whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Darklighter Well, that would be fine:) It would be cool to intergrate the stories so they were like stages in the episode, all fitting together nicely...whatever you want to do is fine by me:) ok but do you want to write the next part to it ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Hmm, I'm not sure...you haven't written for a while, but Obi-wan was the one who came up with the last part...I'm not sure where he wants to go with it... You can if you want to:) I don't mind doing it either... Just remember you've been knocked unconcious, and Obi-wan is practically dead. Not sure about the Emperor, whether he has escaped or not... Obi-wan? Ideas please... edit - btw, Reb, you haven't said much lately...it would be cool to hear your side of the story again sometime... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 i had a good idea for the last part of my story. well not the last part but the last part in the bunker and it requires the help of obi-wan and it is a good part but i do need obi-wan to be able to fight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 This is a post to tell you all that I'm trying to compile this story as I'm writing this. For continuity's sake I may "edit" a few of the already posted stories to make them fit better. Like where you were mentioning Obi-Wan in a few of your first posts Darklighter, but he wrote that he was gone. I'll do my best to make it all fit. I'm going to try and post another part of my story sometime today. I also suggest we wrap up this episode sometime soon. It's twelve pages long, and I'm only on Obi-Wan's and Divine's duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obi Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 "Obi-wan! You will survive! Just hang on!" Darklightr spoke. Obi-wan, barely living, looked up at his freind. "Death shall have it's day, but not today." Obi-wan said. Darklighter put obi-wan on his shoulder, and carried him out of the compund, with Agen Closely following. "I can walk from here." Obi-wan said, and Darklighter nodded and put him down. Obi-wan walked around to the corner of an outside wall, and looked around. "4 guards." Obi-wan said. "And a land speeder. We will need to get there without them seeing us." Obi-wan said. "I'll take care of that." Agen said, as he ignited his lightsaber, and walked around the corner. "Hey! Get him!" One of the Troopers shouted. They began to fire at Agen, who simply deflected the blasts. He closed within Saber range, and chopped away at them. Once the coast was clear, Obi-wan and Darklighter came around, and the men got into the speeder, and Darklighter drove. They left, and headed back for the academy. __________________________________________ Later that night..... Obi-wan sat in his bed. It was quiet, and Obi-wan didn't like it. He heard the sound of a high-pitched alarm, then several "booming" sounds. "Air raid!" Obi-wan shouted. He got up, and got his lightsaber. He looked out of his window and seen several Tie-bombers dropping their bombs on the Anti-air turrets. Some of them got passed, and headed for the main building of the academy. Obi-wan ran to the Lift, and went to the ground. He went to the security desk, and picked up a blaster. "I swore I would never use one of these." Obi-wan said,picking it up. He went outside, and began firing at the tie bombers. There where several Guards running around frantically, and unarmed. They where running to the weapons bunker. SOme of them got their wepaons, and some didn't. 2 tie bombers came in with a swoop and bombed in into oblivian. The bombers then changed their attention to the main building. "Aim for those bombers! There, near the building!" Obi-wan shouted, as the few soldeirs began shooting at the bombers. He heard the sound of x-wing engines firing up, and looked to see Death Squadron launching from the bay.TIe interceptor reinforcements came, to help their bombers. 2 Imperial landing craft followed. He then felt the ground shake, and heard heavy machinery. He looked, and saw 3 AT-AT's headed their way towards the academy, followed by several ground troops. Obi-wan was saddened by this sight, but there was only one option. Evacuation. Obi-wan ran to the main building, which was being bombed, and got to the comm system. "This is Obi-wan Kenobi! Get to your escape transports, now! I repeat: Evacuate! Code Red! Evacuate!" Obi-wan shouted, but it quickly sparked, and smoke came out of it. The building shook, and Obi-wan Ran out as it blew up behind him. He heard shouts of the senior officers around him, "MOve! Move! move!" they shouted. Obi-wan now remembered those words from his dreams.........Obi-wan! no!........Move! Move! Move!.........We are surrounded, we must surrender..............you are beaten.............. Now it all came together. They must leave the academy, and they must leave now. Several transports left the hangar, as the Imperials penetrated the defenses of the academy, and the Imperial shuttle crafts landed, releasing more troops. "Retreat!" Obi-wan heard Tyrion say, as the ground forces began to withdraw, and move to the transports. Obi-wan himself went to one of them, and 5 minutes after he got on, it began to take off. As it was in the air, he looked down, to see Clone Troopers shooting prisoners, whiping out the remainder of those brave and honorable people who didn't get to a transport in time. The Dorm building exploded, along with the research buildings. Before the Transport completey left, he looked down, and seen the emporer looking up at him. This is not over, Obi-wan Kenobi. This.........is not over. *End episode 1* edit- hows that? Remember, the loose ends will be tied up in the next few episodes:) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 no lets keep the story going this is fun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 uhh obi-wan i dont mean to sound rude but are you even looking at my posts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yom Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 am i late!! did miss any thing darn it i did well anywho chef yom reporting for dutie Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Well, I kinda have something that I want to do before Episode 1 ends, if you guys agree to it. You probably won't like where the story goes though. I'm still working on it, damn the forums for screwing up. I've got stuff before where it should be, and after things that it's before... Just bloody confusing sometimes I'll probably edit this post, so look for my story here. EDIT: Obi-Wan13, for the love of god, from now on please spell it emperor, not emporer:D I don't know how many times spell checked has picked that up now:D Heh heh, I'm not mad at you, it's just a constant mistake you keep making. Figured I'd tell ya. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
obi Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by whitedragon uhh obi-wan i dont mean to sound rude but are you even looking at my posts Yea, but I didn't find them very enthusiastic, no offense. Like the reference to a James Bond film, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Obi-wan, nice ending, it had to happen some time:D You could put something on the end like: The Jedi had escaped, and the Academy was in the posession of the Emperor. Or something that states what has happened at the end...just a thought. Also, for Reb compiling it, we may need an introduction similar to the rolling text at the beginning of the films. Just to say what the whole thing is about, to introduce the episode. We will have one at the beginning of each episode. Plus, maybe we should have heard something from the enemies' point of view before it ended. Maybe Divine or Shadow or Talliusc could say what was happening on their star destroyer/ base place before they atack the Academy. Like: "This is it" Divine said. "We will take the Academy." It could end with like 'The Emperor's fleet was assembled, and the ties gathered in orbit around the planet. Just a thought, cos it seemed a little rushed:) What do you think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by obi-wan13 Yea, but I didn't find them very enthusiastic, no offense. Like the reference to a James Bond film, etc. i like your ending with the tie bombers but. i had my own idea of an ending if you want i can PM it to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agen Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 I think we need it all to be compiled and put on the websites. so people can read and see how the staff are involved sort of and it's very good, also when will we start episode 2? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Agen_Terminator I think we need it all to be compiled and put on the websites. so people can read and see how the staff are involved sort of and it's very good, also when will we start episode 2? as soon as obi-wan thinks of a good way to start episode 2. and ignore my story im going to put it in ep 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Talliusc Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 so is ep1 over then? i kind of left my story at a cliffhanger, it wouldnt be too hard to tie in with the jedi academy evacuation storyline. hmmm maybe ill write that up today. and Reb we should definitely try and come up with a plot outline for our rivalry, ive got some ideas but id really need your input (not to mention permission) to pull it off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darklighter Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 You've got ideas?!...COOL! Well, we should give a little bit before we start the next Ep...like a day:lol: Reb is compiling it now, so bare with him:) Make sure all the paragraphs, punctuation is sorted out Reb;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dissectional Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 I can't wait for the next Ep in Academy wars.. what ever shall we call it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Dissectional I can't wait for the next Ep in Academy wars.. what ever shall we call it? a new dope.... oh well heres a side story white dragon and yom looked at eachother and then at the last doughnut sitting on the counter.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Knight Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Yeah i am defienetly putting this story on my site it is so cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whitedragon Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Darth Knight Yeah i am defienetly putting this story on my site it is so cool. were going to have to edit and connect it all after were done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Groovy Posted July 23, 2002 Author Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Darklighter What I am suggesting is that there is not an ultimate 'ending', if you will. We can carry on with another story someother time. This is like the first in something like 2 or 3 episodes, so I think the story might need to ended soon yes. I'll have a go at compiling it once its finished. Once both Divine and Obi-wan have agreed to when it is finishing, you could PM me with your e-mails and I'll send the text file, punctuation all touched up and add in chapter names. If you would like to go back and edit your posts putting chapter names at the top be my guest I am now going back to finish my story by editing my last post:D edit - btw, I've just edited my last post and put a story in their...it fits well:D Umm, I kinda added you in Divine and Shadow. It doesn't realy effect the story much, hope its ok:( Ok I like that Idea. We could go into episode 2 soon. I would like for Darth Groovy to get in an action scene before we end this one. I have most of my character developement but I am saving his origins as a big surprise, maybe even the next chapter. Right now I just want Darth Groovy to kick some ass first. PM me and keep me posted on what's going on because I can't always be online, and when I do it isn't usually until really late when not that many users are online. Again I am so tickled as to how big and woderful this has become. Thank you all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agen Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Episode 3:Darkness Falls would sound a bit cheesy but so did all of them in the real move but for ep 2 i have no idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Groovy Posted July 23, 2002 Author Share Posted July 23, 2002 Originally posted by Agen_Terminator Episode 3:Darkness Falls would sound a bit cheesy but so did all of them in the real move but for ep 2 i have no idea. I will come up with a title when I start the new thread. This one is not officially closed yet. I won't let you guys down...I promise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reb Starblazer Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 Well, I'm doing some editing to it now. I've changed the bond film references to "Holovid films", so it makes sense in the Star Wars universe, and some references to Obi-Wan when he's already gone. It's weird to read through, seeing a different writing style every chapter:D One thing I've noticed though. We all suck with spelling and grammer, me included. My spell checker has never had such a workout;) I've included every post that we've done, some of them had to be worked around and edited a bit to work, but I think it should be ok. As for our rivalry Talliusc, wait till my next post, you'll be surprised where I'm taking it. As I'm compiling this, I never had a chance to write it before Obi-Wan closed Episode 1, so I think it's fair that I can write it and include it in there. That sounds reasonable, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Agen Posted July 23, 2002 Share Posted July 23, 2002 don't change my bond reference, it only was mentioned once and then whitedragon got the idea to do everything bond. and good to hear that it's coming along keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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