him out of the cantina.::

 

Varan

Which way is your ship? It won't be long before more are after us.

 

Corzip

Wait, I'm on a mission for Jabba....

 

Varan

Now is not the time to be concerned with that pathetic Hutt. We need to get to the ship and fast. Now where is it?

 

Corzip

::with a perplexed look on his face, he points in the direction of the hangar:: That way ::He sees R4 down the street:: R4! To the ship!

 

::The men tear down the street with the droid obediently following behind them::

[CM_Third]

(OOC: Ok you have just totally blown me out of proportion, you have wrecked my story, now im going to have to try and fix it. You should also ask before dramatically altering a story like you did, using mine and wraiths characters. It appears you barely read the story.)

 

Thiris looks up to see the two men running out the door.

 

Thiris runs up to the bartender

 

Thiris

 

Darnit, why do the masters always have to be the edgy ones... something was fishy about him, using such violence, making conclusions about people. Accusing me of trying to kill a Jedi.. i mean sheesh if i may be crazy... but not that crazy.

 

Bartender

 

Well what can you do

 

Thiris

 

hmmm... *rolls his eys* I know

 

*Thiris pulls out a comm link.*

 

Thiris Rupsyd hailing the Crimson Blade.

 

Prepare the troops, we have some wierdo, claiming to be a master, who just threw me across the room, and as you boys rent doing anything right now, its time to sort this out.

 

*thiris Waits for a reply*

 

Crimson Blade to Thiris, we are going to touch down your starfighter, we are about to embark on a escort mission.

 

*Thiris walks back to the bartender*

 

 

Bartender

 

Well?

 

Thiris

 

Well it looks like i have to go on alone.

 

Cya round.

 

Bartender

 

Later

 

*Thiris runs out the door to his rented room, he finds a jawa inside going through his stuff.*

 

Thiris

 

Get outa here!

 

*Thiris picks the jawa up by the collar and throws him out*

 

*Thiris goes to his wardrobe and pulls out his modified, DL-44 and straps it to his leg. He brings out his red coloured chest plate, and straps it on under his jacket, he shines the Crimson Mercenaries badge on it.*

 

*He zips up his jacket after placing a smaller 'laser pistol' into his jacket.*

 

*He takes off his pants and straps similar coloured thigh and shin guards on. He puts his pants back on and puts knee pads over the top.*

 

*Thiris straps heavy duty Boots on and grabs his old flight helmet*

 

In 5 minutes Thiris has changed from Thiris the commoner, to Thiris Rupsyd, Crimson Mercenary Commando.

 

*Thiris Runs out the door and jumps into his landspeeder. Thiris flys down to where his ship has been placed and jumps straight out. Thiris looks at his ship, the Firestarter, it has served him well on recon missions when he was a pilot, and he new it well in a dog fight. The firestarter is an A-Wing heavily modified, with a tracking system, Armour similar to that used in the Old rebel Snow speeders has been placed to reinforce the glass over his cockpit, his lasers have been replaced with more heavier power, and His Concussion missle slots hve been expanded to house more. The engine size has been increased to take it back to a nromal A-Wing speed. thiris considers it the ultimate A-wing*

 

Thiris thinks to himself ' How will two of them fit in a fighter with just enough room for 1 person?'

 

*Thiris Fires up the engines and signals the gorund crew, he flys off out of the planets atmosphere then hides in the Shadow of the blade as planned untill their craft comes up.*

[Wraith 8]

((OOS: wow...what just happened... i was just sitting in a bar and now a group after me??? nobody knows me! oh wait... maybe the corcuscant slashers.... but you at least wait a second before pulling me out of there..

 

Please reply again.. cause it is too cinfusing right now. ill edit this later))

[CM_Third]

(WEll, apparantly im trying to kill you, even though i was trying to befriend you, and that guy is a jedi master or something, he basicallay ruined my angle. So now i have to chase you down and explain myself.)

[Wraith 8]

*Varan was running ahead of Corzip and wasnt looking back. Corzip signalled his R4 unit to go in the side walk. The little droid did what Coprzip wanted and Corzip jumped behind him they ran around another corner. By now Varan turned around to ask where he must go for Corzips fighter, but Corzip had vanished.

 

Corzip ran threw some the corridors and to his fighter hangar. He came running in and the techs that were working on his fighter looked startled. The tech said that the fighter was in good flying conditions just that some minor systems need some tuning up. it would cost Corzip this time 150 creds. Corzip payed the man and R4 was already in place starting up the fighter. Corzip turned it around and blasted into space.

 

Corzip was feeling free in is fighter and made some loops. then he settled down and tought of his next move.*

[CM_Third]

Corzips fighter flys past at a lightning pace. Thiris Fired up his engines and speeds off in chase. Hes sees corzip doing some loops and spins, obviously trying out his improved N1. Thiris gives chase and starts following his moves exactly as corzip goes into complex manouvers. Thiris starts remembering his old days fighting in his Awing. He gets a track on the N1.

 

"Corzip this is Thiris come in."

[Wraith 8]

*Corzip sees the fighter on his scopes and he sees him making the same moves as he does. Then the voice of the other fighter:*

 

"Corzip this is Thiris come in."

 

*Corzip tried to see if he could put a face to the voice. then he rememberred the guy talking with the bartender after Corzip.*

 

"Thiris, this is Corzip. What do you want. are you trying to kill me? like th crazy Jedi master did? I know he wasnt right. I felt his mind. he was all screwed up. But please do tell me who you are and what you want."

[CM_Third]

he N1 makes a tight turn involving a loop and spin and great use of the engine speads. Thiris just does a simple turn, smiling at the n1's cheek.

 

"Actually i wanted to clear everything up, but this jedi if you say hes screwed up, hes something we cannot have loose for much longer..."

 

Thiris reverts sheilds to his engine, and gains next to Corzip.

 

"Anyway im Thiris Rupsyd, a Commando in the Crimson Mercenaries, i heard you were remaking an N1 and wanted to know if you wanted some firepower, as i wouldnt mind some cash, but now i think you need to consult Skywalker about him, although you probably were thinking that. I want to come with you now. NO doubt the deranged jedi knows where we are, its your call, leave me here, i will probably be killed, let me come with you, and maybe we could come to an agreement about firepower."

[Wraith 8]

"I understand what you are trying to say. But im not on a mission to get weird Jedi out of the way. And i only get them out of the way when they are in my way. Im on a mission. A mission for Jabba the Hutt. He wants the Coruscant Slashers down. and he wants them dead or alive. Its a group from around 120 members. they are spread over the universe getting more recruits every day. It is said that 5 people of that group are stationned on the Sluis Van shipyards. i was just about to get a tech outfit and go get them. but then the Jedi blew mu cover and now they are warned about me. Now if that Jedi crosses me again. i will go after him and i will get him. believe i have dealt with Sith in my life that were more dangerous than this Jedi. Now you are welcome to help me catch this 5 people and get them to Tattooine. Ill split the money with you 50, 50. and if you can get them on a ship that can support 5 people that would be great. cause i cant carry them to Tattooine. what do you say?"

[Gaalgoth]

(Sorry, I had to leave on sunday on a college visit. No, I wasn't trying to alter either of your characters...sorry if i did. Varan is a dark jedi...not a good one. I was going to try and kill Corzip, but not cause he's the star...)

 

 

::Varan turns to face Corzip, a sly grin forming on his face::

Varan

So now that we are alone, I am free to kill y....no....NO! The fool.....the man left me...he left ME!? How could HE see through my plan!? NO ONE BEATS VARAN! NO ONE!

 

::The Jedi begins to take chase after Corzip, but as he begins to a laser whizzes by his head. Whirling around, he sees a band of bounty hunters. Varan isn't right in the head; he has his own inner demons and they tend to take control of him. He's also a leader of the Coruscant Slashers, a group that has made enemies with people that one shouldn't make enemies with. Like Jabba the Hutt. He is, however, very in touch with the force and is more than a match with his sabers.::

 

::In a blur of speed, Varan charges the group of three hunters, blocking the next blast with his saber and reflecting it into the rifleman. By this time Varan was upon the other two. He draws out his second saber, now wielding one red and one blue, one for his calm side and one for his crazy side. In a quick couple of slashes he is the last one standing....in one piece at least.::

 

Varan

MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! ::Laughing maniacally, Varan looks up to the heavens and notices two ships in the sky above him. He narrows his eyes.:: So, you made it to your ship despite my efforts. Very well, we can work with this. Yes, we can definitely work with this.....::chuckling to himself in the way he normaly does when excited, Varan pushes a path through the crowd that had now formed and quickly reaches his landspeeder. Before anyone has a chance to stop him, he drives off towards where he secretly landed his ship.::

 

(Hopefully this will clear it up a little.....sorry again if i twisted you all around. Oh well....that's what these things are for though, right? Create a story and not no where it's going to turn out. By the way....don't just dismiss Varan as a simple lower class jedi that you can take out easily.....just cause you've dealt with sith before doesn't mean you can ice Varan, a full fledged dark knight. especially a CRAZY full fledged knight.)

[CM_Third]

Thiris

 

Ok Corzip i will help you, ill go and get a YT-1300 from back at the CM headquaters... Do you want it a two man operation or would you like me to get some of my commandoes to help out?

[Wraith 8]

well if you could just have a few of them standing by to assist us, that would be great. so...... where do we go now... the Coruscant Slashers have been warned about us. You got any nice tactics? cause i was just gonna sneek in with them and catch some of them.