Diego Varen Posted December 15, 2006 Author Share Posted December 15, 2006 Good Chapter CSI and I trust you in writing this Fic. Will Anakin help you with writing this as well? Oh and since I wasn't in the RP half of the time, feel free to make some scenes of Nauk/Grauk if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 19, 2006 Share Posted December 19, 2006 [AT LAST! WE CAN POST! Here it goes...another chapter, not very long, but hope you guys enjoy. @Pottsie: I don't know if Anakin will help writing this fic, but I think so...] Chapter 2 Outside Jedi Academy on Yavin IV, everything looked so peaceful. The gizkas were roaming around, the trees were shaking gently, which seemed to greet someone. Inside the hall of Jedi Academy, a brown figure was sitting on the ground, meditating. He saw many images: Domination of Darth Revan, a huge Sith Armada, Nar Shaddaa, and lots of shattered images. He was deeply troubled and frowned: Dark side prevailed? Not far from the gate, a shuttle landed on the courtyard. With a hiss noise, the loading ramp opened. Darth Revan, in his trademark robe, walked down the loading ramp. He looked around. His dark aura spread and sent waves of decaying around him. The trees decayed, and the leaves turned yellow, fell down from the barks. The Gizkas also decayed, they still lived, but their shapes were deformed. When he walked to the stairs to the gate of the Jedi Temple on Yavin IV, he felt a very strong light aura had clashed with his dark aura. He smiled. Pathetic. Revan smiled under his mask and climbed up the stair. To his surprise, the light aura even negated his dark aura’s effect, it even resurrected the dead plants, healing the deformed gizkas… When Revan stood at the gate to the hall of Jedi Temple, “Why do you come here, Darth Revan?” A firm sound echoed through the whole hall. “Darth Nihilus!” Darth Revan laughed, but to us, it was just like wind is howling. Emptiness and decay corrupted Darth Revan’s sound. “Darth Revan.” The one who sat on the ground, stood up, but kept his eyes closed, “It’s been a long time.” “Too long. Hmph. You’ve even become a Jedi. A weak, pathetic Jedi.” He sneered. I was a former Sith Lord, so don’t imagine that your old school trick would work on me. Darth Nihilus replied calmly: “First of all, I’m not Darth Nihilus. No more. My name is CSI.” After a pause, CSI continued: “And I even know why you are here. To kill me, right? Then let’s see if you can kill me or not.” “So be it, Jedi.” Revan used telekinesis to ignite his red lightsaber. He posed an Ataru stance. “Lightsaber, huh? A tool for Jedi, a weapon for Sith.” CSI also used his impressive telekinesis skill to let his two curved lightsaber hilts spinning around his body, then held and ignited them. Two silver blades came out. “It’s nice to have you again, my old friends,” He whispered into his lightsabers. “What are you waiting for?” He turned to Darth Revan. Revan roared: “You will die, Jedi!” and jumped in and slied at CSI’s head. CSI smiled and crossed his lightsabers to encounter Darth Revan’s heavy blow to form a saber lock. “10 years…You’re still as impressive as you were.” “SHUT UP!” Darth Revan shouted and broke the saber lock, and turned the lightsaber to make a wide slash. To his surprise, CSI’s body had vanished from a blur. “What?” He was very surprised. Soon, he felt his shoulder being grabbed a hold and heard all too familiar lightsaber humming in front of his neck. CSI’s silver blade appeared in front of Revan’s neck. “Wondering how I did that? Surrender, and I won’t kill you,” His ear nerve had transmitted CSI’s cool, and calm voice. “What the…” Darth Revan shouted and casted a Force Push on CSI. CSI was being pushed against the wall. Then he used Force Jump and prepared to cast a deadly blow to CSI. CSI deactivated his left hand lightsaber and used his right hand lightsaber to block the deadly blow. The lightsabers clashed together emitted some energy sparks. “Heh, heh. Well, that’s a very ancient Jedi technique, called Force Teleport, a.k.a. Flash Step. It allows user to move faster than normal eyes can follow, so that one appears to teleport.” After a pause, he asked Revan briefly: “Well, Darth Revan, why, why, why? Why did you choose the dark side?” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin Skywalker Posted December 19, 2006 Share Posted December 19, 2006 [AT LAST! WE CAN POST! Here it goes...another chapter, not very long, but hope you guys enjoy. @Pottsie: I don't know if Anakin will help writing this fic, but I think so... I am sorry, I can not work on it CSI... btw we are no longer rivals... maybe sparring rivals, but not neck to neck rivals.... anyway, I can't work on it, because I am working on the mod's (that both of ya'll know about) dialogues, I am not going to release it until I finish those, also, PM me and help me with the dialogues, I don't know what you two would say... Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 19, 2006 Author Share Posted December 19, 2006 Another good Chapter CSI. It's nice to be back on LF, after the terrible problem with the Forums. Anyway, I'm sure you can continue this Fic for yourself and call it yours. Looking foward to more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted December 19, 2006 Share Posted December 19, 2006 Two good chapters man, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabish Bini Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 YAY! This fic is continuing. Nice chapters CSI. Looking forward to more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 @Pottsie: Nope. I won't call it mine because you started this fic...So I'll write, Originated from Pottsie and Anakin Skywalker. Written by Pottsie and CSI: Nihilus... @AkumaSF: It's nice you like it. Thank you for compliment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rabish Bini Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 Hey, anytime. I just say what I think. When will the next chapter come out? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 That, is a very good question. I don't know...Hopefully tomorrow... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 20, 2006 Share Posted December 20, 2006 Chapter 3 “The reason I fell to the Dark side is none of your business…” Darth Revan growled, “For you, Jedi scum, are no match to the power I possess!” CSI walked around and around. His blue eyes looked at Darth Revan. “Power? Power is useless. Why do I need power? Tell you what, winning the pointless duel is nothing to me.” “DIE, Jedi scum!” Darth Revan casted Force Immunity full of hatred then he jumped toward CSI, “THIS TIME I WILL NOT MISS!” His shout is enough to short out a droid’s auditory sensor. CSI closed his eyes and turned off his lightsaber. The Light aura appeared again and formed a twirl. Calm your mind, Exile’s words echoed through his brain, calm your mind, CSI, cast your flowing emotion away, and focus on the Force. Find his weakness, and try to turn him back. He casted his emotions away and focused on the Light side of the Force. Then he opened his eyes, everything is greatly slowed down—CSI can see Darth Revan was delivering the deadly bow by super slow motion. Smiling, he used Juyo stance and shot out his lightsaber toward Darth Revan. “What the…” Revan’s eyes widened to see the white blur shot toward him. Narrowing his eyes, he stopped the blade and deflected it away from him. The lightsaber shut off, and hovered in the sky. “How dare you!” Revan snarled and white lightning shot out from his finger toward CSI. CSI ignited his left hand lightsaber it caught the lightning and reflected the lightning away. He didn’t deflect the lightning towards to Darth Revan, because CSI hated fighting and killing. Darth Revan smiled evilly and increased the power of Force Lightning. Suddenly, the lightning breached the lightsaber and began to crawl onto CSI's body. “Aaaaarrrrrgggghhhhhh…” CSI shouted in pain as the lightning was all over CSI. He smiled in satisfaction. The joy of killing somebody never got so good. CSI screamed like hell. He even forgot to use Flash Step. Darth Revan laughed maniacally and shot out Force lightning at me. The lightning was burning CSI’s skin. The smell of burnt skin filled the hall. “Ha ha ha ha…” His maniac laughter filled in the room. Closing his eyes, CSI wondered: “Am I done here?” “No…you’re not done. You can’t die here.” A sound echoed through CSI’s ear. “Who are you?” CSI tried to “see”. “The Exile. Get up, my friend. You can’t die here.” “I think I told you that winning and losing is not important to me.” CSI said back. “Right, but remember, you need to survive, because the Jedi Order is in peril.” Damn. How come I forgot that. I cursed myself. “Ahhhhh……” I regained consciousness and teleported away from Darth Revan’s dread Force Lightning. Darth Revan was very surprised that CSI can even regain consciousness after such powerful Force Power. Later, he walked over to the spot to where CSI was: I will find you, and turn you to the Dark side, you will be my apprentice eventually!: He whispered allowing the Force to carry my voice to his skull. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 21, 2006 Author Share Posted December 21, 2006 Another good Chapter CSI. I hope you haven't copied and pasted from the RP. I'm just kidding, looking foward to more CSI. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted December 21, 2006 Share Posted December 21, 2006 I agree with Pottsie. This fic seems to be getting greater and greater. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 21, 2006 Share Posted December 21, 2006 Another good Chapter CSI. I hope you haven't copied and pasted from the RP. I'm just kidding, looking foward to more CSI. No, Pottsie. This fic is based on RP, and I found the RP should be enriched to change it into fic. Throughout the fic, you can find lots of content is not on the RP, like the flashback of Darth Nihilus's redemption, Darth Revan overpowered the deflection of lightsaber, etc...They're not on the RP. @Jason: Thank you for your compliment, and It's nice you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 Chapter 4 “That’s painful…” CSI sat in the darkest corner, crossed his legs, and began meditating. That often helped him a lot when his mind was flying around. The light aura expanded again. CSI calmed his flowing emotion down, and casted Master Heal. Sometimes Force can do amazing things, watching my wounds being healed so fast, CSI smiled. ::I won’t let you down, my old Jedi Masters and friends. I won’t let Jedi Order to be destroyed so fast!:: Suddenly, Darth Revan’s wicked speech crawled into my eardrum. ::I will FIND you,:: CSI can feel the darkness inside the speech, ::and TURN you into DARKSIDE! You will BE MY APPRENTICE eventually!:: CSI can feel the hatred and anger. Too deep, but redeemable. CSI thought. Smiled in confidence that he would redeem Revan into Light side, CSI stood up. ::I will find you! You cannot hide from me! My connection to the Force is more powerful than you ever know!:: Darth Revan continuously sent his jeer through the Force. Hmph. That old school trick no longer works on me. CSI thought and began counting Pazzaak Card in his head. With a Flash Step, CSI stood in front of Darth Revan: “Why do you look for me when you can see me? Are you blind?” CSI joked, ignited his silver lightsaber and posed an Ataru stance. “If you’re powerful, why don’t you strike me down?” “Fine, you can think I’m blind, but becoming my apprentice and the power of the Dark side will be your ally!” Darth Revan retracted his lightsaber, held out his hand, and “kindly” offered a chance. Suddenly a chill filled through CSI’s spine. That guy is turning me down! He wants to make me his apprentice! “No,” CSI retracted his lightsaber, too, and answered calmly, “I’m sorry, I let you down. The answer is no.” CSI thought for a while, looking like he was considering the idea, “It’s a very tempting idea, my friend, but sorry—Offer denied.” “Then you will suffer, Jedi!” Darth Revan used Force Lightning towards CSI. CSI held out his palm, and absorbed the lightning energy. It formed a barrier on the palm and contaminated the lightning energy from Darth Revan. It formed like a energy ball. Darth Revan was surprised to see CSI could doing this. He stopped the lightning. Suddenly, CSI released the energy ball hovering on his palm. The lightning returned, but it was devastating Darth Revan’s body. Now it was Darth Revan’s turn to scream. CSI stopped the lightning. Darth Revan looked irritated: “If I can’t win you on Force powers, then let’s decide the superiority on lightsaber duels,” Darth Revan ignited his lightsaber and a red blade came out. He snarled and charged toward CSI. This time CSI jumped up, ignited his lightsaber, and landed harmlessly behind Darth Revan. With a shout, CSI gained his power and made a back flip toward the Darth Revan. Landing in front of Revan, he then flipped three times in the sky, and the lightsaber blade formed a light circle around CSI. “Surprised that I can use Ataru, huh? I may look like a Jedi Master, but I have mastered all lightsaber combat forms—especially Niman / Jar’Kai.” CSI smiled. Suddenly, Darth Revan casted a Stasis Field. CSI didn’t response fast enough, and was caught in the Stasis. Damn, CSI thought as he fell to the ground, I’m too careless! Darth Revan jumped up and used Force Push to open a pit and CSI’s stasis image fell right into it. Then CSI dropped on a table below the pit. With “click” sounds, the locks locked CSI’s arms and legs. Oh, no…How could I fell in such a dumb trap? CSI cursed himself. Darth Revan jumped down into the pit and casted Force Lightning (Not strong) into CSI’s body…He can see the lightning were piercing, burning, and wounding his body. Blood began to flow out and blossomed on CSI’s Jedi Master Robe. “Become my apprentice CSI! Forget helping weak people, kill them instead. I can kill you, but I want you to be alive long enough to show you the True Power of the Darkness!” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 22, 2006 Author Share Posted December 22, 2006 Thanks for telling me CSI. Good Chapter as always. You're better at writing this type of Fic, more than me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 Good chapter CSI, nothing much to say except maybe you're spending too much time on this small duel i believe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 22, 2006 Share Posted December 22, 2006 Good chapter CSI, nothing much to say except maybe you're spending too much time on this small duel i believe. Like I said before,I have to enrich the parts in the RP in order to make it into a story...Right? Like the duel, if I simply copy and paste, then this fic su**$. So I decided to focus on first dueling and torments, since there will be no final dueling. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 24, 2006 Share Posted December 24, 2006 Chapter 5 Lying on the table, CSI said nothing. He could see Darth Revan was walking around and around him, hands below chin indicated Darth Revan was thinking. Through the Force, CSI can clearly hear what Darth Revan was thinking: “How can I turn him down? Ah…Yes…” Stealthy, CSI casted Force Armor. The invisible armor appeared around CSI’s body. Suddenly, Darth Revan seemed to have noticed something, and turned to CSI and pushed more Lightning into him, only this time making it stronger. Thanks to Force Armor, I suffered less. CSI thought. He tried hard to control his emotion by enchanting the Jedi Code: “There is no emotion, there is peace…” Darth Revan bent down toward CSI and whispered into his ear: “I sense your emotion, Jedi scum! You were once the Dark Lord of Sith who served with my retarded master Darth Traya…Follow me and the Dark Lords will rule the galaxy!” Then he laughed maniacally like Malak’s laughter. CSI shook his head and rolled his eyes: “Rule the galaxy? Hmph. I have no interest in that. I know I was Darth Nihilus, but this time, Darth Traya won’t affect on me now.” Moved his index finger to renew his Force Armor, “Besides, why don’t you give me a good sleep already?” Now Darth Revan was angry. CSI sensed his anger flowed throughout his body. His hatred fueled the Force Lightning and made it more powerful. CSI screamed: “Aaaarrrrghhhhh!” Even with protection of Force Armor, CSI still felt his skin was charred by the Lightning. “You are not getting any rest until you are MY apprentice! Darth Nihilus WILL REBORN!” Darth Revan raised his spare hand into the sky, and made a grab pose as if he wanted to dominate all the galaxy. Suddenly, CSI decided to not let Darth Revan’s evil plan succeed. His willpower even increased dramatically and answered calmly: “Your apprentice?” I replied despite of the pain, as the Lightning was still charring my body, “Sorry, I already had a master. Somewhere. Besides, why don’t you simply kill me instead of wasting your valuable Force Power?” “No, no, no. You’re mistaken.” Darth Revan stopped the Force Lightning, and crossed his arms in front of his torso, “Your power was never about the Sith when you were with us…you were just hungry for death…Become my apprentice, and I can teach you more than that stupid Darth Traya could, and become one of the most powerful Sith!” “Man…I don’t even want to remark on your wrong remark about my former ability. Darth Nihilus was hunger for power, not dead!” CSI laughed at Darth Revan for his stupid mistake. Frustrated and angered, Darth Revan snarled and shifted from Force Lightning to Force Storm: “You will pay for this, for angering me, you Jedi fool!” CSI screamed like hell. The pain increased. He felt his blood was running out again. This time the blood was running out freely. I bit my teeth tight and squeezed words out of my teeth: “Did I say my master was Darth Traya? Hmph. Darth Traya is just a typical Sith Lord. Manipulative, selfish. You think Sith are strong because Sith made other afraid of them. That’s why. The ultimate strong is love, to spread peace among others. Ah…Never mind, I know you will never change your original idea, although I feel there is still some good in you…” “BECOME MY APPRENTICE!” Darth Revan yelled like thunder, “AND ALL THESE POWERS CAN BE YOURS!” He used Force Storm again, but this time it was stronger, “You’re foolish for angering me and your stubbornness for not turning! Do you remember the thrill you had as a Dark Lord? I can return that feeling…to teach you to feed on other Force Sensitives, to destroy the Republic!” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 24, 2006 Author Share Posted December 24, 2006 Good Chapter, as always, even if it was short. There was two mistakes I noticed in this quote. It's bolded for you. Below are the corrections. Chapter 5 Laying on the table, CSI said nothing. He can see that Darth Revan was walking around and around him, hands below chin indicated Darth Revan was thinking. Lying - Laying Can - Could Looking foward to more as always. People lie down or are said to be lying down. You lay things down. Since CSI is a person, the correct way to write it is "Lying on the table, CSI said nothing." English minutia for today.... --Jae Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 24, 2006 Share Posted December 24, 2006 That, is what I'm talking about... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jason Skywalker Posted December 24, 2006 Share Posted December 24, 2006 Yes, good chapter, keep it up CSI. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 Chapter 6 “Awww…” I twisted my face to indicate the deafening loud noise, and felt the voice was destroying my eardrum, “Quiet down a little bit! I’m not deaf! So what? I’m just not as passionate as you. Who said I want to be strong? Oh, I forgot you have a short-term memory loss. Let me refresh your memory: I told you winning or losing is not important to me. I’m only interested on how to help others, how to spread love and peace, and how to stop insane ones like you.” Darth Revan sighed. He left the table and walked around and around the table and said in his far-away voice: “CSI, why are you so stubborn? You will become my apprentice even if I have to kill you and then bring you back to life as a Dark Lord!” Then his hands reached out like a claw, and white lightning climbed on CSI’s body. CSI can tolerate this pain no more. He smiled and said calmly to Darth Revan: “Then kill me. Let me tell you something. There is no such Force Power to reincarnate other life beings! Think about it: if we have that kind of Force Power, we will gain countless Jedi. Besides, even if you have that Force Power, why don’t you revive other Sith Lords such as Naga Sadow, Darth Bandon, Lord Kaan, Freedon Nadd, Ajunta Pall, Ludo Kressh and other Sith Lords? Oh, knock it off!” Darth Revan felt surprised. He never thought that this Jedi was so persistent. “Listen,” He bent down and whispered into CSI’s ear, “I can’t revive them because of their tremendous power! But you, young Jedi, can be such a Sith Lord.” Then he stood up and released his deadly lightning bolts at me again, “I sense your anger in your heart…You want to kill me!” “Oh, I got the picture. And you forgot ‘again’. Therefore I will never bow before you and turn to Sith Lord. Kill you? Am I insane? No, I’m not insane enough to kill because I don’t know what I benefit of killing you? By the way, pain is just weak leaving the body. Besides, aren’t you Sith hunger of power?” CSI twisted his face because of the pain. “HA! Now you admit it! You and the Jedi are weak!” Darth Revan held his fist together, and waved it on CSI’s face and said triumphantly, “The Sith feel no pain after they are masters! Our apprentices do, even a Jedi Master feels pain! Yes, but without your Power Siphoning ability, we can’t get any more power from them! And now my patience had reached its limit…” Then Darth Revan used Force Scream on CSI…”TURN…TO…THE…DARK…SIDE!” CSI groaned a little and tried hard to resist the effect of Force Scream. His eyes began to blur. “Oh, that. Huh.” CSI began to murmur in such a quiet sound that Darth Revan had to focus on the sound so hard that he can hear them: “You contrasted us, jeered us weak, and that made you strong? Man…Come on, that’s laughable! And why don’t you just struck your lightsaber down on me and everything is over?” After his last word, CSI smiled. Especially CSI can see his many former friends with the Force. Suddenly I felt a cold chill running up my spine. I can sense his anger was running, his hatred was gaining his power…With a shout, Darth Revan’s palm shot out flames and hit CSI’s face. Behind his mask, his eyes were gleaming a golden red, “I gave you a chance, Jedi, Now you will SUFFER!” *Boom! [The sound with FX effect really rocks!—George Lucas]* The smog filled in the room. What on Coruscant is that power? CSI closed his eyes and can feel flames burning on his face. Is it over? CSI wondered. “No, Jedi! It’s not over!” CSI’s ear was boomed by Darth Revan’s thunderous voice. Clearly he read CSI’s facial expression through the flames, “The Dark Side is stronger…And I told you, Jedi…Join the Dark Side or face your doom!” Darth Revan raised his hands again and casted Flame Strike, fire came out of Darth Revan’s hand and kept growing stronger… CSI attempted to resist the power. But the power was too strong! The more he resisted the more angry Darth Revan got and the more the power grew. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anakin Skywalker Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 Good chapter, CSI Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Diego Varen Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 Good chapter, CSI Agreed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CSI Posted December 28, 2006 Share Posted December 28, 2006 Chapter 7 “Arrrrk…” CSI screamed as the flame was burning the body. Suddenly, he heard a hollow sound, which echoes inside his skull: “Turn to the Dark side…Why are you so persistent?” “Go to hell.” CSI replied to the echo. “Good. You passed the test. Now you will learn a new technique, Force Restore. It’s just a master version of Healing, and the healing speed is so fast that it will heal all wounds almost instantly.” The hollow sound again. CSI said nothing, but smiled. Darth Revan got confused. His glowing red eye saw CSI smiling. He thought: “What happened? Why can he smile? Why?” “Hmph. Force Flame Strike, right?” CSI closed his eyes, and showed an bright aura of peace. “Why don’t you give me more? Since nobody is here to help me, why don’t you simply kill me, right here, right now?” Slowly re-opened his eyes which began to glow very brightly, he shouted: “Force Restore!” A blue mist covered his whole body. Darth Revan’s mouth opened wide in astonishment, and backed a few steps. He used Force Sight to look through the mist, and saw his body was being healed in amazing speed, the mist was closing all burn marks, scars, and other wounds. CSI was back…The Force brought him back once more. That pissed Darth Revan’s off…Darth Revan growled and snarled: “Ahhh!! Jedi, you will SUFFER!” And Flame Strike grew so strong that it was like molten lava on Mustafar…The flame was consuming his Jedi Robe, which was slowly turning black and revealing armors beneath it. “I warned you, Jedi, now I’m going to ask you one last time…Will you become my apprentice, or will you suffer a fate worse than death?” Fatigued, CSI lie on bed and gasped for air. He used the Force to transmit his persistence on Light Side: ::Come on, bring it on. What else? I even nearly died once, remember? Bring it on and give me a quick death so I am immortal!” Darth Revan thought: That persistent Jedi is a royal pain in the butt. But I can bring him to Star Forge and turn him! He cleaned his throat and shouted: “Then it is time that you go into Limbo, I’m going to take you back to the Star Forge!” The sound is so loud that it can short out droid’s auditory receptor. With a shout, more flames and molten lava poured onto CSI. CSI felt the pain was back. The smog filled in the room and Darth Revan’s sight was slowly blurred. He only can hear CSI’s scream… Suddenly, Darth Revan heard a familiar sound “Hello?”. It was behind him! Darth Revan jumped around and ignited his lightsaber in lightning speed and saw a ghost figure stood there. When the smog lightened, he recognized it was CSI. CSI continued with his sarcastic tone: “What are you doing, my friend? Since when interrogation became popular among the Sith?” “What the…” Darth Revan shout in astonishment and held out his left arm and attempted to Force Choke CSI. But CSI was faster than him and casted a Force Immunity on himself hence successfully resisted the Force Power, “How did you escape? I will get you!” CSI nearly wet his pants and casted Master Speed and Force Jumped out of the pit. But more importantly, from Darth Revan. CSI thought: I obviously don’t want that dreaded interrogation again! ::Run! Nihilus, run! I will get you and you will become my apprentice or you will die!:: After Force Jumped out of the pit, Darth Revan used Force to transmit his evil word to CSI, who was running in front of him. Suddenly, CSI stopped at the big gate. “Why do you stop?” Darth Revan ignited his lightsaber and approached CSI evilly. CSI neither replied nor show panic. With a yell, Darth Revan stroke his lightsaber down onto CSI’s abdomen with his full strength, which was fueled by anger and hatred. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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