mercatfat Posted October 2, 2002 Share Posted October 2, 2002 sweet mother of god a sponge is a cultural icon and this saddens me thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mercatfat Posted October 2, 2002 Author Share Posted October 2, 2002 please make that advertisment for red dragon stop making sound it irritates me like foam on skin thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Eggplant Posted October 2, 2002 Share Posted October 2, 2002 * * Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tall Guy Posted October 2, 2002 Share Posted October 2, 2002 where do you guys get the inspiration from?! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mercatfat Posted October 3, 2002 Author Share Posted October 3, 2002 in a perfect world angsty poetry would still exist therefore a perfect world is an impossiblility as though pigs became aviary like you after I punch you in the neck. because that would be perfect for me. thank you. note: this poem has nothing to do with the posters at GFN or anyone on the internet at all. really. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mercatfat Posted October 3, 2002 Author Share Posted October 3, 2002 a poetic phone conversation oh my god, this war on terrorism is gonna rule! I can't wait until this war is over and there's no more terrorism! i know! remember when the u.s. had a drug problem, and then we declared a war on drugs, and now you can't buy drugs anymore? it'll be just like that! right! god, if only the war on drugs hadn't been so effective! i could really use some fucking marijuana right about now! thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Eggplant Posted October 3, 2002 Share Posted October 3, 2002 Mercatfat in a perfect world angsty poetry would still exist poetic liscence is acceptable but angst ridden poetry or angst riddled poetry would have served the sentiment in a more deep and profound manner. if your poem had been more Suessian in nature the angsty would have flavoured the thought perfectly. *note this is not criticism merely from one Beatnik to another an observation* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Eggplant Posted October 3, 2002 Share Posted October 3, 2002 Mercatfat right! god, if only the war on drugs hadn't been so effective! i could really use some ****ing marijuana right about now! they are starting to consider decriminalizng here in Canada, you should move, besdies drugs are bad:eek: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Eggplant Posted October 3, 2002 Share Posted October 3, 2002 oh my god, this war on terrorism is gonna rule! I can't wait until this war is over and there's no more terrorism! ] ah the dreams of youth are the regrets of maturity. without saying too much you are entitled to your views. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mercatfat Posted October 3, 2002 Author Share Posted October 3, 2002 The war poem was sarcastic in its entirety. heh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GendoTheGreat Posted October 5, 2002 Share Posted October 5, 2002 I too have a deep and meaningful prose poem to share. Came to me just yesterday, it did. ---------------------------------------------- I LIKE COPS ---------------------------------------------- I like cops I wanted to be one I strove to become one I set out to become one I tried my best to become one I nearly was one They wouldn't let me be one It was a technicality for christ's sake! I fucking hate cops ---------------------------------------------- That's the about best I can do. I wonder what's wrong with me. Maybe I'm just lazy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Eggplant Posted October 6, 2002 Share Posted October 6, 2002 Gendo's poem revised I LIKE COPS, so what you gonna do what you gonna do when they come for you? I like cops I wanted to be one I strove to become one I set out to become one I tried my best to become one I nearly was one They wouldn't let me be one It was a technicality for christ's sake! I ****ing hate cops (now I just watch the Rockford Files.) sorry Gendo just joshing you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lateralis Posted October 6, 2002 Share Posted October 6, 2002 damn pigs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Eggplant Posted November 3, 2002 Share Posted November 3, 2002 the Blue casket is getting a lot more thread traffic and older threads are dissapearing I think we should all collectively post in one thread to keep our poems alive and online. I have started a thread called More Or Less Poetry. It is also a place for giving poetry lessons, and for sharing poetic devices. If you wish to insure your words poetic posterity, transfer them over into this thread. that way we all can keep the thread alive and kicking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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