machievelli

YOu and Tysyacha.

Well anyone who is wedded to one idea of what truth is is unwilling to accept reality. I actually have two traps in my post. Bet you can't figure out what they are

I found it, but it's over at fanfiction. Is that the one?

may be out of work my may 1st and out of money June 6th

Jae, my previous laptop died, but the only link I have for the sign in page to post went with it. Help!

I have, but it was by a pretty bad publishing house. Publishamerica. I joke about it now because I was happy at the time. Now I say it's like you are boasting about your first date... with your sister

just curious...

You confused me because I looked here and didn't find it.

Have we had entries, or do I still have time to try for Jayvar?

Tys, will you beta read my Fairy works?

As to my comments in the critic's thread, your work is good on the whole, but like any young writer, there are mistakes that are on the technical level that interfere, and I am not talking about what we have previously discussed. I suggest you check out a book on script writng, or better yet, watch a movie from a critic's point of view. Look at the scenes they wrote that don't feel right, and see where even a professional makes mistakes that bother their viewers.

Don't feel depressed by what I have said. My primary job here is to help you grow as an author, not rip you up when you try.

Contact me via facebook or direct E-mail. I am here but only occasionally.

Jae, would you beta read my Fairy works?

reviewed this week, just have not posted it

'Forgive me for this but it's been on the brain a while, how about a CSI who does seem to know everything?'

More definition. Psychic? Sherlock Holmes style? Having just seen the Marvel Avenger Movie, I can picture a 'super sleuth' Bruce Banner' type. Just have to find what girl to use, or introduce another one...

MacNamara said it best. During the CUban Missile Crisis he went to the Pentagon and asked them what they planned. The answer was; One nuke flies out of Cuba, every bomber already in orbit goes to attack, and every missile gets launched. He looked at them, then said, 'Gentlement, that is not a strategy, it's a spasm'

It might have helped to send a message

Answer to mention one, you're right, it doesn't make a lot of sense yet. Send me an email or facebook message to give me more data

Answer to message 2, While most of the story appears more symbolic rather than actual, what do you want me to look for?

yep

working on my fic. Going to post another chunk today

It looks like my month for seeing old friends and family.

Can you get hold of the staff over at Star Wars Knights for me? I had to replace my computer and it won't let me access favorites from my old files

Sure

I thought Art of War was written by Sun Tzu. However yes, that is where I got the moniker from. Now quick question, what is wrong with that name?