whitedragon Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Originally posted by Agen_Terminator *splat* dragon looks around and dosent see any dark jedi so he walks forward toward the bunker where agen and darklighter were held. no one is guarding the doors or inside but the dark side is hard to see. suddenly dark jedi are all over the place and activate their lightsabers. dragon activates his own and waits for them to make their move Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Hey, nice going Agen:D Cool plot twist... Do you mind if I carry on with our little story and escape? I didn't know you'd be coming in with it:) but that was good. Now we actually have a good reason to get out:D lol Would you mind if I carried on? Then we could get out and continue with our own stories... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Originally posted by Darklighter Hey, nice going Agen:D Cool plot twist... Do you mind if I carry on with our little story and escape? I didn't know you'd be coming in with it:) but that was good. Now we actually have a good reason to get out:D lol Would you mind if I carried on? Then we could get out and continue with our own stories... im sure he dosent mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 the first dark jedi jumps at dragon, dragon quickly dodges and cuts the dark jedi while hes still in the air. the others charge after him. dragon knew he couldent take them on all at once so he projected force lightening through his body in a shock wave to scater them. dragon cut two down while they were still getting up and ran for the door to take him to the next room. the dark jedi ran after him. dragon dident go through the door he instead he jumped and kicked off it he landed behind them and cut down three more. dragon fliped backwards and saw that there were only five left so he summed up the last bit of force lightening he could use and shocked them all to death. dragon needed to wait for his energy to replinish but he dident have time for that. he walked toward the door and opened it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 The pain was agonising. He could feel it long before he could even open his eyes. The air was cold, but musty and it stank of drying blood. Slowly, Darklighter raised his eyelids. His vision was blurry, and it made his head feel light and achy. He stared blankly at bars criss-crossed in front of his face, and the floor was frozen against his skin. As his sight became more clear, Tidus lifted his limp body with his weak hands. His arm slipped and he fell again, but with more effort he dragged his bruised body upwards and kneeled on the floor. It was dark all around, the looming shadows black as night and it surrounding him, engulfing his body into darkness. "You've awoken" the voice behind him was loud and shocking. Darklighter turned round quickly to see, "I was hoping you would soon." The figure sat motionless on the bench that hung from rusted chains on the wall, his face blackened by the shadows. He did not move an inch. Darklighter knew it was him though. "Agen" his voice weak and faint, it hurt his throat and made his head ache. "What's going on...where am I?" "You know where you are" he still did not move. "As for what is going on, I'll let you guess" he replied, a hint of sarcasm in his deep voice. It did not encourage Darklighter. Darklighter now looked around him. His vision was now more clear, he was imprisoned, that much was certain. His robes had been removed from his torso, and as he looked at his bare chest Darklighter saw slashes and bruises covering his front, the blood had runand stained his skin. He thought back to his encounter with the Emperor - he really was powerful, able to throw him to the ground without raising an eyebrow. Amazing Obi-wan could have survived his wrath he thought to himself. Darklighter shuddered at the thought, and proceeded to heal his wounds using the power of the force. "It's no use" Agen said immediately. "They have drained the power out of you. You are too weak my friend." The anger began to swell in him. His hatred for Divine stemmed back from when they had trained as padawans...they would have always confronted each other, Divine always provoking him, getting Tidus into trouble. The thought that this man was the cause of their suffering now was too much. His eyes narrowed, his head bowed towards the ground, his devilish eyes looking straight. His lightsaber stood now in the guards position, over a few metres away from the cell entrance. His hands gripped the bars tightly, and he trembled with deep rage. Everything bad happened to us has been your fault Divine! , his thoughts echoed in the back of his mind. "Admiral..." Agen's voice was worried, he began to stand, watching Darklighter shake with anger, his face bright red. Darklighter stood up, glaring at the guard, reaching out with all his strength. "Nooooooo!" his scream rang in their ears, and the lightsaber flew to his hand. He ignited it, and sliced the bars. The guard began shooting frantically, but he was too late. Darklighter walked forward towards the gurad, blocking every shot. One precise hit fired the laser right through the troopers helmet, as he fell to the ground lifeless. Darklighter leant to retrieve Agen's saber from the guard's belt. He still stod in the cell, amazed at his power and will with the force. He threw Agen's lightsaber to him. Darklighter had calmed down now, his face no longer red, his eyes just as before. "Lets go" he said, as both men proceeded to the exit door. ------------------- The only option here was stealth. One false move, one wrong sound, and the alarm would be activated. The two Jedi crawled amongst the shadows and dodged out of the guard's line of view. They were weak, but hope was in them, and their confidence as well as strength was building again. They finally reached the ventilation shaft through which Darklighter had entered the bunker. They leapt up into it, and proceeded to the roof. The day had now come. It was the next morning, the sun was warm against their skin and the sky was cloudless. As they both emerged, a terrible sight struck them. One of the Emperor's royal shuttles was loading a few hundred metres away. They both ducked behind a metal ridge for cover, and peered over. Darth Talliusc was stood, ordering troopers to carry things to the shuttle. He was dressed in a dark cloak, his face sheilded. At that moment, Daklighter felt it. A strange sensation. It made him shiver, and his heart felt cold. The darkside, he could feel it in his blood, Agen too. Talliusc's head slowly turned to face them, but the two Jedi managed to duck before he could glimpse then. Talliusc shrugged off the feeling and entered the shuttle, two guards on either side of him. Agen and Darklighter stood as the engines glowed red and propelled it into space. "The Emperor is here. I can feel it. I felt it from him" Agen suggested, and Darklighter quickly nodded. But now Darklighter felt something else. It was familiar, and the words came out of his mouth involuntarily. "Whitedragon!" he yelled, "He needs our help!" "Okay, lets go!" Agen replied, and without hesitation, the Jedi jumped from the bunker and disappeared through the blast doors, cutting the troopers as they went. To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agen Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 Very nice work, i'm tired now and i'm gonna go to bed, let's see if anyone else can add to this saga heh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 dragon walked through the door. he walked into a bright room with a mat on the entire floor there were tables in the corners of the room that were stacked high with books. a very large man sat on the floor in the middle of the room. he was wearing flexible gauntlets that were made of mandalorian iron, they were used to block light sabers. "welcome" said the man "i am here to stop you from rescuing your friend. he is being held here but you must fight me first. i will not tell you where he Is because like devine sprit said this In no james bond film." dragon put his light saber on the floor along with his jacket "very well mr. scaramanga. I mean mr. badguy. sense you fight with your hands I will fight with my hands" dragon went Into a defensive stance. badguy didn’t miss a beat, he ran forward punching dragon In the gut. badguy started a barrage of kicks and punches and didn’t stop until dragon was on the floor coughing up blood. "you weak coward" badguy said "you mite as well run back to the jedi sense you are no match for me." dragon got up without any trouble and wiped the blood from his mouth "wow your good that actually hurt" dragon said. badguy look dumbfounded, he used his strongest moves. dragon grinned "but now that I’ve seen all your moves you’re all mine." dragon ran forward and kicked badguy In the face. badguy stumbled back wards and swung his fist at dragon, dragon blocked It, tripped him, and then brought an ax kick down on badguys neck. badguy was dead. "sheesh" dragon said to himself "maybe It would have been the same result If I didn’t let him hit me." dragon picked up his stuff and walked to the door at the end of the room. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 22, 2002 Share Posted July 22, 2002 BTW, whitedragon, me and Agen kind of escaped already...that's what I just wrote:( I'm sorry if it kind of hinders your story:( :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Talliusc Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 first off, thanks again Reb, i really like how our stories compliment each other and our rivalry grows, oh and darklighter very nice work. congrats. i like how i was portrayed in your most recent story. im really pleased with all this war so far. keep it coming, well im going to wright another fairly lengthy story now but ill just edit this post and attatch it when im done so look for it here. Sith academy grounds: Darth Talliusc flinched in the nights cold. it wasnt due to the near freezing temperature around his masters academy grounds. it was something else... Talliusc's first thought was of the jedi, but no they could not have escaped, the guardsmen watching over the jedi were competent and the jedi didnt have the strength to escape anyway, at least not without the Dark Emperor knowing of it. "no matter" thought Talliusc grimly. Talliusc was about to enter the shuttles hold when something caught his eye, he looked over towards a stack of supply crates but found nothing, stretching out with his dark force powers he found nothing as well. "jumping at shadows" Talliusc scolded himself "i must remain focused on the task at hand" and with that he checked to see that everything necessary was on the shuttle and he climbed aboard. it was not long after that the shuttle shot off into space and entered the hold of the mark III star destroyer Dreadhold. it was not the most massive vessel in the fleet but it was fast, maneuverable and Talliusc's favourite. His master had allowed him a crew of the finest clones. they took longer to make but were were more efficient and expensive then the bulwark of clones in the imperial navy, with one exception, the commander of the vessel was not a clone. Talliusc had first met Admiral Relnick 5 years before, and had instated Relnick as the commander of Talliusc's personal vessel just months ago. Onboard the Star Destroyer Dreadhold: "i shall remain in my quarters until we reach the target, forward all messages for me there, interrupt me ONLY if the dark lord Divine Spirit summons me!" said Talliusc to the now aged Admiral. "yes my lord, will you lead the attack when we arrive or stay onboard?" asked Relnick timidly. "i shall inform you when we reach the target zone" with these last words Talliusc closed down the comm and sealed his room shut. this room was like no other, to some it would seem to be a waste of space, but not to a man like Talliusc, complete with obstacle course, dueling circle and observation gallery Talliusc had all that he would need to survive. he would have some time to himself to practice with his lightsabers. Talliusc removed the Doublebladed lightstaff that always hung along his back and placed it on a table across the room with the force, he then took up both of his curve handled duelling sabers and connected their backs to each other. "Marvelous" thought Talliusc to himself, the only thing he enjoyed more then practicing his saber techniques was putting those techniques to use against Jedi. with the two sabers connected the blades came out either end of an S shaped handle, one blade shot back to Talliusc 's right, close to his body, the other blade shot out to his left somewhat farther away from him. Talliusc spent the better part of 7 hours twirling the blade about and jumping all over his own personal obstacle course. finally he retired the blades, separating them from each other and placing them on either hip in the fashion of bounty hunters placing guns in holsters. Talliusc walked up to his observation galley and stared out into the cold bleakness of hyperspace. His thoughts dwelled on the jedi, they proclaimed to be the right doers of the galaxy, they were so wise in their own way, yet so foolishly blind to not sieze power where it lay. the jedi would pay for their ignorance with blood, and Talliusc planned to have a front row seat when their lives came crashing down around them. but one matter remained, that cursed Starblazer, he was an enigma. Talliusc knew that he could become a powerful ally if turned, but turning him would prove difficult and agravating, but that was good. anger was necessary for a siths existence. Talliusc continued to ponder the problem of Starblazer well into the night and into the early hours of the morning. When the Dreadhold came out of hyperspace immediately sirens blared throughout the ship. "these were not typical alarms, something is wrong!" thought Talliusc as he took up his lightsabers and made for the bridge. well there you have it, im hoping that Reb will do something interesting with this story and take it forward, if he doesnt then ill just have to think of something myself. well what do you guys think of my doublebladed curved saber? i was trying to describe it during the story but it didnt turn out so well, basically you take two curve bladed lightsabers, point ones end (the end where the blade comes out) and point it facing behind you, and the other saber facing in front of you, then snap the backs together. i wonder if they could make this work in ep3? ah well, keep the stories coming, im anxious to hear about agen_terminator and Darklighter Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Agen_Terminator Very nice work, i'm tired now and i'm gonna go to bed, let's see if anyone else can add to this saga heh. ok ill write another part dragon deflected another shot as the troopers still came. "of all places i could have ended up it had to be the storm trooper barrics." as another bunch of troopers came at him he used the force to push them into another bunch then he used the force to throw them all into the wall. a blaster bolt came at his back, he turned around to block it but he dident really need to. " where the hell did you two come from" standing before him was agen-terminator and darklighter,they both were bleeding and looked like they had internal bleeding. dragon then decided that he needed to pause the fight. he used the force to bring the roof down on the doorway. "you two look like sh!t dragon said."thank you for that observation" agen said. dragon used the force to heal them both, then he reached in his back pac and took out some jedi robes and two lightsabers. after they had put on the robes dragon put some trip mines on the wall in front of the door. "where to" dragon said "we need to end this today. the emperor has gone too far this time" darklighter said. dragon noded. they started off down a corridor and tryed to use the force to locate the emperor. the three of them opend a door and went inside. it was extreamly dark but they dident need their eyes, just the force. they all felt a desterbence in the force and they all activated their light sabers, agen and darklighter took out the light sabers dragon had given them. three very strong dark jedi came out of the darkness and activated their lightsabers. darklighter, agen-terminator and white dragon knew this wouldent be an easy fight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Darklighter BTW, whitedragon, me and Agen kind of escaped already...that's what I just wrote:( I'm sorry if it kind of hinders your story:( :( yeah but my character dident know they escaped ya see Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by obi-wan13 It was truly a magnificent sight, for WhiteDragon was quite the Swordsman. He himself had a duel with whitedragon once, A duel which he barely won. It was one of the longest duels Obi-wan had ever had. why thank you obi-wan. sorry master but i kind of started with out you but why dont you put a part in where you tell me to find darklighter after you descover where he is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by whitedragon yeah but my character dident know they escaped ya see Well, I'm sorry, but kind of told that they escaped. Not sure how it should effext your story...just telling you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Darklighter Well, I'm sorry, but kind of told that they escaped. Not sure how it should effext your story...just telling you... well sorry but you should write the next part because we are going to kick ass Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Okay, I have a really good idea...I'll edit my last story to fit in, and then show them entering the bunker. Then I'll write the next part. I have to sleep now, so I'll do it tomorrow, okay? Night ya'll! edit - here is the missing part of my story. The shadows began glow as three Jedi emerged from them, lightsabers in hand, creeping along the floor swiftly and silently. They entered a great round room, which spanned a huge distamce. The walls were dark, the patterns mosaic, and he floor was silver-grey stone. The three Jedi payed no notice, and using the force concentrated on the whereabouts of their enemies. Their's was the most atuned and keenest instincts of Jedi's. Darklighter stared about the room again, as they kept moving. I don't remember this he said, examining the great hall. At that moment there was a flash of light. Lightning struck them from far off, as the three Jedi tumbled backwards to the ground. Divine Spirit now approached them far beyond, cackling menacingly. "You thought that you could fool an Emperor?!" Divine's voice was croaky and deep, utterly evil and shrouded in malice. He laughed again at them, and descended from the steps in the distance, a figure on one side of him. "I told you we would meet again, Darklighter" his name sounded bluntly. Shadow Angel, Darklighter's head sank as he thought the name. The Jedi were now raising to stand. "You're kind are so predictable. The darkside cannot be foretold, but the light can" Divine walked closer to them, his eyes almost red with hatred. "Right now you're master is on his way to try and rescue you." "Obi-wan" Darklighter's voice was desperate, he had to warn his master, but could not. "Yes" the Emperor focussed his gaze on Darklighter. "I am so sorry, but I have some duties to attend to" he began to turn round, walking back towards the way he had entered, lifting his hands towards the ceiling as he said "The destruction of the Academy! "No!" Whitdragon yelled furiously as he ran towards Divine, his lightsaber high above his head. "Wait!" Agen's warning was too late. The Emperor turned and with one hand and propelled Whitedragoninto the far wall, his body hit it with amazing force, as his unconcious body feel to the ground. Darklighter and Agen looked in anger at their enemy, as he stared back. "Farewell. Jedi" and he cackled again, walking with Shadow towards the lift on the far side of the hall. At that point, swarms of guards entered from all directions, surrounding the Jedi. Some carried lightsabers, obviously apprentices in Divine's Academy. The two looked around in despair. "They win this round" Darklighter said horrified, and placed their weapons on the ground. They were carried off out of the hall. Whitedragon lay unconcious, Agen and Darklighter had once again been captured, and it was certain doom for Obi-wan if he attempted to rescue them. To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Darklighter Okay, I have a really good idea...I'll edit my last story to fit in, and then show them entering the bunker. Then I'll write the next part. I have to sleep now, so I'll do it tomorrow, okay? Night ya'll! ok sounds cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 by the way ill edit mine to say it was a bunker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Well, first off, I just wanna know, when does this "Episode" end? How far are we going to go with it? I think Obi and Divine have some kind of backstory worked out, but aren't revealing it. That's good though, I like it that way. Man, this is only the first part too! Also, yea, I like where this is going as well Talliusc. And to think all this started when I PM'd you for permission to use your character:D I've got some interesting ideas for what to do with my character, and what to do involving our rivalry. Perhaps I'll PM you sometime, when I decide just which ideas I'm going to go with, and we can work out some details. As for now, I'm heading to bed. Depending on what's happening in this thread tomorrow and how much time I have, I may post another part to my story. So Talliusc, I guess it's yours until then. I've got an idea kicking around for one of our future meetings, but that'll have to wait;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obi Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 thats it! Obi-wan thought to himself. He's there, in the imperial incampment! Obi-wan grabbed his new lightsaber, and put in on his belt. He took the lift down to the ground, and exited. He limped across the academy grounds, and began his long hike to the camp. He allowed the force to guide him. When suddenly, he found himself stareing against a solid wall. That's not right........ Obi-wan thought to himself. Why had the force led him here? For what significance is this? Then, he got his answer. THe spirit of his dead Master, Qui-gon Jinn walked from behind a tree. "Hello, Obi-wan." He said. "It is good to see you again." "Yes, it is. Why have you made contact with me? Are you the one who led me here?" Obi-wan asked, with a mixed feelings of joy and confusion at the sight of his old master. "Your freind, Darklighter, Went to rescue a prisoner. That attempt will fail, and you will try to rescue them both." Qui-gon told him. "I know, I have seen it in my visions." Obi-wan told him. "No, you have not seen the whole truth. You will die in your attempt to rescue them, and then they shall be executed. If you return back now, you will live, and only one of them will die." Qui-gon said. "With your warning, I know that I must prevent their death, and I know that I can prevent mine. I must help them. They are my Strongest allies, and my best freinds. I will help them, and I will free them. Both of them, they shall both live." Obi-wan replied. "Obi-wan, I never knew you to be so closed-minded. Listen to me, for I know the truth!." Qui-gon said, as the spirit faded. Obi-wan continued his hike for the incampment. When he arrived, he noticed two guards at the front, and approached them. "Hey! You there!" one of them shouted. He walked up to them, without one word, and sliced through them with his Blue Lightsaber. He slashed a panel out of the wall and the blast doors opened. He walked in, and immidiatly guards began shouting, and shooting. Obi-wan called upon the force and deflected every shot. 4 sentry's came out of the wall, and began firing on him. He deflected the shots as he rolled forward behind a security desk. When they stoped their fire, he used the force to gain speed, and hurried his way into the main hallway. The doors on both closed, and one of the walls opened, and revealed 4 officers and many troops, holding blasters to Darklighter and Agen's head. "Surrender, and they will live. Resist, and you shall die." One of the officers shouted. Obi-wan Deactivated his lightsaber, and called on the force. "You will release the prisoners." Obi-wan said. "That Mind trick will not work on me, jedi. The emporer has trained me to have a strong mind, and that is what i have. Now, surrender." The officer said, as Obi-wan ran to them, igniting his lightsaber, and slashing 3 of the guards. One lucky shot by the officer blazed into obi-wan's back, as he fell to the ground, and his lightsaber deactivated. "Obi-wan! NO!" Darklighter shouted. The two jedi stared at the body of Obi-wan, and decided it was time to stand up to the imperials. They looked at eachother, and nodded, knowing what each must do. Then, simultaniously, they stood, and kicked the guards behind them, and avoided the shots of the other guards and officers. They broke the cuffs, and force pushed them all to the gorund. The weapons where disposed of, and the imperials surrenderd. Darklighter ran up to obi-wan, and picked his head up off of the ground. to be continued....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Groovy Posted July 23, 2002 Author Share Posted July 23, 2002 Ok first thing is first. Since I am the one who started this thread I will now set the standards. I didn't expect this to get so big, but I am very greatful, and I tip my hat to all of you excellent writers out there.....the Force is with you! Second Standard. Posting and story writing is unlimited however, in order to kill off an existing character, you must first have the existing characters permission. In other words if you want to kill AB_Legion off in your story.....you must PM AB_Legion and get his permission first. If he wants to work out a deal with you, that's his right. Third Standard. I like the idea of Each side taking a turn, however it is impossible for everyone to be online at once. So post when you like but make sure you read the previous posts and try to keep things in chronological order if possible. As a side note, anyone who volunteers to compile this battle into chapters may do so, provided he sends a copy to all contributing writers. Fourth Standard. The battle is not over until the founding members of both Academies agree to an ending. I don't think Divine Spirit is going to yield anytime soon, nor is Obi-Wan 13, so happy hunting! I would suggest waiting until everyone has completely run out of material and then we will close. Both leaders must agree on a conclusion before we end this. Fifth and final Standard. Anything goes as far as story is concerned, I am not George Lucas and not as picky. If you want to bring Batman, Vash the Stampede, or Bugs Bunny into this story that is fine by me. The only thing I will put emphasis on, and It hasn't been a problem yet but I will still emphasize that all of Lucasforums previously laid ground rules apply to this thread. I don't want to see this thread locked because some idiot decided to be stupid. Ok enough standards...back to the battle.....and May the Force Be With You! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 What I am suggesting is that there is not an ultimate 'ending', if you will. We can carry on with another story someother time. This is like the first in something like 2 or 3 episodes, so I think the story might need to ended soon yes. I'll have a go at compiling it once its finished. Once both Divine and Obi-wan have agreed to when it is finishing, you could PM me with your e-mails and I'll send the text file, punctuation all touched up and add in chapter names. If you would like to go back and edit your posts putting chapter names at the top be my guest I am now going back to finish my story by editing my last post:D edit - btw, I've just edited my last post and put a story in their...it fits well:D Umm, I kinda added you in Divine and Shadow. It doesn't realy effect the story much, hope its ok:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 my part of the story isent fiting in very well. if you guys think it best i could rewrite it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 No, no no no no dragon:) You don't don't need to rewrite it...you put in some stuff that we didn't already have, like dark jedis in the bunker. I like your story:) and it fits in well with ours now...I could go back and mention about the Dark Jedi in my previous story if you want, then yours would fit in even better? Don't worry about it. If you feel like altering your story, thats fine, but there really isn't anything wrong with it:) Good job... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Darklighter No, no no no no dragon:) You don't don't need to rewrite it...you put in some stuff that we didn't already have, like dark jedis in the bunker. I like your story:) and it fits in well with ours now...I could go back and mention about the Dark Jedi in my previous story if you want, then yours would fit in even better? Don't worry about it. If you feel like altering your story, thats fine, but there really isn't anything wrong with it:) Good job... well thank you but i do need to do something with it so it can fit in with obi-wans last post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Well, that would be fine:) It would be cool to intergrate the stories so they were like stages in the episode, all fitting together nicely...whatever you want to do is fine by me:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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