gomez88 Posted March 31, 2003 Share Posted March 31, 2003 my short Story: After master yoda finds out about anakins marrage he is expeled from the jedi order. Palpatine show anakin some made up footage of dooku killing his wife and anakin kills him and becomes vader after turning off his new red light saber he finds out that obi wan was true about the sith. And confronts palpatine he chokes anakin and tells him never to tell anyone and turns him to the dark side. After being told to hunt the jedi he heads over to the building which holds the consil and plants a bomb. Yoda confronts him and says a few words and talks to him about palpatine and his turning to the dark side and yoda tells him that still alive is she and in a fit of rage goes to see his master. Anakin has a stress at his master and then gets choked again and dashes of to see her. anakin smashes open the door to a room and sees her and he is pleased to see her until he hears a voice Master Obi wan, and he jokingly says "thats a name i've not heard in along time" but then tells anakin to leave and that he isn't a jedi no more and leaves them to loading up there ship. Anakin turns up at a site of the DEATH STAR!!! and sees his master looking out of the window (as he always does) and tells him about obi wan and his wife. Anakin the Emporer some storm troopers go to see obi wan the the jedi members , anakin is told by his wife that she doesn't like him any more and runs onto a ship after he turns on his light saber. Obi wan walks over saying i don't think so and draws him light saber. At that moment anakin turns to the Emporer in the shadows who comes out and stands next to anakin then yoda mace and the rest of the jedi consil members come out. The Emporer takes off his hood to the jedis disbaleaf at this moment dooku apears through a door and says master a won't fail you again and is told to attack the jedi him and the emporer attack them and leave the jedi padawans obi wan and vader to do battal with storm troopers and clone troopers in the background fighting. anakin is too powerful for most of the younger jedi with the help of boba fett they kill them all and it is left to vader Vs obi wan they circle each other talking and then start attacking showing just how good obi wan is he floors anakin and is about to kill him when the ghost of qui gon appears to tell him not to kill the choosen one obi wan takes anakin to a medical center to be treated. In the firce battle of dooku the emporer etc dooku is killed by yoda and mace is takin on the emporer with the jedi consil. Most of the consilare killed by falling debri from the roof which was brought down by palpatine he then draws his cool light saber and duals with them and kills them except mace he starts to choke him but mace can't break free (coz he never met the grip before) and in the reflection of some blood you see the emporer drop mace from a height and then put the saber through hs head. In the end amidarla has twins and she gives one to bail to take to dantooine and one to obi wan to take to tatooine.amidarla then flys off in a naboobine fighter but is shot down with her decoys. In the end yoda comes to obi wan and tells him to keep his identy secrete and hands him anakins light saber "though you should have this i did, keep it your will." it fades out to blank black screen... yoda says "may the force be with your........... always it will.........." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gomez88 Posted March 31, 2003 Author Share Posted March 31, 2003 there are alot of spelling mistakes as i am not a good speller. There a alot of things i have missed out and feel free to add opions. Anakin in the jedi high consil lookin for master obi wan and finds jar jar binks and asks him where to find obi wan and jar jar won't tell him so anakin grips him and obi wan shouts whats going on there he sees jar jar and then turns around to find "anakin" "no vader" plays vader theme. Also i haven't put R2 D2 or c3po in my scribt so can some one add them in thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
boinga1 Posted April 1, 2003 Share Posted April 1, 2003 man-you type like I take notes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gomez88 Posted April 1, 2003 Author Share Posted April 1, 2003 i was rushed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swphreak Posted April 1, 2003 Share Posted April 1, 2003 The only problems I found were: In the end amidarla*(1) has twins and she gives one to bail to take to dantooine*(2) and one to obi wan to take to tatooine. amidarla*(3) then flys off in a naboobine fighter but is shot down with her decoys..... (1) aww that's kinda cute, amadarla... it's acually spelled amidala (2) I think Bail is the senator/ruler/whatever of Alderaan, that is where Leia will go (3) see number 1 The rest is your idea, and I have no problem with it. We all have our ideas of Ep 3. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkiTzoGuy Posted April 5, 2003 Share Posted April 5, 2003 That was a pretty interesting story.. But i had some trouble with the emporer fighting against the whole council especially with yoda and Mace windu. I don't think that Darth Sidious would kill them off that easily.. unless you are right with the choke thingy.. or the lightning.. But the lighting was discovered when anakin and obiwan were fighting against dooku. But anyway i do think that boba will have a special part in ep3 because he could be hired by either Anakin or Dooku or Sidious to hunt down the week jedi.. then leave the strong ones for Anakin and Dooku and Sidous... Or Anakin can kill some jedi in Aerial combat then leave the rest to die by Sidious and Dooku.. Oh off the subject a bit... I don't think it would be that easy to kill mace windu with that choke thingy.. unless yoda and the rest of the jedi were occupied by something else. I trying to say is .. wouldn't the other jedi try to stop sidious from choking mace windu?.. If that is how Mace Windu dies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkiTzoGuy Posted April 6, 2003 Share Posted April 6, 2003 Maybe thats not how it happens.. but it could.. i agree with you all.. heheh .. The third episode will be very sad cause a lot of peoples favorite jedis are gonna die.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joesdomain Posted April 6, 2003 Share Posted April 6, 2003 I think Padme won't get killed in episode III. It will probably be somewhere right after episode III and Lucas will choose a specific author and let him decide how to kill her off. Sorta leaves a mystery at the end of the movie. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ckcsaber Posted April 6, 2003 Share Posted April 6, 2003 Well, I think the Jedi Council would never "expel" a Jedi. Especially one as powerful, and emotional as Anakin. It would be too dangerous. My guess is that Anakin will leave the Order in frustration and disgust, maybe after he is found to be a newlywed, or maybe in anger towards Obi-Wan. I'm sure Anakin is going to explode at Obi some time..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CurryKing Posted April 15, 2003 Share Posted April 15, 2003 Apparently Obiwan discovers that Anakin is married and he is punished by the council but NOT expelled, i think this pushes Anakins resentment for Obiwan further. Expect Obiwan's failiure as a teacher to be a big part of Anakin turnig to the Dark Side and expect him to try and turn him back just before the duel, hence the line 'Obiwan once thought as u did.....' but he fails n procedes to kick his a**. Also apparently Obiwan is going to be hard as nailz in EpIII. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jedi90 Posted April 16, 2003 Share Posted April 16, 2003 padmae does survive ep3, GL said so himself. and if you remember in rotj leia talks about her mother to luke being kind and sad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkiTzoGuy Posted April 17, 2003 Share Posted April 17, 2003 Are you sure? cause im thinking that padme would have to die in this movie unles hes making another one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SkiTzoGuy Posted April 17, 2003 Share Posted April 17, 2003 Are you sure? cause im thinking that padme would have to die in this movie unles hes making another one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CurryKing Posted April 17, 2003 Share Posted April 17, 2003 Apparently (i don't know if this is true) GL wanted to kill her off but she (Nat Portman) protested saying she wanted to read about her charcter in the EU books that will be written after episode 3. Apparently GL did it to keep her sweet, ahh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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