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this is a story i once posted in the cantina, and now i will post the Chronicles of this story:

 

The Chronicles of the Real Sith:

 

Part I

The Real Sith (the very beginning):

 

For a long time ago, the sith lived in the planet of Korriban, they were a primitive people. Fighting with each others, they had a prophecy tells that: "in the time of the greatest despair there shall come a savior, he will bring peace and glory to the sith, and he will be known as the son of the suns", and after a period of time the DARK JEDI landed on the planet of Korriban, amazed by their magic and forces, the sith believed that the dark Jedi is their prophesied saviors, thus the dark Jedi elevated themselves to god-like status on Korriban, becoming the rulers of the Sith people.

Being enslaved by the dark Jedi, some of the sith realized the truth, that these people are not their saviors, thus they tried to rebel against them but the great dark lord of the sith MARKA RAGNOS perishes their hopes for salvation, still their leader Siin El-Zayka was able to escape from Korriban with some people into the outer rim. The sith were amazed by the space as the dark Jedi forbade them from flying in order to keep them under their control, anyway Siin's ship landed in the surface of undiscovered planet named Samaraa and they lived there without any disturbance.

 

 

Part II

Knights of the Old Republic:

 

Through time the real sith were growing stronger and they started to put a plan to revenge the dark Jedi who enslaved them once, and revenge the Jedi who were the reason behind the dark Jedi's invasion. A dark lord of the sith named Darth Tranka, was able to convince the Mandalore to unleash a war against the republic, and then he took Jedi Master Kriea as his apprentice and named her DARTH TRAYA. Revan destroyed the Mandalorians and discovered the presence of the real sith so he conquered the republic in order to make it stronger to face the real sith, but Tranka was aware of Revan's plan thus he cheated his apprentice Malak and lead him to betrayed his master and so, Revan's plane was doomed as the real sith had more time to build their army and make it stronger. After a period of time Revan succeeded in killing his apprentice and traveled deep in to the outer rim to find the real sith empire, meanwhile Traya was manipulating another man known as The Exile to kill her apprentice Nihilus then join her to bring death to the force. She had failed in that and met her demise at the hands of The Exile himself, who followed Revan into the outer rim.

 

 

Part III

The Dark Tranquility:

 

Revan and The Exile met each others in one of the real sith base, and after many dangerous missions the two reached Darth Tranka's ship, and there Tranka reveals his plans of choosing one of them as an apprentice, and that he knew that Traya will betray him thus he was looking for another apprentice, and then he was able to make them fall into the dark side as the two fought each others but the arrival of their friends including Bastila, Carth, Visas and Mandalore made them return to the light side as the two united their forces and defeated Tranka and his fleet was destroyed, but they didn’t destroy the sith order as they didn’t reach the planet Samaraa, thanks to the stars and moons that are close to each others because of a very strong magnetic field which make a veil that covered Samaraa and make it unseenable, however Tranka's son Kabaan rebuild the order a new era of peace covered Samaraa once again.

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Part IV

The great conflict of the sith:

 

The era of lord Kabaan has came into an end as lord Ghan begun a hidden war against the dark lord of the sith, and by the time, a lot of sith lords have joined the cause of Darth Ghan who demands that the leadership of the sith must goes to the strongest sith lord not to the older son of El-Zayka family, and that lead the two sides of the sith to a war, the weaker side in this war was obviously Kabaan El-Zayka's side, the rebellions lead by Ghan himself broke Kabaan's last defenses and enter Nobahar palace and were on the verge of wining the battle but Kabaan was planning to make them enter the palace then he will blow the palace up and his plan goes right as Ghan and his troops fell in this trap and as a result they were dead and Kabaan was the winner as his dynasty continued to rule the real sith.

 

 

Part V

The Rising of Darth Senceros

 

200 years after the great conflict of the sith, there was a sith lord named Darth Sinceros, who believed to be the last of Lord Ghan's seed, he was planning to have his revenge from the El-Zaykas by killing the Dark Lord of the Sith: Darth Babek.

Darth Sinceros made a trap for Babek's son Atal, then a group of 12 sith lords attacked him, Atal fought bravely and killed 4 of them but he fall in the end, after his son's death while his younger son is away from Samaraa and no one heard of him since 4 years, Lord Babek begun to feel frustrated and confused thus Sinceros begin to act as his best friend and manipulating him to make him kill his followers in order to be alone without anyone to aid him, soon Darth Babek took Sinceros as his apprentice and exiled his former one: Darth Raad, then Sinceros felt that it’s the right time to make his final step and he killed his master while he was sleeping, and accused Raad for this murder, and then married his widow Queen Norah and proclaimed the title of the Dark Lord of the Sith taking his daughter Darth Enigma as an apprentice.

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Rules:

 

*I am the thread master, and I suggest that stingerhs to be the mod.

*PM me if you want to suggest some moves that affects the storyline.

*No god moding

*No controlling other people's characters (unless they give you permission)

*every player must has only one char (he will be able to play with another if his char died).

*You can be anything except a Jedi coz we are in a planet Jedi don’t know about it.

*Before you post you must mention the place where your character in.

*Try to be yourself, like you are in real life coz that will make the story more exciting.

 

Character Sheet:

 

Name:

Aka:

Age:

Gender:

Species:

Affiliation:

Alliance : (Senceros or El-Zayka)

Rank:

Ship: (if you have one)

Appearance:

Weapons:

Picture: (it will help us imagine the characters and make the story looks like a real game)

Bio:

 

 

 

 

Prologue:

 

A long time in a galaxy far, far away…

Darth Sinceros the Dark Lord of the Real Sith ruled Samaraa with an iron hand as he sent his troops to track down every man allied with El-Zayka dynasty, in this critical situation, Queen Norah sent a message to Darth Raad, the former apprentice of the falling sith lord Darth Babek, asking him to find her lost son and complete his training in order to make him a powerful sith lord to end Darth Sinceros's rule…

Because of his hidden love for her and his respect for his previous master he accepted the mission and fly in to the space to search the last heir of El-Zayka's throne….

 

Main Characters:

 

Darth Sinceros: (playable)

Male, Sith, age: unknown

the dark lord of the sith

Place: the Nobahar palace in Samaraa

 

Darth Enigma: (playable)

Female, Sith, age: 17

the dark lord's apprentice and daughter

Place: the Nobahar palace in Samaraa

 

Queen Norah: (playable)

Female, Sith, age: 31

the Queen of Samaraa

Place: the Nobahar palace in Samaraa

 

Darth Raad: (playable)

Male, Sith, age: 35

the exiled apprentice of Darth Babek

Place: Mostafar system

 

Azdashir (Darth Khaos)

Male, Sith, Babek's lost son.

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My PC:

 

 

Name: Azdashir El-Zayka

Aka: Darth Khaos

Age: 20

Gender: Male

Species: Sith

Affiliation: The Real Sith

Alliance: El-Zayka

Rank: Sith apprentice

Ship: the Black Voyagerhttp://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a165/Korfredonn/TheBlackVoyager.jpg

Appearance: long black hair, white skin and full black eyes (the sith don’t have a pupil in their eyes, only one color). And always has a rosary his father once gave it to him in his hand.

Weapons: two red curved lightsabers, Darth Khaos's robe and mask.

Picture: http://i11.photobucket.com/albums/a165/Korfredonn/AzdashirDarthKhaos.jpg

 

Bio: Azdashir is Darth babek's and Queen Norah's youngest son, he was trained the way of the sith from a very young age, but unlike many of his age he was yearning for more knowledge about the force, and everyone saw in his brother Atal as the stronger and the heir of his father's throne, thus he decided at the age of 17 to travel to the republic space in order to learn more, during his traveling he encountered many struggles and survived, he has been to Yavin, where he visited Exar Kun's temple, the one who always impressed Azdashir along with his apprentice Ulic Quel-Dorma, in spite of the hatred between of the dark Jedi and the real sith. He also visited Korriban the real sith's ancient home, where he knew about a prophecy of the real sith in an ancient temple, that prophecy that turn his people to a slaves for the dark Jedi, and in all his journey he was learning more and more about the force, at last he reached Courusant and saw the heart of the republic, thus he developed a clear but not final thoughts of a new sith order.

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Name:Zarlak Wolf

Aka:Darth Zarlak

Age:37

Gender:Male

Species:Human/Sith

Affiliation:The real sith

Alliance : El-Zayka

Rank:Knight (close to being a master) :sithk:

Ship:none. But he is an expert piolt

Appearance:*look at picture*

Weapons:none.He lightsaber was taken from him

Picture:http://emu.makii.pl/imagetemp/metal-gear-solid-3-snake-eater-pic1.jpg

Bio:Zarlak was found by a sith on the dark side planet of Korriban. His mother abdond him, accuesing him of being evil. Well she was right. Zarlak was a promising padawan and a good general.

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I was sitting in a cell block in the prison ship. I had a cell mate, a male rodian, but he was an ugly alien, so i killed him. I there was a force barrier preventing me from using my force powers to escape. But that was okay. Next to my cell block was another jedi. This jedi is wanting by the sith, alive. I was sent to track him. I had done my part. Now i just needed to wait for the sith to come.

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Place: in the black voyage, somewhere between Korriban and Dantooine.

 

"nooooooooo"

Darth Khaos woke up, the vision of his family hunted him still, he saw only pain and suffering, he knew that he must go back to Samaraa, but he swore an oath to his father that he wont come back until he become a great sith lord, he activated the auto-pilot then he went to sleep again….

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Name: Drekker

age: 32

Gender: Male

Species: Half breed, Human/Sith

Affiliation: The Sith

Alliance: Darth Sinceros

Rank: Sith Lord

Ship: The Fist of Ragnos. A Massive Dreadnought. http://rpggamer.org/shippics/sithdreadnaught.jpg

Appearance: 6'3" 208lbs. Muscled. Long black pants, knee high jack boots, with sith runes on them. no shirt. His skin which once was a reddish color, is now a pale and cracked gray, from Darkside corruption. His head is bald.His eyes are blood red. His back and chest are covered with ancient sith tattoo's and scars. His face is more human looking than Sith, aside from the darkside corruption, and red eyes. http://www.pcgamer.com/images/k2_pic1.jpg

Weapons: A Single red bladed lightsaber. The hilt is black, and is covered with tiny and intricate sith designs.

Bio: Drekker's father was a powerful Sith, and his mother was a human. He was born on the ancient Sith world of Ziost. He is a master with a saber, and possesses both tremendous physical strength, and strength in the force.

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Name:Hades ki-no'ma

Aka: Darth Exuro

Age: 37

Gender: Male

Species: Sith

Affiliation: The Real Sith

Alliance: El-Zayka

Rank: Sith Marauder

Ship: The Trident (A smaller version of the laviathan)

Appearance: http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a353/starmark2k/Heinrich.jpg

Weapons: Crimson Lightsaber.

 

Bio: Hades became the head of the Ki-no'ma family after the death of his father, This also made him the captain of his familys intradictor starship The Trident. The ki-No'ma family have always been loyal to the El-Zayka, fighting along side them in The great conflict of the sith the family helped them keep control of the planet Samaraa. Now Hades wishes to help the El-Zayka by finding Azdashir El-Zayka and bringfng him back to Samaraa.

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Location: Bridge Of he Trident, hiding behind the last planet of the Korriban system.

 

Darth Exuro stood looking at a holographic display of the planet Korriban, he turned to his younger brother and operations officer who was also standing by the display.

 

"Can they detect us?" Darth Exuro asked

 

"No, as long as we keep the last planet between us and them we should be fine."

 

"Scan the whole system, i need to know if he is here."

 

"Aye My lord."

 

A few moments passed as the young officer began to use his console, When the time was up he looked up at his older brother.

 

"No sign of anything around the system but he may be on Korriban. we can't scan there without compromissing owr persission."

 

"Get a shuttle ready i'll go down to the planet... alone."

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{In orbit above the planet Samaraa, The Fist of Ragnos casts its Dark shadow, nearly blocking out the sun with its mammoth size. Drekker stands on the bridge gazing a watchful eye on the planet below}

 

Drekker thinks to himself and reflects, as his troops and bridge officers scurry about the ship.

" I can sense a great disturbance in the force. Something is coming, something is happening I can feel it. Soon there will be a great and brutal conflict. One that will consume all of the sith, new and old. Surely my lord Sinceros has felt this as well. I long to stain my hands with the blood of those who would defy my master......but i will wait until the time is right, a time when my enemy steps forward into the night, I will hide there in the darkness, and when the time is right I will strike."

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Somthing was wrong. My allies should of come by now. The quarren prison gaurd looked inside my cage "Somthing wrong?" he said with a snicker

"I'm just fed up looking at your ugly face" Some idiot in the cage oposite me.

"Shut up!"shouted the quarren angrly at me

"What you going to do about it?" I said with a smerk on my face

"Shut up or else i'll come in there and beet the daylights out of you" threanted the quarren.

"Try it" the quarren cut the power to the force barrier to my prison cell and walked in. Bad move. I quickly grapped his head and smashed it againt the barrier on the opposite prison cell. The ship was a small transport so taking over the ship wasnt too hard. I sat at the cockpit of the prison transport and sat a corse for Korriban. Then I got the ship to enter hyperspace.

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Location: Korriban

 

The Small "real sith" shuttle entered the atmosphere of Korriban, Darth Exuro didn't bother trying to hide the shuttle by setting a stealth trajectory. When his shuttle got in scanning range he noticed the planet was virtually deserted and there were signs That many of the more resent structures had been left derelict. These buildings however did not interest him, if Azdashir El-Zayka was anywhere it would be a temple of their ancestors. His shuttle flew low towards what appeared to be the largest of the ancient temples. He landed his shuttle at the bottom of a large staircase that was at the foot of a massive archway. Darth Exuro left his shuttle and began to wark up the steps towards the archway.

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Location: in the Black Voyager, close to Korriban.

 

When Khaos woke up from his nightmare, he felt a great disturbance in the force, like there where a gathering of many force sensitives in one place, he went to the control room of the Black Voyager and noticed that he is very close to Korriban, "there is nothing to do there" he said, but suddenly felt something penetrating him, it was like a whisper, an echo in the force, something called him and it was coming from Korriban…

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Location: Ancient "Real" Sith Temple, Korriban.

 

Exuro reached the great archway to enter the table, there was no door although it appeared there may have been one many years ago. He walked through the and looked up to the ceiling, light was shining through a series of hole which allowed him to see various statues and over peices of art. The Statues were of the "real" sith, They were of happy times on the planet, before the dark jedi. The walls were also covered by signagraphs that were familliar to him it was like a less evolved version of his language. This was the temple of his people, and he felt at home here but he could not savour the moment he had to look for sign of Azdashir El-Zayka.

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Location: Korriban space.

 

After exitting hyperspace I did a scan of the area. My scans showed there was a ship known as the Black Voyager. It didnt give me much info but The Black Voyager sounded familar so i hailed the ship "This is Darth Zarlak of the dauntless. Please I.D yourself"

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Khaos decided to go to Korriban, he wants to know what is the thing that called him out there, when he was entering Korriban space he saw a ship flying near him, and then he recieved a transmision "This is Darth Zarlak of the dauntless. Please I.D yourself"

 

he ignored this words for a second but then deided to answer:

"I am Darth Khaos"

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Location: Ancient "real" sith Temple, Korriban

 

Darth Exuro walked further into the temple when his com-link began to beep, he raised it to his mouth and pushed a button on the side.

 

"What is it?"

 

"Darth Exuro, we've just picked up two ship entering the system"

 

"Have they detected the trident?"

 

"Unlikly sir the planet we are hiding behind is producing a strong magnetic field, we should be virtually invisible."

 

"What can you tell me about the ships?"

 

"Very little My Lord, Unfortunetly The magnetic field is also affecting our sensors."

 

"Ummm, Keep me informed of their movements."

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when Khaos heard the word El-Zayka, he was surprised, "why would his family asking for capturing a Jedi? why would they build a bais outside thier empire?" he asked himself, then he started to realize that there must be alot of changes that happened since he'd gone.

 

he replied "why would El-Zayka want a Jedi?"

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Location: Ancient "real" sith Temple, Korriban.

 

Darth exuro continued to walk deeper into the Temple he saw no signs of the one he seeked but that currently didn't concern him. He was more interested in the ancient text he was reading on the wall as he walked. The text spoke of a "son of the suns" Who would unite the sith and bring peace. The more he read the more he became intrigued by it, he had remembered stories from his child-hood that were similar to these but he always presumed they were just child-stories. This however made him beleive these were anceint prophersies, before the dark jedi came.

 

As he came to the end of the texts he approaced a large room. The room seemed to be in the shape of a dome with a large spike in the center that reached to the ceiling. Darth exuro approached the spike and touched the side of it. Suddenly various lights became to come on as the temple surged with power. A large beam of light shot out of the roof of the temple beaming all the way upo into space. Darth exuros com-link began to beep so he acctivated it.

 

"Report?"

 

"My lord we are detecting a power surge at your location!"

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In orbit above Samaraa The Fist of Ragnos continued its orbit.

 

{Drekker sits alone meditating in his chamber aboard the ship, his walls are decorated with lightsabers, that once belonged to Jedi He had killed. To him they were trophies which would compliment his power everytime he looked at them. His thoughts drifting accross the galaxy continueing his search for greater darkness}

 

quietly to himself " I am the darkness, I feed on it, focus it, use it, it makes me stronger, more alive, more awake, more powerful. I can sense it, I can feel it. The darkness calls to me it is my ally. I call upon all the power of the ancient Sith Lords, on all the knowledge of the Sith. Guide me to this threat that echoes in the back of my mind. Help me to seek it out and destroy it. Lord Sinceros will not tolerate failure.....and neither will I."

 

Drekker smiles coldly

 

"And there is my answer, the darkness has never failed me."

 

Drekker rises and heads towards the bridge of his vessel.

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when Khaos heard the word El-Zayka, he was surprised, "why would his family asking for capturing a Jedi? why would they build a bais outside thier empire?" he asked himself, then he started to realize that there must be alot of changes that happened since he'd gone.

 

he replied "why would El-Zayka want a Jedi?"

 

 

"I dont care about the why. Maybe he knows somthing my masters want. I havn't been in contact with them for a long time. Wait a seconds, you know about the El-Zayka!?"

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