Jae Onasi Posted August 28, 2006 Share Posted August 28, 2006 Nice job. I liked seeing the character development of Ashira and Obi-wan both, and I liked that it _didn't_ end in an expected kiss. The touch on the hands was just enough. The bad thing--it's done.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JediMaster12 Posted August 28, 2006 Author Share Posted August 28, 2006 Aww. Thanks Jae and you too igyman. I actually had some ideas on how to further develop their relationship but I think I am going to have to wait on that for a LONG time. The last scene, I was trying to get the feel of trust being rebuilt. Personally I liked how it turned out even though it is not one of my best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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