mercatfat Posted October 2, 2002 Posted October 2, 2002 sweet mother of god a sponge is a cultural icon and this saddens me thank you.
mercatfat Posted October 2, 2002 Author Posted October 2, 2002 please make that advertisment for red dragon stop making sound it irritates me like foam on skin thank you.
mercatfat Posted October 3, 2002 Author Posted October 3, 2002 in a perfect world angsty poetry would still exist therefore a perfect world is an impossiblility as though pigs became aviary like you after I punch you in the neck. because that would be perfect for me. thank you. note: this poem has nothing to do with the posters at GFN or anyone on the internet at all. really.
mercatfat Posted October 3, 2002 Author Posted October 3, 2002 a poetic phone conversation oh my god, this war on terrorism is gonna rule! I can't wait until this war is over and there's no more terrorism! i know! remember when the u.s. had a drug problem, and then we declared a war on drugs, and now you can't buy drugs anymore? it'll be just like that! right! god, if only the war on drugs hadn't been so effective! i could really use some fucking marijuana right about now! thank you.
Darth Eggplant Posted October 3, 2002 Posted October 3, 2002 Mercatfat Quote in a perfect world angsty poetry would still exist poetic liscence is acceptable but angst ridden poetry or angst riddled poetry would have served the sentiment in a more deep and profound manner. if your poem had been more Suessian in nature the angsty would have flavoured the thought perfectly. *note this is not criticism merely from one Beatnik to another an observation*
Darth Eggplant Posted October 3, 2002 Posted October 3, 2002 Mercatfat Quote right! god, if only the war on drugs hadn't been so effective! i could really use some ****ing marijuana right about now! they are starting to consider decriminalizng here in Canada, you should move, besdies drugs are bad:eek:
Darth Eggplant Posted October 3, 2002 Posted October 3, 2002 Quote oh my god, this war on terrorism is gonna rule! I can't wait until this war is over and there's no more terrorism! ] ah the dreams of youth are the regrets of maturity. without saying too much you are entitled to your views.
mercatfat Posted October 3, 2002 Author Posted October 3, 2002 The war poem was sarcastic in its entirety. heh.
GendoTheGreat Posted October 5, 2002 Posted October 5, 2002 I too have a deep and meaningful prose poem to share. Came to me just yesterday, it did. ---------------------------------------------- I LIKE COPS ---------------------------------------------- I like cops I wanted to be one I strove to become one I set out to become one I tried my best to become one I nearly was one They wouldn't let me be one It was a technicality for christ's sake! I fucking hate cops ---------------------------------------------- That's the about best I can do. I wonder what's wrong with me. Maybe I'm just lazy.
Darth Eggplant Posted October 6, 2002 Posted October 6, 2002 Gendo's poem revised I LIKE COPS, so what you gonna do what you gonna do when they come for you? I like cops I wanted to be one I strove to become one I set out to become one I tried my best to become one I nearly was one They wouldn't let me be one It was a technicality for christ's sake! I ****ing hate cops (now I just watch the Rockford Files.) sorry Gendo just joshing you
Darth Eggplant Posted November 3, 2002 Posted November 3, 2002 the Blue casket is getting a lot more thread traffic and older threads are dissapearing I think we should all collectively post in one thread to keep our poems alive and online. I have started a thread called More Or Less Poetry. It is also a place for giving poetry lessons, and for sharing poetic devices. If you wish to insure your words poetic posterity, transfer them over into this thread. that way we all can keep the thread alive and kicking.
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