Renegade Angel Posted May 17, 2005 Share Posted May 17, 2005 Awhile back I said I was going to come up with a fantasy story. But I soon left the forums and never created it. Soon, the thread was deleted so.... --------------------------------------------------------------------------- -The Road to Twilight- INTRODUCTION In a country known as Oracle, where magic, wizards, dragons, and knights exist, a war has broken out, and The Ancient Guardian of Light, the being with angel wings and the control over light, has dissapeared... The Demon Kingdom and The Heaven Kingdom are the two currently at war but the Twilights(neutral) stand their ground waiting for the Perfect chance to srike the two armies. __________________________________________________ MAIN CHARACTERS Name- Matt Occupation- Demon Lord Gender- Male Name- Gus Occupation- Guardian of Light Gender- Male Name- John Occupation- Elemental Wizard Gender- Male Name- Wes Occupation- Holy Swordsman Gender- Male ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 1- The Demon Lord Chains walked slowly down the dirt path, he was heading for a small village called Gugean. He heard there was supposed to be tryouts for their army. He knew they'd except him... after all he was The Guardian.... but of course he was the only one who knew that yet. "Hello? Please help me...." He turned and saw a wounded soldier with long blonde hair laying, half dead, in the shade of an old Jubu Tree. The soldier was cut in the ribs, badly. The Jubu fruits were laying on the ground, but there was something wrong with the picture.... he realized that the tree and the fruits were gray.... and the shade of the tree extended farther than i t shold've. He walked closer to the soldier and suddenly sensed darkness... and a hunger... not for food, not for blood, and not for sex... it was for anger and hatred... The soldier levitated and laughed evily. He dissapeared.. and then reapearred a half a second later as a demon... he looked much like the grim reaper, but he was still human. --------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 2- Fading Memories The Demon took out a huge sword and pointedit at the sky. It started to get cloudy, and the ground was shaking. Two bony, skeleton hands came up from a crack in the ground and grabbed him around the waist. When Gus awoke the last thing he remembered was thunder and rain. He also noticed that was ALL that he remembered, he felt, well, empty, like the memories in his head had been tossed away. "I see you are awake." came a deep voice from a shadow in the corner. Gus realized he was in a castle. The figure came out of the darkness, He, or it, was human and had long, blonde hair, similar to Gus's hair. It wore a dark black cloak. "You are no doubt the Guardian.'' The Guardian? Chains thought. "Yes, that's right, The Guardian of the Light." Said the cloaked man, as if he had read Gus's mind. "Oh, that's right," he said. Gus felt a sharp stabbing pain in his head. "Those memories were already ripped from you." "Slowly, my spell is tearing away each one of your memories." Gus felt another pain. He closed his eyes and saw a beach, it was beautiful... The memory was ripped out. More and more memories flashed and faded. Suddenly, a memory of a tall, blonde haired girl with brown hilights and green eyes popped up, she was wearing a dark black cloak. Gus realized after a minute that he was fighting for his life to keep the memory. The force pulled harder and harder. "Don't fight it." said a deep voice. _________________________________________________ Chains -------- Feedback, PLEASE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted May 18, 2005 Share Posted May 18, 2005 great story! is it star wars or something else.. good work, please continue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted May 18, 2005 Author Share Posted May 18, 2005 Actually, I just made it up! Chapter 3 will be released by 6 pm Eastern time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Colma Adawin Posted May 18, 2005 Share Posted May 18, 2005 This COULD be in the Dantooine Theatre Company Forum Great to have you back chains! good story but if i were you i'd think about changing the way you start your chapters. Your Introduction is perfect, but it should lead onto Chapter 1 thus Chapter 1 leading to Chapter 2 etc. This could turn out to be a great read. <whisper> Just dont forget to copyright it, someone will nick it from ya ! Great to see you round again! MattCole Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stingerhs Posted May 18, 2005 Share Posted May 18, 2005 ^^^^ in all honesty, thats probably where it should be, and in a thread that i stickied to boot..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hallucination Posted May 18, 2005 Share Posted May 18, 2005 Brilliant stuff chains. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Renegade Angel Posted May 18, 2005 Author Share Posted May 18, 2005 Originally posted by stingerhs ^^^^ in all honesty, thats probably where it should be, and in a thread that i stickied to boot..... Uh.... *Thinking* No one.... uh.... reads that thread?....*Runs* EDIT Copyright- Chains 2005 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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