Diego Varen Posted May 12, 2007 Share Posted May 12, 2007 Two chapters in a row. Chapter Eight was the better chapter for me and I only noticed only one typo, which was dorr (it should be door) in Chapter Eight. I'm looking foward to what Jaden and Rueben will do with Shawn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darth Kalverys Posted May 13, 2007 Author Share Posted May 13, 2007 Yeah, that was my bad... I spelled it right on the paper, but then my fingers got ahead of me when I was typing it... I fixed it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Catto Posted May 13, 2007 Share Posted May 13, 2007 Great story you have got going on here, Rueben! A dark side Luke ... very interesting concept, and so far ... a very well done construction. Very much looking forward to the next installment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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