Dark Sad Shadow Posted May 20, 2002 Share Posted May 20, 2002 here is another one: */*/*/*/*/* Untitled */*/*/*/*/* The stars were so bright that night, two bodys, two persons, two souls, one way. The wind was flowing trought your hair i saw your beautiful smile i bowed my head to the ground then a tear came out of your eye. Why a tear? why the lamment? Me? i too had a tear in my eye, i cried because i saw your inner self i wanted to help i wanted to be at your side. Why my lamment? why my tear? I was alone for a long time i knew i was following only a mirage then i found my reality in you. The moon was in the center of the sky two bodys, two persons, two souls, one love. */*/*/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wraith 8 Posted May 21, 2002 Share Posted May 21, 2002 very good DSS... very good... how about a single tear??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted May 21, 2002 Author Share Posted May 21, 2002 not bad, nice title, well any other sugestions? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Redwing Posted May 22, 2002 Share Posted May 22, 2002 Wow, that's really good. Not as depressing as some of your others, too :D ---Title Ideas--- ...ummm, I can't think of any better than Wraithy's. I suck. x_x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted May 22, 2002 Author Share Posted May 22, 2002 Originally posted by Redwing Wow, that's really good. Not as depressing as some of your others, too :D jejej, well im in love, what else i can say...? and of course i have my bad days too, but those are getting less Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesselles Posted May 22, 2002 Share Posted May 22, 2002 Thats really moving! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted May 22, 2002 Author Share Posted May 22, 2002 you think so? thanks friend Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jesselles Posted May 22, 2002 Share Posted May 22, 2002 My stuff depresses ppl. And hi, I'm new, and thanx for calling me friend Your stuff rox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Sad Shadow Posted May 22, 2002 Author Share Posted May 22, 2002 thanx, i hope we can share some works Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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