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Jek died "Good Dustil you are now a dark knight go to Koriban and choose a apprentace

 

 

 

 

 

The contestents

 

1) Name Koji Lak

Age 10

Gender Male

Strenghes Supreme at close range combat

Weaknesses Can not use force poowers and can not resist them

 

 

2 Name Keya Lak

Age 17

Gender Female

Strenghes Supreme with the force

Weaknesses Bad with saber

 

 

3 Name Lay Yurishma

Age 15

Gender Male

Strenghes Medium with the force and saber

Weaknesses ???

 

 

Uni Yurishma

Age 8

Gender Famale

Strenghes Medium with force and saber

Weaknesse ???

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I land in Dreshae and walk to the Sith Academy. Some students look at me.

 

"Look! A hopeful!" The Clan Leader says.

 

"That's no hopeful!" a student named Keya Lak said. "That's Revan's Apprentance!

 

"Run!" The Leader said, but it was too late. I had satred to choke him and he soon died. I turned to Keya.

 

"Hello, Beautiful." I say. "Would you like to be my Apprentance?"

 

"I would love to." she says to me. "And I like the sound of beautiful."

 

"Ok, but what will you call me?" I ask, teasing.

 

"How about Master?" She says.

 

"Deal." I say.

 

We walk to my ship and pass everyone who is in shock and awe. I tell her that her training awaits. And she kisses me slightly on the cheek.

 

(Remember, the Darkside can love. So Revan, can you make a remark about us since Bastila is your girl?)

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Jak enters the acadamy and sees Shi-Quin Hawk "My loyal sith fight him kill That man with his sabers drawn." in all the confusion I yell to Dustil "We must leave." after the 3 people land on the starforge "I see you have yourself a girl." said Jak with a smile on his face "Atleast now you will stay away from Bastila." I say Jokeingly as Bastila enteres the room and kisses Jak on the lips.

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I train Keya in my Art of Combat, Vaapad. She soons masters it well. We have duels against other Sith who are fools to chalange us. Soon we creat a bond between us, like Bastila and Revan. We train together for many weeks untill she is ready. Then I take her to the Dueling Room.

 

"You shall fight me." I tell her.

 

"Yes Master." She says drawing her saber.

 

In a flash of light we strike at each other. She uses Flurry against me, but I block it. Her Double Bladed Saber and my two duel sabers clash in a flash of light. After five minutes I tell her to stop. A flicker of swet races down my cheek.

 

"You have learned well." I tell her.

 

"Thank You Master." She reasponds.

 

We walk back to are quarters to get some well earned rest...

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In the mean time Jak was trying to get one of his droids to work "T3M4 GET IN HERE." said Revan in rage then the door opens and Bastila enters with T3M4 "Here you go master." "How many times have I told you sweatheart call me Jak." "Sweat heart I like the sound of that." then they kiss

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Name:Raven Kune

Age:19

Sex:Male

Race:Unknown (assumed to be human)

Allignment: Sith

Rank:Unknown

Aka:None at the moment

Biography:Ever since Raven was three he was taken from his home and trained in the ways of the force. First he was taken to the Jedi Enclave on Dantooine in every way possible. Although his skills with the force went on unmatched by his peers they were still far from great but his skill with all kinds of saber was incomparible. When he was twelve he completed his Jedi training and was given the opportunity to take a break for the time. In this time he realized it was not his force abilities that were limiting him but the knowledge he had of it. Although his abilities were good he knew they could still be better, that he could become stronger...much stronger. He decided if he could master the other side, the dark side of the force his powers would transend to a level beyond even that of the Sith Exar Kun. He spoke with master Vandar in private about this and although he was afraid Raven would fall he also believed that it was what he needed to become one who would leave their mark on history. Raven left the Enclave that day and went to the planet of Korriban where he was welcomed in immediatly. In only five years he mastered the ways of the Sith and although both sides of his powers were stronger they were still not at the level he felt they could be at so he stayed on Korriban and searched the tombs of the ancient Sith to find the answer. On his 18th birthday he found his answer. In the tomb of Naga Sadow on the far back he found a Quote from a man with his last name. The exact words were: The warrior whos emotions control him is wild, The warrior who has no emotions is deadly, but the warrior who can weild those emotions is more powerful than any other. The day after he was sent on a mission to kill a powerful Jedi. Only a week later the body was found with another quote. I have not fallen into darkness. I have assended to it. It was signed by Raven...He has not been seen since that day until now where his mentor Mastor Vandar has scene him in the his window in the Jedi Academy of Courescant.

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((hmm alright is Sypher Kune ok))

A dark figure sat on the window sill of Master Vandars room...He had entirely too many lightsabers to be a mere Jedi but noone had noticed him yet as he took a sip from a small black flask he had. He looked down on Corascants streets and spat.

 

"Pathetic these fools they sit here going through there lives saying they are innocents...there are no innocents..everyone of them is tainted with sin...falling into a false promise given by there..protectors"

 

He leaned back on the windowsill thinking waiting for the Master to return to his room.

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