Diego Varen Posted May 31, 2006 Share Posted May 31, 2006 Spelling mistake. It's Ruusan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted May 31, 2006 Author Share Posted May 31, 2006 (This is not the going to be the chapter where the Tantive IV is attacked by a Star Destroyer) It has been years since the events of Naboo and Padme's children: Luke and Leia Skywalker, have reached the age of five. Meanwhile, in the netherworld of the Force, "Milady, you are the most powerful out of all of us" told Obi-Wan "You mus go and train my friend's children into becoming Jedi!" "But how?" asked a female Jedi "I'll only scare them, I can only walk the galaxy as a spirit seen by the Force sensitives." "As a living woman, seen by all you can be, if you pay a visit to the Valley of the Jedi." told Yoda. "Yes, Master Yoda." The female Jedi spirit made her way to the planet of Ruusan to find the Valley of the Jedi, when she did she was hit by a beam of the Force and she gained visibility. "Now to find a way out of here!" she told herself. She noticed a small mining colony and found a ship there, she took it and made her way past a gas giant called Yavin. She past three moons and stopped on the fourth. She landed and asked if she could have permission see Padme Skywalker, she was granted permission and was led to her quarters. "Miss Padme, my name is Bastila Shan, I am a Jedi of four-thousand years ago." Bastila said as she introduced herself. "Four-thousand years?" asked Padme surprised "I died and spent my time til now in the netherworld of the Force." explained Bastila. "Why you?" asked Padme. "Us Jedi agree that I would be the best choice to train your kids to be Jedi." told Bastila. "We know that you and former officials loyal to democracy are plotting a rebellion to stop all this bloodshed. Only your children can be the catalyst of stopping your husband and the rest of the Sith." "If they must be trained... can you train them close to home Master Jedi, please?" asked Padme. "Don't worry, I wasn't planning on taking them off Yavin IV at their first stages of their training." told Bastila. "I'll bring them out." said Padme. Minutes later, after Padme telling her children on who they were, Padme brought Luke and Leia out. "Luke, Leia, this is Bastila Shan, she is going to train you into being Jedi." Padme told her kids. "Hello, Bastila." greeted Luke and Leia. "Hi, children" Bastila greeted back, "I am going to train you into being Jedi, do you know what a Jedi is?" Bastila quizzed the two. "Keepers of the peace?" asked Luke. "Very good, Luke" congratulated Bastilla, "Clearly your mommy has told you a thing or two about the Jedi." "She has told us about daddy" said Leia. "Yes, it's sad isn't it" said Bastila feeling her sadness, "I lost one who I loved to the Darkside too..." "Where do we begin." asked Luke eager to begin his training. "We will start with the Jedi Code" answered Bastila, "Repeat after me, There is no Emotion." "There is no Emotion." "There is Peace." "There is Peace." "There is no Ignorance." "There is no Ignorance." "There is Knowledge." "There is Knowledge." "There is no Passion." "There is no Passion." "There is Serenity." "There is Serenity." "There is no Chaos." "There is no Chaos." "There is Harmony." "There is Harmony." "There is no Death." "There is no Death." "There is the Force." "There is the Force." "Good job kids." Bastila congratulated, "Always look to the code when you feel astray from your teachings." "Yes, Master" obeyed Luke and Leia. "Normally, that's what you would call me, but please call me Bastila." corrected Bastila. "Yes, Mas-uh Bastila." said Luke. "You got it Bastila!" said Leia. "Great, when do you want to begin?" asked Bastila. "Now-" "Now-" "Ha-ha-okay." laughed Bastila. Bastila and her two new students started to make their way outside to begin their training, until Padme stopped them for a moment. "Bastila?" "Yes?" "Thank You, for doing this" thanked Padme. "You're welcome." Bastila told, "I will take good care of them, for you." Padme nodded. As Bastila, Luke and Leia left the room, the whispered "Thank you." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted May 31, 2006 Author Share Posted May 31, 2006 Name: Bastila Shan AKA: N/A Age: Approximately 4000 Occupation: Jedi Master Family: Mother (Helena: Died of sickness), Father (Name Unknown: Killed by a Krayt Dragon) Master: Vandar Tokare, Darth Malak, Darth Revan (Until she saw the light and died as a noble Jedi) Apprentice: (You could say) Revan, Luke and Leia Homeworld: Talravin Weapons: Yellow Double-Saber, The Force Name: Luke Skywalker AKA: N/A Age: (At the moment) 5 Occupation: Jedi Student Family: Mother (Padme), Father (Anakin: Now Darth Vader), Sister (Leia) Master: Bastila Shan Apprentice: N/A Weapons: Just became a Jedi, so no Name: Leia Skywalker AKA: N/A Age: (At the moment) 5 Occupation: Jedi Student Family: Mother (Padme), Father (Anakin: Now Darth Vader), Sister (Leia) Master: Bastila Shan Apprentice: N/A Weapons: None Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 Nice chapter.And good,Bastila's in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 Good Chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted June 1, 2006 Share Posted June 1, 2006 good work, revanscool, keep it coming Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted June 1, 2006 Author Share Posted June 1, 2006 One year has passed, Anakin has watched 3 students very closely at his acadamy and has been training them as powerful generals aligned with the Dark Side to help command his army with him and his apprentice. "You must feel the power" told Anakin training his soon to be generals, "You must wait till your enemy is most vulnerable, then strike!" After dozens of minutes training, everyone put away their sabers, "Good, good, I can only have one apprentice and unfortunately for you three, I already have one, but you shall be my generals." explained Anakin. Anakin turned to a Kel-Dor and said "But you will also be Sith Lords, you, what is your name?" Anakin asked the Kel-Dor "Telvert Hadom" the Kel-Dor answered back. "You shall be known as Darth... Oorlog." Anakin told. "Thank you... my lord." Anakin turned to a male human, "What is your name?" "Zepnam Ledkor" he answered "You shall be known as Darth... Macht." Anakin told. Anakin turned to a young woman, "What is your name?" "Janice Wisurr" she told. "You shall be known as Darth Moordenaar" "Thank you... My... Master." she replied. Anakin looked at her suspiciously and then turned away. Anakin went into his throne room to meditate, then he was met by Revan. "I see you have trained some new generals Anakin." told Revan. "I can't watch over every planet all the time" Anakin answered. "Then I recommend that you bring the 501st to and a squad of Sith to Mustafar, I have senced a disturbance there." Revan told. "I'll bring my generals too, they can use this experience." said Anakin. "Good idea." replied Revan. Anakin called Oola and his generals to the throne room, "We are going to Mustafar, to check a possible rebellion." Anakin explained "From who?" asked Lord Oorlog "I don't know, we are going there to check if there is so I can sleep better at night." Anakin answered, "We will leave now!" "I'll prepare the army." said Oola. Oola prepared the 501st and a squad of Dark Jedi for the take off to Mustafar. While on the flagship Janice glared at Oola for the whole trip. She was plotting something against her. Upon the arrival, they weren't welcomed warmly when they landed on the planet, droids of the CIS were waiting for them guns blazing. Oola and Anakin's generals jumped off the ship destroying every droid they saw. "I'll scout ahead" told Janice. "You're not ready to go alone" told Oola, "I'm going with you." "Okay." replied Janice sounding rather pleased. Oola and Janice, scouted ahead and destroyed every droid in sight. Janice walked up behind Oola and threw a pair of hand bracers on her. "What are you doing?!" Oola asked in horror. Janice slapped her down and started kicking her. "The role of the apprentice is not for damned pieces of dirt like you!" Janice brought her out on the lava observatory balcony, killed a sniper there broke it apart and tied some wires around her neck and hung her from the balcony rail. Anakin walked out out of a room close to the lava observatory and noticed his apprentice hanging dead. Anakin fought the droids still focusing on the task at hand. He planted a beacon so his flagship will know where to bombard. Janice noticed a Geonoshan trying to escape, she took some rubble and crushed him like the bug he is. Anakin ordered everyone to get back on to the Executor. When everyone was safely on, they watched the fireworks. Anakin called over Janice. "Did you have anything to do with Oola's execution?" he asked "You shouldn't ask... I was the only one with her." Janice told. "Right... You are now my new apprentice, Janice." "Thank you, my master" P.S. Oorlog is Dutch for War P.S. Macht is Dutch for Power P.S. Moordenaar is Dutch for Assassin Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted June 2, 2006 Share Posted June 2, 2006 Nice one.I knew Janice was going to kill Oola,i just knew it.After all,the Sith are soo jealous! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 2, 2006 Share Posted June 2, 2006 Good Chapter, I bet the new Droids are being led by Gizor Delso. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted June 2, 2006 Author Share Posted June 2, 2006 I was planning to be led by a geonosian but I forgot the name and the reason why I made Janice was because I wanted to have someone similar to Tony Montana, the desire to be number 1 (if you've seen Scarface you'll know what I mean) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted June 4, 2006 Author Share Posted June 4, 2006 This will be a short chapter (Just so you know what to expect) "Master I think I know where the uprising will lead us too!" told Janice. "Geonosis!" answered Anakin. "You know?" asked Janice. "Of course... the production plants are on Geonosis." explained Anakin. "My master, shall I ready the fleet?" asked Janice. "No Janice." told Anakin, "We shall something new!" "Yes, My Lord" Janice said. Anakin made his way up to the bridge. "Pilot!" "Yes sir!" "Set a course to Geonosis." ordered Anakin. "Yes sir!" obeyed the pilot. Anakin made a hand gesture and he started raising the pilot off the ground. "How long have you been on the job?" asked Anakin. "gha-three-years" answered the pilot gagging. "Then you shouldn't be reminded to address me by My Lord or Lord Vader." told Anakin, "Are you clear on that?" The pilot's feet started to twitch, "Perfectly clear *choke* My Lord!" answered the pilot, "Please, *gag* let me *choke* go!" Anakin threw him up in the air, "fine." Anakin walked to the transmission room and made a transmission to his new "Spacestation". "General Veers?" "Yes Lord Vader?" "Set a course to Geonosis!" ordered Anakin. "Yes My Lord." said Veers. The Executor and the new "Station" made their way to Geonosis. "Fire at will Veers." told Anakin. Everyone, sit back, watch the fireworks. Everyone stared at Geonosis and within seconds, it was gone and a shockwave flew right past the Executor and the the "Station" that did Anakin's dirty work. "What will shall it be called My Lord" asked Janice. "... Death... Star!" answered Anakin. Meanwhile on Yavin IV, "Captain Antilles, what activity on Geonosis?" "Milady... it's gone!" "WHAT?!" Padme shouted. "I don't know what the hell just happened... these are the proper co-ordinates... right?" asked Captain Antilles. "Come home, Captain." "What has happened?" asked Bastila. "I think my husband knows how to break more than just lives now... *sniff*" answered Padmem, crying. Bastila patted Padme on the shoulder and took her leave. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 4, 2006 Share Posted June 4, 2006 Has Geonosis been destroyed? Good Chapter as always. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted June 4, 2006 Author Share Posted June 4, 2006 yep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted June 5, 2006 Share Posted June 5, 2006 Yeah,really nice chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RC-1162 Posted June 5, 2006 Share Posted June 5, 2006 good work, man. id like to see another planet destroyed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted June 5, 2006 Share Posted June 5, 2006 Where is the resttttttttttttttttt.CHAPTER 7 must be made I advise you add ferus olin from the last of the jedi long live star wars!!!!!! *Snip* connor, please do not advertise your fiction in another persons thread, please read our Forum Rules before posting again. I have deleted your advertising post. -RH Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted June 6, 2006 Author Share Posted June 6, 2006 good work, man. id like to see another planet destroyed In a couple chapters or more you will see one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted June 6, 2006 Share Posted June 6, 2006 In a couple chapters or more you will see one whens one of those chapters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted June 7, 2006 Author Share Posted June 7, 2006 I presume you've seen the original trilogy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HK-42 Posted June 7, 2006 Share Posted June 7, 2006 YEAH SOOO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted June 7, 2006 Author Share Posted June 7, 2006 connor: It's about 3 or 4 everyone: I won't be able to continue working on my fanfic yet because I'm working on a project for school, sorry. If i'm extremely lucky, I just might be able to get in posted 2morrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlAmMa Posted June 7, 2006 Share Posted June 7, 2006 Nice Story.... I think you should add in 'The Corrupt' armies from the Empire At War Expansion Pack l8er in the story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted June 7, 2006 Author Share Posted June 7, 2006 I've never actually played empire at war Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Jimmy Posted June 7, 2006 Author Share Posted June 7, 2006 It's been a year after the destruction of Geonosis and the Skywalker twins have been progressing admirably. Bastila called Luke and Leia out of their studies and into the courtyard. She claimed that she had one final test for them. Bastila was waiting for them outside. Where she was standing next to a small tunnel. "This will be the final stage of your training" Bastila told. "What will we be doing here?" asked Luke. "I have 3 saber crystals with me, I will ask you a few questions and you will go into that tunnel with one saber crystal that is most suited for you and build your lightsaber." she explained. "What?" asked Leia "It has to be harder than that." "It is" told Bastila "When you slide down that tunnel, you will have to go through a series of trials to get back up to the surface in a room where you will build your lightsaber. Got it?" "Got it!" they both said "But first you must answe some questions where you will get one of three saber crystals: Blue, Yellow or Green." "Are they supposed to symbolize something?" asked Luke. "Blue is the path of the Jedi Guardian, Yellow: The Jedi Sentinal, Green: The Jedi Consular." "Okay, a mother and child are attacked by a group of thugs and you two are the only people there." Bastila explained, "What will you do?" "I'll attack the thugs." told Luke. "I'll help them flee." told Leia. "Next, you are in combat with Darth Vader and there is a pause in the battle." explained Bastila, "What will you do then?" "Attack." told Luke. "Find a weakness." told Leia. "I suspected as much, next question, you come across a locked door and your objective lies on the other side." told Bastila, "What will you do?" "Try and pick the lock." told Leia. "Use my saber to make an opening." told Luke. "I'm beginning to see a pattern here, final question, you are both the head of a Jedi Acadamy on a contested world and the Sith are turning your students to the Dark Side. What will you do?" asked Bastila. "Hunt them down." told Luke. "Lure them into a trap." told Leia. "Very good, we're done. Luke: you would be most suited as a Jedi Guardian, and Leia: you would be most suited as a Jedi Sentinal." told Bastila, "But I only make the recomendations, you make the final decision on what you want to be." Luke and Leia consulted each other and made their decisions. "I want to be a Jedi Guardian." told Luke. "And I want to be a Jedi Sentinal." added Leia. "Here are your crystals." told Bastila giving Luke a blue crystal, and giving Leia a Yellow crystal. The Skywalker twins walked right up to the entrance with their crystals in hand. "Good luck" told Bastila. "Hopefully you won't need it." The twins jumped into the tunnel and slid down to the bottom. Where they saw before them a large room, but they could only go to one area, they followed that hallway and only found a small room with a cracked wall. Luke thought about the situation for a bit and used Force Push on the wall. "Good thinking." congratulated Leia. Luke blew his hand as if he was blowing the smoke out of a DL-44 blaster pistol. They followed another hallway which led them to another room except with a locked door and a lever which was impossible to get to. Leia quickly used the Force to pull the lever towards them to open the door. "Good job' congratulated Luke. Leia made a brief smile. They followed another hallway which seemed to lead to a dead end. Luke looked up and found a ledge he could jump to. "Time to jump sis." told Luke. "What?" asked Leia. Luke made an extremely high jump and made it up on to the ledge safely. "NEXT TIME TRY LOOKING!" yelled Luke. Leia quickly jumped up to rejoin with him. "This place has seen better days, definately." told Leia. "Yeah, I assume they had stairs once." added Luke. The twins ran down an open hallway where Bastila was waiting for them. "Finally, an open door." told Luke. But as the twins got close, the door closed. "No-no" said Luke in dismay. Leia notice a switch on the ground and the door reopened. She ran to get outside the door. When the door started to close, Leia ran faster, all she saw was a slow door. Luke walked back to the switch and started running to the door. Luke entered the same state Leia was in and got through the door. "Great job you two." congratulated Bastila, "I have two lightsabers with no crystals in them waiting for you two to put them in." Luke and Leia walked over to their tables, no questions asked and started building their weapons. When they finished, they turned them on and they were working perfectly. "Well done." congratulated Bastila, "You have completed your apprenticeship, and are now Padawans! I am honoured to call the both of you: Jedi." "Thank you" the twins answered. "Now when the time comes, you will be called to help the Alliance in their struggle against The Empire." Bastila explained,"There should be a change in your wardrobe back in your quarters." The twins were sent back to their rooms and found that their regular clothes have been replaced with Padawan Robes. They were now Jedi, ready to help the galaxy whenever necessary. Stay tuned for Chapter 8: The Death Star plans. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted June 8, 2006 Share Posted June 8, 2006 Good Trials. I always imagined Leia to be a Jedi Consular. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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